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March 2008 , Florida

Fade in :

INT. - Train - Day

- Ray about 30 years old

- Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache

- Have sunglasses

- Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside him on a seat .. EXT. - Railway station – Day

          - Train stops   
          - Ray gets out from the train curries a bag 
          - His eyes move in everywhere 
          - Walks out among the crowd 
          - Two women behind him 

- Whispering, while he can hear them .


Woman ( l )

How handsome that man !

He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.

Woman ( 2 )

Captain !

His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors

 INT.        - Ray's car              - Night 

- Black Ford Car 4x4

- A street corner

- Street is calm has little moving .

- Ray inside the car without mustache

- Smoking a cigarette .

- Wears black T. shirt & jeans

- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....

- Tony appears

- Tony is about 32 years old.

- Opening the door and sits beside him

- Lighting a cigarette

Tony

       Everything is ok ? 

Ray

       Florida …. a wonder state ! 
       Everything is ok 

Tony

       When did you decide to execute the first mission? 

Ray

Saturday at night

Tony

After 3 days !!

Ray

       This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray 

Tony

       I thought you shall kill him in his office 


Ray


I found this is a very difficult


Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .

I planned for everything accurately

Tony

You're skillful in planning !

Ray

This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....

Tony

      I hope the mission won't be exceeded ! 

Ray

Won't exceed 

Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,

I become more ardent to kill them .

Especially the bold one

Tony

       That bold shall leave the life next Saturday 

Dissolve

Ext. – Robin's house - Night

- It consists of 4 floors

- House is very luxury

- A green area and plenty of trees

- Ray's car is far in the backside .

INT. - Robin's car - Night

- Mercedes car

- Robin is about 50 years old

- Bold, very Rich....

- Seating in the back seat

- His private guards in another car back him

- Driver drives the car

INT. Robin's house -an office room -Night

- Office room is rather dark

- Few light coming from out.

- Ray inside the office room

- Carrying a guns

- Looks from the window

- Getting out from the room careful

       INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night                

- Ray is hiding behind a column

- Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.

- Gets attention …….. (Steady position to shoot. )

Ext. - Robin's house - Night

- Robin arrives

- Getting out from the car

- He walks to the house entrance

- Four guards around him

- Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards

 Int. - Robin's house -  Reception - Night  

- Light turns on

- Robin enters to the office room with two guards

- Ray nears from the window

- Looks

- Seeing two guards outside

- Nears from the office room


- Pushing the door by his foot

- Ray shots a guard in his stomach.

- Rushing into the office room

INT. - Robin's house - an office room

- Ray shoots Robin's head

- With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury

- The guard shoots Ray

- Protecting himself through the door against shots

- Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor

- The guard is still alive beside the door

- Tries to get his gun

- Ray shots him while running, injuring his head

- Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once

- Ray runs towards the house door

- A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside

- Ray runs to out

Ext. - Robin's House - Night

- A guard shoots

- Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him

- Steady to shoot

- Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand

- Runs

- Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder

- Drives his car with high speed

INT. - Ray's car - Night

- Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury

- He tries to overcome the pain

Ext. - Private hospital - Night

- Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance

Int. - Hospital – corridor

- A group of nurses

Ray

       Where the Emergency room? 

A nurse

       The third room in the corridor end at right 

A nurse

       What happened to you? 

Ray

       Nothing serious 

Int. - Emergency Room

- Ray enters

- Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed

- A nurse enters

The nurse

       There's a child injured in his foot 
        Calls Doctor Steve? 

The doctor

Quickly

- She gets out

- Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid

The doctor

       Your wound isn't easy 
       Is this shoot!  Isn't it? 

Ray

Yes

The doctor

How you could bear such hard pain?

       Little people can bear pain such as you . 
       Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger. 
       The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!! 
       The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound 
       Are you policeman? 
       Or someone shoot you? 

Ray

- From Florida police

- The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse

- A child has about nine years, crying

The nurse

       Bring the child here in the bed 

- The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain

- Doctor Steve enters with two nurses

- Begin to make the necessary aid for the child

- Grandmother cries

The nurse

Be quite.. quite

       He shall be fine 

Doctor Steve

       Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen 

- the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child

- But Ray can see the child's face

The doctor

       Did you follow a criminal? 

Ray

       An murderer criminal 

The doctor

       This is too much cost paid by policemen 

Ray

       That is right 

The doctor

       You offer several sacrifices for us 

(To the nurse) what about the child.. ?

The nurse

       The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot . 

Ray

       This is a very painful for a child in such age 

The doctor

       Do you feel better now? 

Ray

       Rather 

The doctor

       Check his pressure 
       Currently we don't need more that this 
       Some analgesic for pain after surgery. 

Ray

Thank you

The doctor

       Surely your pressure is lower 
       You bleed too much 

The nurse

       His blood pressure is really lower 

The doctor

       Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours 
       But the wound has been cleaned 

- Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain

The doctor

       You should be in a rest today 

- Ray tries to get up

- Feels pain

The doctor

       To where? 

Ray

       I can't stay in the hospital 
       Thanks, anyway 

The doctor

Why?

       Your wound needs some care 
       Why you insist to go now? 

Ray

       I must go now 
       Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again 

- Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child

Ray ( to doctor Steve )

       What about his wound ? 

Doctor Steve

       He shall improve at anyway 

Ray

       Are you his grandmother? 

The grandmother

       Yes 

Ray

       What's his name? 

The grandmother

       Anthony 

Ray

       A handsome and charm boy 

Doctor Steve

Don't worry

He shall be recovered

This shall take times.....

The grandmother

       How long? 

Doctor Steve

       About 10 days, maybe rather more 

The grandmother

       Should we come to hospital for another time? 

Doctor Steve

       No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so..... 

The grandmother

       Thank you 

- Anthony crying but little

- Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other

Ray

       Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony? 

The grandmother

       Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532 

The doctor

       I didn't know your name yet. 

Ray

       I'm Ray 

The doctor

       I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve. 


- Ray looks to Anthony


Ray

Thank you.

- Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.

Int. - Ray's apartment - Night

A luxury apartment

        Ray is setting, drinks 
       - Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne . 
       - A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall 
       - Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money 
       - Looks to the other man's photo 
       - Puts the cup of Brandy 
       - Picks the gun up 
       - Aiming the gun towards the man's photo 

Ray

       Now is your turn 
       Did you prepare your coffin? 
       Ray's shot shall penetrate your head 
       Your life becomes just little days. 
       Your face is ugly! 
    Makes me furious like your dead friend! 
 Ext.         - Anthony's house - Day 

- Ray arrives in his car

- Without wound bandage

 Int.   - Anthony's Apartment - Day 

- Knocking the door

- The grandmother opens

The grandmother

       Welcome Mr. . Ray 

Ray

       Good morning 

The grandmother

       Please come in 

- He enters

Ray

       How is my friend Anthony now? 

The grandmother

       He's sleeping since two hours 
       Took analgesic then slept at once. 

Ray

       A boy full of vital and joy! 

The grandmother

       Would you like seeing him? 

Ray

       I come exactly for this purpose 

The grandmother

       With pleasure 

- To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen

- Opening the door

- Ray enters


Int. - Anthony's bedroom - Day

- Looks to the innocent child's face

- Gets out then gently closing the door

Int. - Hall

Ray

       What about the pain? 

The grandmother

       Every day improves than before . 
       It was unforgettable day! 

I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.

      When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood 
       I wept also, Maybe I would faint 

Ray

       Anthony looks like me when I was his age 

The grandmother

       Really?!! 
       Are you recovered from your injury? 

Ray

         Rather 
       Are you live with Anthony alone? 

The grandmother

 His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me 
       I don't know what I can say to them when ask me! 


Ray

       Don't tell them anything. 
       Don't make them worry. 

The grandmother

       There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them 


       My temper doesn’t bear anymore! 
       I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years. 

- Anthony's voice from his bedroom

Anthony

       Grandma..      grandma 

- Ray with the grandmother to the room

Int. - Anthony's bedroom

Anthony

       Ray!... My friend.. 

Ray

       My friend Anthony 

Anthony

       I'm very glad to see you 

Ray

       Do you feel any pain right now? 

Anthony

       Pain hurts me from time to another 
       But it isn't hard 

Anthony

       And you? 
       Is your shoulder hurts you? 

Ray

       Sometime 
       Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage 

Anthony

       I will not do it again 

But you didn't tell me?

Ray

       Tell you what? 

Anthony

       How your shoulder injured? 

Ray

       Is this important? 

Anthony

       I'd like to know 

Ray

       One of the murderer criminal shoot me 

Anthony

       Why? 



Ray

 I……. 

-The grandmother interrupt Ray

The grandmother

       Do feel hungry Anthony? 

Anthony

No, no

       I don't feel hungry now 
       I want to drink water 
       - Ray pouring him a glass of water 
       - Grandmother looks to her watch 

The grandmother

       After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication 
       Its time after half an hour 

Ray

       Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age 

Anthony

       Am I ? 
       I'm glad to hear that my friend 
       Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself? 

Int. - Florida police - corridor -Day

Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office

Int. - Florida police -the commissioner's office


Neil gets in

Commissioner

       Robin is the Ray's first victim 
                                Neil 
       Maybe there's other victim or victims! 

Commissioner

       Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..! 
       Where's Albert? 

Neil

      I saw him parking his car 
       We shall do our best to arrest him 
       We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida 
       Time is very important 

Commissioner

              We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent 
       This made him in the list of the most wanted 

- Searching some documents on the desk

All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .

Neil

       Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control! 

- Albert from FBI enters

Commissioner

       Is there new news? 


Albert

       There's no news except what we have verified 
       A killed shoot in the victim's head by Ray! 

Neil

       If one of Robin's guard still alive, we couldn't verify that the guard recognized his photo as soon as shown it 

Albert

Yes

       In addition that, this criminal has super ability to aim the goal accurately, he distinguishes with disguise 

Commissioner

We thank Ray that he didn't disguise when executing this

crime

Albert

       Since 6 months, we assured from our source that it was agreed with him to kill one of the elected person in the local municipality elections for the benefit of other elected in one of New York Subsidiaries, but so sorry it could approve the accusation on such elected. 

Commissioner

It must arrest him before making more crimes, he considers a threat for public security


Albert

It should increase investigations in everywhere may suspecting to be there.

Neil

Many investigators and private detective are spreading now in everywhere.

- Ray's photo on the computer's monitor front of him

Commissioner

       What about the next plan? 
       Did you discussed it together? 

Neil

       Yes we discussed 

Albert

       We have some notices shall be discussed together 

Neil

I think if could hold this thread, it is probably arrest him

Commissioner

The success of this plan firstly depends on Brain's agreement to work with us without force.

Neil

This is very important

He departure the prison just from short time

Albert

If we could persuade him to work with us as a nark! It shall be good!

Brain Knows most Rich Businessmen and many persons who pay money versus killing.

He has multiple relationships with several gangs and murderers in Florida ! I think he shall do much if agreed to work with us!

Commissioner

Ok., we see what will happen with him

Int. - Ray's Car - Day

- Listening to hit music

- Mobile ringing

- Turning down the music

Ray

Yes

Tony! Where are you?

Intercut with Tony in his Car – Day

Tony

               In my car 

Ray

               I'm also in the car 

Tony

               Are going to the apartment? 

Ray

               Yes 

Tony

               Ok, I will be at you after half an hour 

- Ray returns to hit music again

Int. - Ray's apartment - Day

-Ray holding a cup of wine


- Bell 's sound

- Opens the door

- Tony enters

                                          Ray 
      Look…… 

- Refers to Anne's photo

Tony

       A charm woman! 
       Wonder blond! Her golden hair makes her more charm and fascinating. 
       She's really beautiful 

Ray

       Would you like a cup? 

Tony

       I'll be thankful 

- Ray prepare him a Cup

Tony

       In the newspaper, I saw the bold … Robin's photo shoot in his head 

- Ray smiling

Tony

How I felt proud when you told me, you achieved the first mission!

I felt proud because my friend is a professional, never miss his goals

Ray

Tony…. Do you remember our last days in New York ?

Tony

I wish if such days returned again whatever for just one day!

It was nice days; I left New York to Florida . Since Hank told me that he wants to kill two persons and needs a professional to finishing those at once, I imagine you

Ray

       Hank pays a lot of money! 

Tony

       He has great wealth 
       He considers one of businessmen here in  Florida    . Everything, Trade and Industry. 

Ray

       Drugs! 

Tony

       No, no , 

He doesn't need more money

- Tony stands

- Fetch another Cup of wine , lighting a cigarette

       You didn't tell me about Robin, How could get the house?   Alarm system in everywhere, Secret doors, Guarding dogs 

Ray

It wasn't a problem to me

Tony

Do you agree with me that the most danger gang that consisting of just one person… that's you?

Ray

I agree

Tony

I affirm that I admire you, Since We

Known each other and become friends from 12 years …!

-Tony puts his hand on his shoulder

Tony

Is your shoulder has been recovered?

Ray

Yes

Also Anthony can walk now

Exactly Ray but a child, when I saw him I felt that I'm facing myself when I was a child!

       Anthony asked me about the reason of my shoulder's injury? I forced to lie! 

I told him that a criminal shot me … then he asked me about the reason too!

I dodged to answer … what I would telling him?!

I injured when providing a murder mission …! I don't like to know that.

Maybe he doesn't understand anything … but I don't like Anthony to know !

INT. Brain's apartment – Bedroom – Night

- Brain the criminal

- Naked in bed with a naked woman

                           The woman 

I'd like to be with you forever

How days, months and years have lost when you were in prison

Brain

           We shall recover those days now 

- Kissing her

- Suddenly

Neil and Albert pushing the door strongly

- Aiming their guns towards Brain's face

Brain

Who are you? How did you get in?

-The woman screaming…. Putting bed sheet on her breast to cover it.

Brain

What do you want?


Neil

Florida police

Albert

FBI

Brain

What do you want?

I'm arrested?

If so, why?

Albert

You aren’t arrested exactly

It is our luck that door was rather opened so we entered

Brain

I want to know what's happened.

Neil

You will know everything

Brain

Shall you take me naked?

Albert

Wear your clothes then let us go

Brain (to Neil )

The pants beside you on the chair

I'll wear pants under over … would you please?

The woman

And me …. And me

Albert

Calm down for a while. you aren't aimed for anything

Brain

May you bring please?

Or you want to down from the bed then walking naked as I born front of you!

- Neil throwing the pants on air then falling on his face

Brain

       Thanks 

- Trying to wear the pants ……. He still under bed sheet

- Suddenly throwing the bed sheet on Neil's face

- Quickly getting up

- Pushing Albert by his hand

- Takes his shirt quickly

- The woman screaming

- Brain running.. escaping from the apartment

Ext. - Street - Night

- Wearing his shirt while running

- Albert & Neil run after him

Neil

Stop Brain .. stop

Albert

Don't ever shoot

- Hides behind a vettura



Neil

Rascal!

Albert

Damned! .. Vile!

Ext. - streets -Crowd - Night

Albert

He's there

- Running

- Brain among crowd, cars ,people

- Trying to stop any car, but useless

- Running among people

- All go away from him

- Hiding behind a stopped car

- Careful, looks through car's glass

- Sees Neil & Albert

- Tries to open car's door

The car's Owner

Get away of my car

- Brain strike his face strongly

Neil

Is he lost in the crowed?

- Brain running

- Hits with a man, falling together

- Quickly gets up

- Keep running

Neil

He falls there!

- Running towards him

- Red Pontiac car driven by a woman was steady to be stopped

- Brain pushes her out

- The woman screaming

- Brain rushing into the car

- Drives the car with high speed

 -        A taxi is passing in this moment 

- Albert stops the taxi.

Int. - Taxi - Streets - Night

Albert

Quickly follow that red car

We're police

- Neil makes a contact

- Neil

Unit 15

Unit 15

We're in san Dircy street , We need a police car to halt the way front of the fugitive. Right now. Red Pontiac car

Albert( to the taxi driver )

Don't let him runaway

                                      The taxi driver 

He's crazy!

What this rash does? What is his crime? ...... why

Do you chasing him? !

Is he stolen this car?

Albert

Don't talk too much.

Keep following

Don't let him escape 

Int. - Streets - The red car

- Brain drives the car frivolity

- Crushing a car

- Keep his way

Ext. - Police car - Night

- Police car moves

Int. - Taxi - Streets

Albert

Foolish!

Neil

He near from the highway


Ext. - The red car - Street - Night

- Car's steering wheel out of his control

- Crushing two cars

- Getting away from the street

- Brain turns with the car then keep his way

Ext. - Police car

- Police car appears


Int. - Police car - Night

- 3 Policemen

- One of them makes a contact

-Picks the microphone to call in 
                                 The policeman 

We can 't halt the way !

Very crowed !


Ext. –The red car – Highway –Night

The red car to the Highway

Int.. - The taxi - Highway

Albert

We must contact the first intersection

- Neil makes a contact

Neil

Unit 15 .. unit 15

Telling the first intersection with car's details

Int. - Police car - Highway - Night

The policeman

I'll do order right now

- Picks up the microphone to call in

Intersection A

Intersection A

From Intersection

I hear you

The policeman

Here unit 15 ,A red Pontiac car

Its numbers panel is crushed

Driven by a man

You should stop this car

Int. -The red car - Highway

- Brain trying to cross a big truck next to him

- Steering wheel out of his control

- The car gets away from the way

Ext. -The red car - Highway - Night

-The car crushing with the iron barrier

- Turning over many times 

- Police car stop

- The taxi stop

- Running towards Brain

- Brain's face bleeding

Neil

Is he still alive?

Albert

I don't think so

                                        The taxi driver 

Can I go?

Albert

We thank you

                                         The taxi driver 

I'm always helping policemen

Is this crazy dead?

Int. - Neil's office -Day

Neil & Albert

Neil

Our thread has been cut!

Albert

He's died! I think we mistaken when we entered to his bedroom armed

- Ray's photo on the wall … [ Wanted ]

Neil

Don't forget Brain is a danger criminal

Always armed, shooting anyone facing his way

Albert

He though that we came to arrest him

Neil

He always used to escape from policemen

- Mobile rings

Albert

Yes

When?

Watching 24 hours a day

Ok … ok

Albert

There's a call from FBI

Neil

About Anne?

Albert

I asked to watch her 24 hours a day

Neil

       Maybe longing and yearning to her lover makes her coming to Florida 

Albert

This is just probability

She will be under watching

Neil

If so, she will make a great help

Int. - Anthony's house - bedroom - Day

- Anthony wears his clothes

Anthony

What is your opinion about this red t. shirt?

Ray

As you like

Anthony

I ask you my friend

Ray

This red is elegant

Anthony

Ok

-The grandmother enters

Anthony

I didn't go out since 20 days grand ma … !

The grandmother

Anthony, you must be careful

Ray

Be quiet about him

- Anthony combs his hair

Anthony

I 'm finished

Ray

Let 's go

-Ray helps him

Anthony( to his grandmother )

Do you change your mind and come with us?

- Getting out from the room

Int. - Anthony's house - the hall

- She opens the door

The grandmother

Please Mr. Ray don't be late

Ray

We shall not

Ext. - Anthony's house – Day

- Ray helps Anthony to get in the car

- Puts him safety belt

- The boy salutes his grandma

- She salutes him

- The car moves


Int. Ray's Car – Day

Ray

Would you Italian Food?

Anthony

Pizza?

Ray

Pizza.. Do you like pizza?

Anthony

I think nobody dislike it.

Pizza…. Italian food !

Ray

Also Italy distinguishing with macaroni..

Anthony

Did you visit Italy before?

Ray

Since 7 years!

Anthony

Do you like Pizza my friend?

                                     Ray 

As you said ....No body dislike pizza

Anthony

To the Italian pizza

Ray

When your parents come?

Anthony

I don't know

My father called yesterday but didn't tell anything

Ray

Did you talk with him

Anthony

Little

He called lately at night

I was sleepy

My grandma didn't tell him about my accident

She told me to not say anything

                                     Ray 

well done

Anthony

Mum will be so sad when knowing what happened to me and of course dad too.

But when they come, I shall tell them about you!

Ray

Me?!

What you will say?


Anthony

I shall say you're my new friend

Although you're older than me

How old are you?

Ray

Guess?

Anthony

25 , 28 years

Ray

How old are you exactly?

Anthony

9 years

Ray

I'm older than you about 21 years

Anthony

30 years

Ray

I seem older or younger?

Anthony

Seem younger

Ext. The restaurant - Day

- The car is parking

- Ray get out

- Helps Anthony to getting out


Ray

What about this Italian restaurant?

It offers all kind of Italian food , especially pizza

-They enter

Int. The restaurant - Day

Anthony

Is there unoccupied table!

What shall we do now  ?

Going to other restaurant ? … we haven't luck to eat pizza today ?!

Ray

This time usually crowded

-Ray sees unoccupied table

Ray

There's one

-They go to unoccupied table … seating

- Waiter gives each one a menu

Ray

2 pizza

Waiter

Which kind?

Ray

All in the menu?

Waiter

Yes

                                  Anthony 

Great!

There're many kinds … sea food pizza, vegetables, meat and others.

I take pizza with vegetables

And you?

Ray

Me..

This.. no

Pizza with tune

Waiter

Ok sir

Anthony

Look..

-Ray turns around

Ray

What?

Anthony

This fat man!

Eats with a funny way!

Eats gluttony! Doesn't care anyone around him.

Doesn't feel shame?!

Ray

In which class are you in?


Anthony

Fifth class

Ray

Are you success or not?

Anthony

I didn't fall up till now in any exam

Ray

What would you like to be?

Anthony

A pilot in U.S. Air forces

Ray

Do you like air ?

Anthony

I like planes and pilot's uniform

But I prefer warplanes than civilian planes

I keep many pictures from magazines and internet about warplanes F16 – F 22 , Ghost, French Mirage, and others .

- Waiter brings the pizza

Anthony

Delicious!

Isn't it?

Ray

Very delicious!

Anthony

I forget to ask you, what is your job?

Ray

Why do ask me about my job?

Anthony

I want to know everything about you.

Ray

As you guessed my age, can you guess my job?!

Anthony

This is very difficult!..

Ext. Gym center – Day

- Tony 's BMW car stopped next to the Gym center

- Getting out from the car

- Enters

Int. Gym Center – Day

- Tony walks till reaching the receptionist

- Talks with him

- Turns around then going to a hall

Int. Gym – Center

- Looking around

- The center has some men and youth in different ages practicing sport with devices

- Tony sees Mr.Hank ,about 55 years old

- Hank Manilow , one of businessmen , and the most rich man

- Tony going forward to him

Tony

Mr. Hank

Hank

Tony! … What do you want?

Tony

Don't want see me?

Hank

I told you before we shouldn't meet till finishing everything!

Tony

That's right

But …

Hank

But what?

Speak……..

Tony

You seem annoyed from seeing me!!

Hank

I don't want anyone seeing us till finishing everything … I warned you before and you disregarded my warning.....

Tony

Why overdone fear and worry?!

Mr. Hank, you seem that you forget our agreement!

Hank

No

I didn't forget

Shall we talk in another time


Tony

When?

Hank

Tomorrow at seven P.M.

Tell me, what about your friend Ray?!

Be careful, don't tell him anything about me

Never Tony…. Never!

You shouldn't mention my name … I don't tell you what I shall do if happened so! Consider it is a threat… warning as you wish…do you understand?

Tony

The important thing at him is money… just money

Be quiet , he doesn't know anything about you

Hank

Also the important thing for you is money

Just money

Did he tell you about the second mission?

Tony

He plans , determining time and place then execute

I think he execute successfully

He doesn't like to stay here for long time , as soon as finishing the second mission, he will leave Florida

Hank

Ok Tony

You can go


Tony

Bye..

- Hank returns to his gym

Hank ( to himself )

Vile!

Ignoble!

Ext. Gym Center - Day

- Tony gets out

- Drives his car

Int. Tony 's apartment - bedroom - Day

- A woman in nightgown lies in a bed

- The woman is Tony 's lover , Martina

- Tony arrives

- She hiding behind the door

- He begins to take off his shirt

- She kissing him

Tony

Honey!

Martina

Didn't you feel my presence?

Tony

It is a pleased surprise!

Martina

I missed you too much


Tony

How I miss you!

-He kisses her hot deep kiss in her lips

Martina

We didn't meet than 20 days!

Tony

I'm really busy these days

Do you feel hungry?

Martina

I prepare you wonder food within minutes

- She getting out

- He looks to his face on the mirror

- Touches his beard

- Enters the attached small bathroom to bedroom

Int . The bathroom

- Tony begins to shave his beard

- Martina's voice from the kitchen

Martina

Would you like omelet with salad or …

- Tony doesn't hear

Martina

Tony … Tony

Tony

What?

- Turns shaver off

Tony

Do you say something?

Martina

Would you like omelet with salad or cheese with boiled vegetables?

Tony

As you with

- Turns shaver on

Ext. A street - Day

- Ray's car stopped

- Daimler car stops next to a building

Int. Ray's car – Day

- Ray watching the building's entrance

- Opens car's window little

Ext. The building's entrance - Day

Arthur… the man whom his photo was hanged beside Robin's photo in Ray's apartment appears.

A rich man about 48 years old surrounded with 3 men of his guards.

Int. Ray's car - Day

- Steady position to shoot

- Aiming the gun towards Arthur's head

- But suddenly a woman appears cut vision

- She kisses Arthur

- Guards turning around them

- One of them opening the car's door

- Arthur sits beside her in the back seat

- The car moves

- Ray lights a cigarette


Ray ( to himself )

What is damned luck?!

Ignoble prostitute woman!

- Turns with the car in the other direction

Int. Tony 's apartment – bedroom - Day

- Tony with his lover naked in the bed

- Dalliances , kisses and embraces

- Mobile ringing

Tony

- Is this a time for calls!

- Go to hell

Martina

Maybe it is an important call

Tony

There's no one in the world more important than you … I love you … I love you ….

Int. Ray's car – Day

- Ray trying to make a mobile call , but useless

- Throwing mobile with a nervous action to the back seat

Ext. Ray's car

- Ray's car crossing down town streets

- Stops next to a bar

- Getting out from the car

- Quarrel in the street next to the bar … two men are fighting.

- Ray looks to them….

- Enters to the bar

Int. bar - Day


Ray

Beer

- The barman prepares a cup

Man (1)

This is the worst bar!


Man (2)

All bars here worst each other!

The barman ( to Ray )


Is this the first time come to here?

- Gives him a Cup

- Ray

And the last time

- They laughing

Man (1)

Did I tell you!

This man shall not come to here again

This is the last time

- Ray drinks

- Looking to them

Ray

Shut up

Man (2)

Do you prevent our talks?

- Ray going towards him

- Catches him from his shirt

Ray

I don't like to hear your voice

Or I shall break your neck

The barman

I'm sorry for this

- Ray ready to go out form the bar

The barman

You didn't complete your drink !

- Ray throwing him about 100 dollar in the air

Int. Florida Police - Neil's office - Day

- Neil makes mobile call

Neil

Where are you?

Intercut with Albert in a room – Florida Police – Day

Albert

Floor 2

Neil

Okay

- Neil gets out

INT. Corridor - Florida Police

Neil ( to Margrate ) Police woman

Margrate !congratulations for come back

Margrate

Hi, Neil , thanks

- Neil arrives to a room in floor 2 , then enters

Int. - Florida Police- an office room

- Ray's photo victims on the wall

- The victims , men , woman

Neil

Ray's Victims!

Albert

This man!

Ray killed him in 1994 . His name

Jeff Kilsany . In 1995 another crime has been committed

Neil

Every year he used to commit a crime As long an there is the sponsor of the committed crimes, he is ready.

Albert

His victims are many .Look… In the year 2000, he killed that husband after his wife paid to money to do this.

Neil

There's no thing important in his life more than money

Ext. – Ray's Apartment - Night

- Light glimmering.

- Charming view

- Ray looks from the window

- Drinks a cup of wine


- looking at the photo of the second man, Arthur on the wall.

- Spitting on it.

Ray

You can't escape the next time.

I'll kill you ………...... Kill you.

- Bell 's sound.

- Ray opening the door.

- Tony & Ray are embracing each other's.

Tony

My dear friend

Ray

You look tired..!

Tony

Is this clearly appearing on my face?

Ray

What are you doing to look so tired?

Tony

Nothing new!

- Tony is looking at Anne's photo on the wall....

Tony

Good Evening my fair lady.

Ray

I have called you today

The mobile was off....

Tony

I was so busy at that time

Ray

In what?

Tony

I went to bed with a woman.

- They laughing


Ray

Beautiful?

Tony

So beautiful.. Charm brunette

                                        Ray 

I don't like brunettes

Tony

When will you execute the second mission?

-Ray sits

Ray

I was about to kill him, unfortunately he escape

Tony

How?

Ray

I was about to shoot him; unfortunately an old cursed woman cut vision.

Tony

Where?

Ray

Before the building of his office.

- Tony fetch cup of wine

Ray

He will not escape

I need to make surveillance and collect the required information

Tony

Then, the mission shall be long?

Ray


Not much

Tony

I'm waiting

- Ray standing

Ray

The problem that this scoundrel has no appointed time or fixed places.

He moves from place to anther continually!

He will not escape from Ray's bullet!

What's your next deal with Hank?

Tony

Every thing is delayed!

I shall be a partner with 20 %

EXT.- Building - Day

Ray's car stopped before a building .It consists of 3 floors.

- Arthur, appears from the window, with the owner of this building.

- Ray is getting out his gun

- Directing the gun toward Arthur's head.

- But, Arthur enters.

- Ray is getting out from the car.

- Running toward the building

INT. The building

- Ray enters

- The building is unoccupied.

- Ray creeping to the floor where Arthur present in.

- Listening to the dialogue..

- A group of Arthur's guards.


Arthur

Be sure, the amount I give you can't be paid by anyone else.

The owner

I know that

Arthur

Ok, we agree

The owner

You offered me very enough amount more than I expected.

Arthur

Do you know why I bought this building?

I shall change it into super restaurant as I shall call it the name of my new wife.

She will be so happy when knowing that.

You shall get cheque with all amount on Citibank.

The owner

But… I wished if the cheque was directly on HSBC bank

Arthur

As you like. No problem

Tomorrow morning, I will be in my grange.

You can come to sign the cheque

The owner

Ok

Arthur

Now, I want to have another look at the floor 3

INT. - Corridor - Building

- Ray is hiding

- Steady position to shoot.

- Directing his gun toward Arthur's head, but a guard cut vision.

- They are going up to the floor 3

- Ray is going down quickly..

EXT. - Street - Day

- Ray gets out

- Running quickly toward his car.

- D riving with high speed

EXT. - The grange - Day

- A large area, bushy trees .

- A high fence of wires surrounds the grange.

- The gate is closed and guarded by a security man.

- Ray wearing a black suit.

- Standing before the wires..

INT. - The grange

- Arthur is lying down in the terrace

- Beside him Linda the woman who appeared with him in the entrance of the building of his company .

- The guards are four men in different places....


- Mobile ringing

Arthur

Oh my God!

Calls never stop


Linda

Calls means money

Arthur

It looks no time for relaxation and rest.

- Holds mobile sees the called number

Arthur

He is one of those stupid who doesn't differ between work and rest time!

Put this disturb mobile inside , I don't like to hear its ringing!

                                    The guard 

Ok, sir

EXT. - the grange - Day

- Ray is examining the wires.

- He is trying to penetrate the gun through the wires.

- But, he can't because of the narrow holes.

- Running to his car

INT. - The grange - The terrace

- Arthur and Linda are still lying down in the terrace

A guard

The horses are ready

- They are getting up

Arthur

A quite and peaceful horse for you

Horses ridding is so enjoyable! Especially in this wonder place and weather!

Linda

I'm ridding horses since I was eighteen. I didn't continue more than this

Arthur

You look as you still eighteen!

EXT. - Road - Day

- Ray has got out his bag from the car

- The bag contains a number of tools, wires, scissors and iron equipments.

- Taking an iron scissor.

- Testing the scissor using a strong cable.

- The scissor is cutting the cable.

- Taking the scissor.

INT. - The grange - Day

- Arthur is on the horse.

- While Linda on another.

- The guards are watching them.

- Two of them are on their horses.

- While the others are standing.

                   Arthur (to the horse) 

Oh Faslom! Since a long time, we haven't met

Three months ago, I didn't come here.

Linda

Projects, deals and meetings

Arthur

My life full of hard work all time


Imagine also weekend ,Projects, Deals and Meetings !

Linda

It is hard! And health ruinous.

Arthur

I will try to arrange it even if it is hard

Linda

Did you try before?

Arthur

I did but I failed

Linda

Try again

EXT. - The grange - Day

- Ray is trying to cut parts of the cable using a scissor.

- But, he coudn 't

- Seeing a big vettura beside the wires , thinking for a moment

- Running, getting up of the vettura then, climbs , jumping into the grange without being noticed .

INT. - The grange

- Ray inside the grange.

- Hiding behind a tree.

- The horses are before him nearby.

- At this moment, One of the guards has been seen him!

- Ray is steady position to shoot.

                                   The guard 

Look!

- The two guards are shooting

- Ray shoots Arthur's head.

- Linda screams

Linda

Arthur! Arthur!

- The guards are running toward Arthur.

Linda

Carry him to the car, I take him to hospital immediately

- Two guards carrying him, while the other guards shooting in everywhere.

                                       Guard (1) 

There!

                                      Guard (2) 

He can't escape

- The guards are ridding the horses shoot.

- Ray is looking at the gate.

- He has observed the security man of the gate carrying his gun.

- Running behind the trees.

- One of guards on his horse has observed him....

- He shoots him.

- Ray is hiding well behind a tree.

- Steady position to shoot.

- He has shot the guard on the horse and killed him.

- Running, hiding behind the bushy trees and stones.

- The four are running, three of them are guards and the forth is a security man.

                     A guard (to the security man) 

Oh rascal! Stay in the gate

- The security man is running toward the gate

- Ray is shooting him in his back.

A guard

This is the villain!

- He is shoots

A guard

We should surround him carefully

I'm from this side and you from the right..... Come!

- Ray is watching the guard who is moving in the right side.

- Steady position to shoots..

- Shooting him in his head

- Running quickly from the right toward the gate.

- The other two guards are running

- Ray is coming out to the road.

EXT. – Road -Day

- Running toward his car.

- One of the guards is shooting him.

- The bullet hits the car's door.

- Getting into the car, driving at utmost speed.

- - The guards getting into a car.

INT. - Ray's car - Day

- He has smashed small wooden booth.

- Its parts have scattered.

- He is looking at the car mirror.

- The guard's car follows him

- Ray has heightened the car speed

- As a result of the high speed, the car is hitting a tree.

- The front part of the car has smashed then stopped.

- Comes out quickly.

Ext. – Road - Day

- Ray running. They are follow him

- Before him, a school

- Running into the school

INT. - school

- Teachers and students

- Ray rushing to one of the rooms.

INT . School - Room

- A lady is ready to go out

- She hits with Ray, screams

- Ray is hiding behind the curtains.

- The guards are rushing to the room.

- The lady is weeping

- Ray is steady position to shoot.

- One of them has injured in his shoulder and the other in his foot.

- The lady is crying

- Screaming from outside

- Ray is ready to jump from the window.

- Jumping outside.

Ext. – Road - Day

- Looking at the road, hoping to find any car

- A car has appeared from a distance.

- Weaving to the car

- The car has topped.

- A young man of 18 years has driven it.

Ray

I want to go to the downtown.

The young man

You are welcome

INT. – The car - Day

                                              The young man 

Did you find any problem in this area?

Ray

No

- Ray is getting out tissue from his pocket.

- Drying his sweat.

- The young man glances a gun

- He is worried and confused.

The young man

Are you a policeman?

Ray

How did you know?

They young man

I had glanced a gun

- Ray gets a gun

Ray

It is a gun never leave me

It is always my sincere friend

I'm a policeman.. Yes

I was following one of the criminals



                                         The young man 

Has he escaped?

Ray

I killed him

No one can get away of me

                                              The young man 

It seems that you are an experienced and clever policeman

Ray

That's what they are saying

The young man

What did this criminal do?

What is his crime?

Ray

These are top secrets

The young man

Sorry

Policemen very danger job!

Full of risks!


Ray

Won't you stop talking?

The young man

Sorry again

Dissolve

INT. – Florida police – commissioner's office – Day

- The commissioner and Albert with the two guards of Arthur.

- The two guards with wound bandage

- Albert is holding Ray's photo.

- One of the guards is looking at the photo.

The guard

Yes, he is

- The other guards is taking the photo


The other

He is the dirty criminal!

The guard

This criminal caused us a disaster!

The other

We didn't know how he could sneak into the grange?

Albert (to commissioner)

Concerning the black car, FORD model, it appeared that he has rented of office using a false name called (Ronald Ziessy).

The owner of the office has recognized his photo.

Knocking on the door.

Commissioner.

Yes

- Linda is entering

Commissioner

When did your relation begin with Arthur?

Linda

Since one year

Albert

Did you see the man of this photo before?

- She is looking at Ray's photo

Linda

No


Albert


If he has enemies, who are they?

Linda

I recognized him in one of the biggest concert

He was charm and emotional

It was the gladdest year of my life.. last year that we spent it together

Oh! Such happens has been finished and never come back


I don't know anyone of his friends

I know only the guards.

He was living alone.

We were about to marry.

-She is crying

Commissioner

Please, be calm

Linda

Why has he been killed? Why?! Why?!

It's very difficult and hard

They killed all my dreams

Albert,

Please, don’t cry

                                       Linda 

The killer must be submitted to justice

Albert

This we trying to do so.

Did you leave your address, telephone and mobile number with the officer outside?

Linda

Yes, I did

Can I go?

Albert

But, remember that you are under request at any time and you will be called again for the investigation.

- she is coming out


The guard

She is a respectful woman

Albert

Have you any comment on her tales?

The other

No


All what she has said is true.

It was a wonder love story between them .It ended painfully!

Commissioner

You can go

Albert

It should be made a comprehensive investigation concerning to determine the enemies.

EXT. – skyscraper - Day

- A car of Cadillac has stopped.

- A businessman is coming out of it.

- He is Dan who is 51 years old.

- Enters.

INT. – Hank's office – Skyscraper- Day

- The 51st floor.

- A wonderful decoration.

- An extremely majestic office.

- Expensive antiques

- Hank in his office.

- A charming view appears behind the glass.

- Knocking on the door.

Hank

Yes,

  - The office manger enters                               

The office manger

Timetable that you ordered

Hank

Is there any meeting in the evening?

The office manger

At  seven p.m. with NIOP chairman, Mr. Douglas. That's all 

Hank

Delay such meeting with him.

-The office manger gets out.

- Dan enters.

- Shaking hands.

- Dan sits

Hank

Welcome Dan

DAN

Did you read the newspapers of the last five days?

Hank

Just dirty things and have been removed forever.

This is the normal punition of those people who trying to dare me. I could revenge for myself in the suitable time

Dan

Your reaction was danger and unexpected!

I surprised for what had happened!

Hank

They caused me much pain and troubles.

Did you forget? They tried to kill me!

Dan

It couldn't assure that

Hank

No, I assured

I haven't enemies except them

-Hank stands looks at the window

Dan

The comprehensive investigation is still running till now.

I hope that you will be above suspicion.


-Hank turns to Dan

Hank

I'm out of any suspicion. I did it to conserve my life and reputation. It was my life's fault that I dealt with those people. But it will not happen again


Dan

I don't support aggressive and killing as a way of solving the problems and disputes.

Hank

It is the only way that those know and understand it

Without God's blessing I would die now.

-Hank sits again

Because one of them I lost 19 million dollars in a month!.. The villain Arthur!

You think I shall be patient more than that?

Dan

Be calm.. Relax

If you had asked my advice, I would not have given you the permission to do it.

It's no use crying over spilt milk.

Hank

You utter this because they never hurt you.

As for me, the situation is completely different.

The criminal who is killed doesn't live here

Dan

I know this before....

Hank

I was in a badly need first , for a professional killer .Second , in a short time . Third , A killer from outside


Dan

You attached yourself in a circle! Never can penetrate it easily

Hank

I was ready to pay any amount whatever

There is a mediator between me and the criminal

This mediator is a Ragamuffin!

He doesn't know anything about me

He had never seen me before ,and I 'm too

If we meet together anywhere, no one will know the other

I feel comfortable now!

After killing this scoundrels

Dan

Who believes that Hank manilow can be involved in such crimes?

Hank

It's the first time and it will be the last.

Dan

Although Robin & Arthur are surrounded by a large group of guards , they are killed! I astonish how they could live normally among theses guards!

Didn't they feel restricted?

Hank

They are surrounded by guards of a dirty business in addition to their original work, drugs, money laundering. Etc I'm sure of that

Dan

You also have two guards!

Hank

They are guards. Not criminals !

-Moment of silence

Dan

What do you think about?!

INT. - taxi - Night

-Ray is making a mobile call.

-Intercut with Anne in her apartment (bathroom)- Night

-The mobile is ringing

                                        Anne 

Ray !!

I miss you


                                        Ray 

Me too honey

I missed you so much

Anne

All matters are ok?

Ray

No problems

I performed the two missions successfully.....

Anne

What about your injury ?!


Ray

It was little injury

Anne

I can't absolutely bear that

Ray

Where are you now? What are you doing?

Anne

In the bathroom

While the mobile was ringing, I was taking shower

I was feeling that you are going to call me.

So I put the mobile on a stand

Ray

Then you are naked?!


- They are laughing

Anne

We will meet soon!

Ray

I'm in my way to see Anthony

Anne


Is he recover from his injury?

Ray

Yes he can walk normally now.

You will see his photo when I come back. I got a photo from him

Anne

You make me ardent to see his photo

Ray

I liked him so much

Anne

I'm going to surprise you

Ray

You are my charming princess and fair lady

What is the surprise?

Anne

No, I will not tell you


Ray

Kiss you

Anne

Kiss you

-Turns mobile off

-Ray looks from the window seeing a store for toys and gifts

Ray (to the driver )

please stop front of this store, Wait me

-The taxi stops

-Ray gets out

-Enters to the store

INT. - The store - Day

Ray

I want to buy an airplane but warplane

The seller

Is this important?

Ray

Yes,. yes very important

                                     The seller 

Sorry

You can find your request after two days if you visited

us

Ray

Unfortunately!.. Thanks

-Ray gets out getting in the taxi. Its move

INT. - Anthony's apartment - Night

- Anthony is looking through the window.

- Seeing Ray

- Anthony is walking toward the door.

The grandmother

Anthony !

Anthony

My Friend …Ray!

- Ray enters

Ray

How are you my little friend, Anthony?

                                           Anthony 

Fine

Ray

Good evening

                                         The grandmother 

Good evening, you are welcome

Next Sunday Anthony's Parents shall come

Ray

Really?!

The grandmother

They called me yesterday morning

Ray

Pleasant news for you Anthony !

Anthony

I missed them so much

Ray

I notice that you walk naturally now

Anthony

Pain has decreased completely

Ray

I came today to say goodbye


Anthony

Why?

Ray

There is no reason to stay here any more Anthony

Anthony

Why don't you stay here with me?

Ray

It doesn't mean we shall not meet again

Surely I'll back to visit you.

Believe me, I wish if time was longer. But sorry

Anthony

I am so sad to hear this

Ray

I don't want to see you unhappy

The grandmother

You will come to visit us?

Ray

Of course.

INT. -Night club -Night

- A nightclub in downtown.

- Tony with Martina

- Drinking

Martina

This is the last cup please Tony

Tony

No. we will go on drinking, then spend a hot night

We shall spend one of an enjoyable night in our life

Martina

I'm agree

- He kissing her.

- Touches her cheek.

Martina

You excite me

Tony

This is exactly what I meant

Martina

Stop it

- One of Hank's guards.

                                             The guard 

Mr. Hank wants you at once

Tony

Now?!

The guard

He sent me to bring you to him

Tony

Why did not he contact me through the mobile?

The guard

I do not know I have no information

Tony

I shall drink the last cup …,then go with you

Shall I bring you a cup

The guard

No

You drink too much

Tony

Where is he now?

The guard

In the garden of the villa

Tony

So it is not far

                                       Tony (to Martina) 

If I am late, go to the apartment

I will return back to you

They go towards the exit door

Tony

This is the first time he sends you to arrest me in this way!



Ext. Nightclub-Night

Tony

My car is not here

The guard

I came in a car

-They getting in

INT. Bentley Car

Tony

Wonderful Bentley!

The guard

He owns a collection of the most excellent recent cars.

Tony

Do you remember the black MAYBACH car that he bought last month?

The guard

It is fantastic masterpiece!

It made especially for him!

EXT. - Garden –Hank 's villa -Night

- A villa like a castle

- Lights glimmering around the swimming pool that is located in a middle of a garden

- Hank is sitting on a chair

- A guard is a few meters away

- Hank is reading some documents

- Tony with the guard entering

Tony

Is there anything that necessitates coming in this way?

- Hank puts the documents on the table.

Hank

Have a seat

Tony

Scarcely, I see you in such case

Hank

Which case you mean?

Tony

Relaxed. . Not nervous. . not stressed

                                        Hank ( to the guard ) 

You can go

- The other guard is still here.

                                        Tony 

Why did you ask to see me?

                                        Hank 

Don't be hurry


Tony

This is the first time happened so

                                    Hank 

I wanted to talk with you

Tony

In which thing?

Hank

You were in the bar?

Tony

Yes

                                     Hank 

Undoubtedly, you won a lot of money since I helped you.

Profits from deals from everywhere

Commissions, rewards and so on


Tony

You opened for me many closed doors

Hank

I think you were and still very loyal

Isn't it?!

Tony

Of course

Hank

All right


Tony

I don't understand what you mean?

Hank

I just wanted to remember you

Your friend is so professional

He could achieve the two missions successfully.

Tony

I was sure that. Did I tell you no one as my friend Ray


The two missions were done as agreed!

Hank

Yes . . . Yes

Where is he?

Tony

Why? I think he will leave Florida tomorrow

Don't worry .As I told you many times he doesn't know anything about you!

He took the money then did the mission

Hank

Why did you leave New York ?

Tony

I came to Florida to establish import and export company

But unfortunately, project was broken down!

I couldn't make any achievement



Hank

Maybe this is the last meeting between us......

Tony

Are you traveling abroad?

Hank

Not me who shall travel

Tony

I don't understand

Hank

Never mind

- A moment of silence.

- Hank with a gestured from his head to the guard

- Comes from behind Tony cautiously carrying a gun

- The guard shoot Tony

- Tony falls on the ground bleeding

Hank

Sorry Tony

You are just an insect that has performed its role . . . a climber!

Now your mission is complete

(to the guard) As I promised you a big reward is waiting for you …You wouldn't have dreamed of it all your life

The guard

I am at your service Mr. Hank


- The guard puts the corpse in a bursa, ties with iron chains - Carrying it to the car.

EXT. –Streets -Night -

- The car that carries Tony's corpse crossing down town streets.

- A sound of music.

EXT. Bridge -Night -

- He reaches

- Carrying the corpse

- The guard watches all directions.

- No one

- He throws the corpse from the bridge

- It sinks in the river

The guard

Good bye Tony!

Money important than anything else

I think you know that very well.

Dissolve

EXT –Tony 's house - Night

- Ray is looking at the window of the apartment

- No lights

- Making a mobile call

- But useless

INT. Florida police- Day

- Neil is reading some documents

- Albert enters

Neil

 We couldn't reach anything important up till now! 

Albert

We couldn't reach Ray or the instigator who paid him the money

Neil

We need more patience and time

Albert

Danger criminals don't easily arrest them

Most know nothing about the enemies

Neil

They are trying to hide some facts and data because they don't want to involve in any problems

Albert

This makes our mission more difficult

Neil

This is the daily reports for the intelligencers , private detectives and investigators

Nothing new !

Albert

The investigation reports are familiar

Neil

Did you order to continue watching?


Albert

Yes

Watching will not stop on all persons who probably have relation with the two crimes

In the first crime, there're 6 persons under control, and in the second crime there're about 11 persons

Neil


Look! There's news !

-They're reading from the computer's monitor

Albert

Good Anne!

- The mobile is ringing.

Albert

Yes

When?

This is great news

Flight number 542

- He looks at his watch

Ok

We will be waiting

Neil

Anne!

Albert

The lover couldn't bear her lover's absence any more.

After two hours, she will be at the airport

To the airport immediately

Come on

Neil

Unasked, she will lead us to Ray

Albert

Watching continued for more than two months

- They getting out.

 INT.          - Corridor     - Florida police      - Day 

Albert & Neil

Neil

You will fall in the trap today Ray

Albert

The car is ready?

Neil

Of course

EXT. – Florida police

- They getting in a car

- Not a police car

INT. –The car -Day 

- Albert drives.

Neil

Finally Ray!

Albert

Ray shall be arrest by us within hours


Ext.–Airport -Day

- An plane lands

- The passengers to the arrival hall

INT. AirPort –Arrival hall

- Albert and Neil are waiting

- They watch all the passengers.

- Anne appears

- Albert sees her

Albert

Welcome Anne

Neil


She looks very happy

Albert

She will see her lover after long time.

Neil

We leave her till she passes from the arrival hall

We will go out from the other door

Come on

- Anne gets out

Ext. –AirPort -Day -

                           Anne (to a taxi driver) 

Please to the downtown

- Albert and Neil are getting into the car.

INT. Taxi -Day -

- Air touches Anne's hair.

- She smiles

Anne

Weather is wonder!


Florida doesn't get crowd like New York

The driver

I drives slowly, Is this annoying you?

Anne

Are you a new driver?

Int. -The car –Day

Albert

Come on Anne quickly

Neil

This taxi driver is very slow

Albert

I don't know why he drives slowly?!

Neil

She didn't find except this driver..!

Int. –The taxi - Day

- The driver looks at the mirror

The driver

This car is following us

Anne

What?!

The driver

Since we moved from the Airport ,this car is following us

I 'm sure

Anne

That Car?

The driver

Yes

-Anne is thinking for minutes

Anne

Stop please 

- The taxi stops

INT. –The car -Day

-The car stops

Neil

What happened?

Albert

Oh! My God!

A stupid driver!

Neil

I fear if she observed our following up to her?



Int. Taxi - Day


The driver

Is there any problem between you and the driver of this car?

- Anne is thinking

- An idea comes to her mind

- She looks at the car

Anne

Is there a hotel nearby?

The driver

There a small hotel

Anne

It doesn't important, to that hotel please

Where is this hotel?

The driver

Not far

Could you know him? And why following you?

Anne

No

The driver

What about if we stop and ask him why he follows us?

Anne

No …. No don't stop

To the hotel quickly



The driver

This is your first visit to Florida ?

Anne

The first time

INT. Ray's apartment -Day


- Checks his gun

- The photos are still on the wall. A red sign x on Arthur's photo.

- Taking the photos off.

- He lights a fire in them

- Whops Anne's photo

- Kisses it

- Puts it inside the bag

- A mobile is ringing.

Ray

Yes

Anne!!

Intercut with Anne in the taxi – Day 

Anne

Listen to me

I am here in Florida in a taxi

There is a car follows me now

Ray

Why did you do that? Why?

Do not come to the apartment

Take care Anne

Anne

Sorry my dear

Now, I am on my way to one of the hotels

Ray

Stay in this hotel

Anne

I never expected that I'd be under surveillance

Ray

I will leave the apartment

Anne

To where?

Ray

I'll leave Florida today despite everything

Thanks for your calling.. Anne

Sure, the airports are being watched, the high way , The railway

If they aren't from the policemen, who are they then?

You should stay in the hotel today .Act naturally till you go once again to New York

Anne

I don't know if there will be an air flight tomorrow or not.

Ray

You can stay here for some days.

Anne

I am sorry. I am stupid, foolish

Ray

No time now

Do exactly as I say

Anne

I will do

Ext. –Hotel - Day

- The taxi stops.

- Anne gets out

- Towards the hotel door

- She sees the car

INT. –The car -Day Neil

In that hotel you stay Ray!

- The taxi moves

- Albert (to the driver)

       Go to hill 

INT.– Hotel -Day


Anne

Please, I want a room

The receptionist

Do you want certain requirements for the room?


Anne

Please, quickly

The receptionist

How many days will you stay here?

I asked you before if you want certain requirements for the room.

Anne

No. No, any room.. Any room

The receptionist

Please, your I.D. or your passport

Anne

- Giving him her I.D.

The receptionist

     Room No. 186 

- Albert & Neil is entering

- Only 3 ladies in the reception.

- Anne looking to Neil & Albert.

                   The receptionist (to the bellman) 

Carry the bag to room No.186

- The bellman is carrying it to the upper floor

- Anne is following him

- Albert & Neil to the receptionist

Albert

We are from FBI and Florida police

- Neil is getting out Ray's photo.

Neil

Is the man of this photo is resider in the hotel now?

And in which room?

- The receptionist is looking at the photo.

The receptionist

I had never seen him before

Albert

Are you sure?

The receptionist

Yes

Neil

 Verifying from the photo again 

The receptionist

I 'm sure , I didn't see the man of this photo before

Albert

Guest list please

The receptionist

Here you're

Neil

Is there another receptionist here who changes the shifts?

The receptionist

Amelia starts her shift at six pm.

Albert

It is possible that Ray has a false I.D or passport

Also, probably, he may be disguised.

How many guests now in the hotel?

The receptionist

Only this 3 ladies, with their children and two men, but in out now!

- Albert, Neil looking to the 3 ladies

- Close up on their faces one after one

Neil

Oh! My God! I think we need to policewoman for actualization those ladies!

Albert

We'll wait the two men

Neil

Don't tell anyone that we're police

The receptionist

Ok ,sir

Neil

When these two men come back?

The receptionist

I don't know

Int. Anne's room – Hotel- Day-

- Anne is weeping

- Making a call

Anne

Please, Is there is a flight to New York now?

At 3 pm.

Very Good

I want to a ticket please

Yes..first class

No..no thanks

My name is Anne Tieowhel

 Thank you 

- Drying her tears

EXT. - Cafeteria - Railway station- Day

- Ray disguised in a priest dress with beard

- Reading a newspaper.

- Having two bags.

Int. –Hotel – Day

- Anne appears going down the stairs

- Still Neil, Albert in the reception

Anne

I have to go now.

Sorry

The receptionist

What has happened?

The room unappealing ?

Anne

The room is fine.

This isn't the reason.

The receptionist

It's a bad luck


Anne

Thank you

The receptionist

I wish to see you again in our hotel

Anne

Thanks again

- Anne is looking to Neil & Albert

- She is going to the exit door.

- Neil & Albert following her

Ext. – Hotel- Day

- Anne is waving to a taxi.

- Getting into.

- Alberto & Neil are getting in the car.

 Int.  The car - Day 

Albert

To where Anne?

Neil

Sure to her lover

INT. The taxi

-Anne is drying her tears

The driver

What had happened?!

Anne

Nothing. Nothing


The driver

I 'm sorry

INT. The car – Day

Neil

Oh! My God!

Albert

Impossible!

She is returning to the Airport!

Neil

Caused by the damned driver!


What a bad luck!

Albert

She called Ray to warm him

Neil

If wasn't that foolish driver!

Albert

All threads that would lead to Ray have cut.

Neil

Maybe ,Ray is back with here on the same plane

Of course disguising

Albert

Anyone with her shall be arrested . if he is Ray or not

Neil

We must arrest her


She is accused of helping a criminal to escape.

Neil

The stupid taxi driver!

He could see us in despite of the long distance between the two cars.

INT.- Cafeteria - Railway station -Day

- Ray is sitting.

- Watching the place.

- He stands

- The porter approaches him..

The porter

Can I help you?

Ray

Carry this bag, please.


- Ray is carrying only the bag of money and his guns

- Going to the platform

INT. –The AirPort - Day

- Anne is waiting the plane..

- Watching the place surrounded.

Albert

We must verify from all of those.

- Passengers on the plane in different ages, old, young, women and men

Neil

Is he so professional in disguising to this way!

- Albert & Neil are approaching her.

Albert

Let me introduce myself to you

I'm Albert, from FBI.

- Anne is trying to be calm..

Neil

Neil from Florida police

- Each one of them is showing his I.D. card

Anne

What do you want?

Albert

You have come to Florida one hour ago.

You didn't stay in the hotel

Then you have decided to come back again.

Anne

Is it outlawed?!

Neil

 But, Helping the criminals to escape are outlawed 

Anne

I don't understand

What do you mean?

Albert

Where is Ray?

Anne

Who's Ray? I don't know this Ray!

What is my crime to arrest me?

Albert

Help a criminal to escape.

Anne

I don't know criminals

Neil

You're Ray's lover, we know that

Albert

You were watched from the police

- Taking her out, Get in the car with them.

Int. Florida police - Day

Neil

Please your handbag

Anne

It isn't allow to you that

Commissioner

No, it is allowing....

- Neil opens it.

- Gets a notebook

- Gets mobile out.

Albert

Where's Ray? Is he still in Florida ? Or back to New York ?

Anne

I told you I don't know that Ray.

- Singer sings this song

(the lyric of the song, written by Alaa Soliman)

Title:- Can You Sing With Me?!

Can you sing with me?!

Now.. Sing.. Sing..... Sing.. with me

Believe me.. we have a lot to live together and starting again

Believe me.. we shall coloring our next life with loud color

We are as two birds.. two birds

I can take off my heart.. take off my heart

Then offering it to you

There's no thing shall change our modes.

INT.     Train       - Sunset   - Dissolve 

- The train moves speedy.

- Ray is looking at the sights through the window.

- The song continues -

Sun rises on your face

I'll fly from the earth to the sky

I'll fly with two wings.

Colors dancing front of me

All barriers and forests shall be broken.

Can you sing with me

Sing . sing. sing with me ( END )