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Written By : Alaa Soliman
 
  E-mail      :  alaa.din10@yahoo.com
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
March 2008 , Florida
 
Fade in :
 
INT. - Train    -      Day
 
-              Ray    about 30 years old
 
-              Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache
 
-              Have sunglasses
 
-              Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside      him on a seat .. EXT.  - Railway station – Day
 
          - Train stops 
 
          - Ray gets out from the train curries a bag
 
          - His eyes move in everywhere
 
          - Walks out among the crowd
 
          - Two women behind him
 
-        Whispering, while he can hear them .
 
 
 
Woman ( l )
 
How handsome that man !
 
He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.
 
Woman ( 2 )
 
Captain !
 
His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors
 
  INT.        - Ray's car              - Night
 
-        Black Ford Car 4x4
 
-        A street corner
 
-        Street is calm has little moving .
 
-        Ray inside the car without mustache
 
-        Smoking a cigarette .
 
-        Wears black T. shirt & jeans
 
- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....
 
-        Tony appears
 
-        Tony is about 32 years old.
 
-        Opening the door and sits beside him
 
- Lighting a cigarette
 
Tony
 
        Everything is ok ?
 
Ray
 
        Florida …. a wonder state !
 
        Everything is ok
 
Tony
 
        When did you decide to execute the first mission?
 
Ray
 
Saturday at night
 
Tony
 
After 3 days !!
 
Ray
 
        This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray
 
Tony
 
        I thought you shall kill him in his office
 
 
 
Ray
 
 
 
I found this is a very difficult
 
 
 
Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .
 
I planned for everything accurately
 
Tony
 
You're skillful in planning !
 
Ray
 
This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....
 
Tony
 
      I hope the mission won't be exceeded !
 
Ray
 
Won't exceed
 
Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,
 
I become more ardent to kill them .
 
Especially the bold one
 
Tony
 
        That bold shall leave the life next Saturday
 
Dissolve
 
Ext. – Robin's house      - Night
 
-        It consists of 4 floors
 
-        House is very luxury
 
-        A green area and plenty of trees
 
-        Ray's car is far in the backside .
 
INT.    -      Robin's car  - Night
 
-        Mercedes car
 
-        Robin is about 50 years old
 
-        Bold, very Rich....
 
-        Seating in the back seat
 
-        His private guards in another car back him
 
-        Driver drives the car
 
INT.  Robin's house    -an office room -Night
 
-        Office room is rather dark
 
-        Few light coming from out.
 
-        Ray inside the office room
 
-        Carrying a guns
 
-        Looks from the window
 
-        Getting out from the room careful
 
        INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night               
 
-        Ray is hiding behind a column
 
-        Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.
 
-        Gets attention    ……..  (Steady position to shoot. )
 
Ext.    -  Robin's house  -  Night
 
-        Robin arrives
 
-        Getting out from the car
 
-        He walks to the house entrance
 
-        Four guards around him
 
-        Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards
 
  Int. - Robin's house -  Reception - Night 
 
-        Light turns on
 
-        Robin enters to the office room with two guards
 
-        Ray nears from the window
 
-        Looks
 
-        Seeing two guards outside
 
-        Nears from the office room
 
   
 
-        Pushing the door by his foot
 
-          Ray shots a guard in his stomach.
 
-    Rushing into the office room
 
INT. - Robin's  house - an office room
 
-        Ray shoots Robin's head
 
-        With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury
 
-        The guard shoots Ray
 
-        Protecting himself through the door against shots
 
-        Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor
 
-        The guard is still alive beside the door
 
-        Tries to get his gun
 
-        Ray shots him while running, injuring his head
 
-        Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once
 
-        Ray runs towards the house door
 
-        A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside
 
-        Ray runs to out
 
Ext.    - Robin's House  - Night
 
-        A guard shoots
 
-        Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him
 
-        Steady to shoot
 
-        Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand
 
-        Runs
 
-        Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder
 
-        Drives his car with high speed
 
INT.  - Ray's car  - Night
 
-        Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury
 
-        He tries to overcome the pain
 
Ext.  - Private hospital  - Night
 
-        Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance
 
Int. - Hospital – corridor
 
-        A group of nurses
 
Ray
 
        Where the Emergency room?
 
A nurse
 
        The third room in the corridor end at right
 
A nurse
 
        What happened to you?
 
Ray
 
        Nothing serious
 
Int. - Emergency Room
 
-        Ray enters
 
-        Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed
 
-        A nurse enters
 
The nurse
 
        There's a child injured in his foot
 
        Calls Doctor Steve?
 
The doctor
 
Quickly
 
-        She gets out
 
-        Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid
 
The doctor
 
        Your wound isn't easy
 
        Is this shoot!  Isn't it?
 
Ray
 
Yes
 
The doctor
 
How you could bear such hard pain?
 
        Little people can bear pain such as you .
 
        Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger.
 
        The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!!
 
        The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound
 
        Are you policeman?
 
        Or someone shoot you?
 
Ray
 
-        From Florida police
 
-        The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse
 
-        A child has about nine years, crying
 
The nurse
 
        Bring the child here in the bed
 
-        The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain
 
-        Doctor Steve enters with two nurses
 
-        Begin to make the necessary aid for the child
 
-        Grandmother cries
 
The nurse
 
Be quite.. quite
 
        He shall be fine
 
Doctor Steve
 
        Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen
 
-        the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child
 
-        But Ray can see the child's face
 
The doctor
 
        Did you follow a criminal?
 
Ray
 
        An murderer criminal
 
The doctor
 
        This is too much cost paid by policemen
 
Ray
 
        That is right
 
The doctor
 
        You offer several sacrifices for us
 
(To the nurse)              what about the child.. ?
 
The nurse
 
        The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot .
 
Ray
 
        This is a very painful for a child in such age
 
The doctor
 
        Do you feel better now?
 
Ray
 
        Rather
 
The doctor
 
        Check his pressure
 
        Currently we don't need more that this
 
        Some analgesic for pain after surgery.
 
Ray
 
Thank you
 
The doctor
 
        Surely your pressure is lower
 
        You bleed too much
 
The nurse
 
        His blood pressure is really lower
 
The doctor
 
        Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours
 
        But the wound has been cleaned
 
-        Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain
 
The doctor
 
        You should be in a rest today
 
-        Ray tries to get up
 
-        Feels pain
 
The doctor
 
        To where?
 
Ray
 
        I can't stay in the hospital
 
        Thanks, anyway
 
The doctor
 
Why?
 
        Your wound needs some care
 
        Why you insist to go now?
 
Ray
 
        I must go now
 
        Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again
 
-        Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child
 
Ray ( to doctor Steve )
 
        What about his wound ?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        He shall improve at anyway
 
Ray
 
        Are you his grandmother?
 
The grandmother
 
        Yes
 
Ray
 
        What's his name?
 
The grandmother
 
        Anthony
 
Ray
 
        A handsome and charm boy
 
Doctor Steve
 
Don't worry
 
He shall be recovered
 
This shall take times.....
 
The grandmother
 
        How long?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        About 10 days, maybe rather more
 
The grandmother
 
        Should we come to hospital for another time?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so.....
 
The grandmother
 
        Thank you
 
-        Anthony crying but little
 
-        Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other
 
Ray
 
        Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony?
 
The grandmother
 
        Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532
 
The doctor
 
        I didn't know your name yet.
 
Ray
 
        I'm Ray
 
The doctor
 
        I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve.
 
 
 
-        Ray looks to Anthony
 
                                     
 
Ray
 
Thank you.
 
-        Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.
 
Int. - Ray's apartment  - Night
 
A luxury apartment
 
        Ray is setting, drinks
 
        - Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne .
 
        - A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall
 
        - Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money
 
        - Looks to the other man's photo
 
        - Puts the cup of Brandy
 
        - Picks the gun up
 
        - Aiming the gun towards the man's photo
 
Ray
 
        Now is your turn
 
        Did you prepare your coffin?
 
        Ray's shot shall penetrate your head
 
        Your life becomes just little days.
 
        Your face is ugly!
 
    Makes me furious like your dead friend!
 
  Ext.        - Anthony's house - Day
 
-        Ray arrives in his car
 
-        Without wound bandage
 
  Int.  - Anthony's Apartment - Day
 
-        Knocking the door
 
-        The grandmother opens
 
The grandmother
 
        Welcome Mr. . Ray
 
Ray
 
        Good morning
 
The grandmother
 
        Please come in
 
-        He enters
 
Ray
 
        How is my friend Anthony now?
 
The grandmother
 
        He's sleeping since two hours
 
        Took analgesic then slept at once.
 
Ray
 
        A boy full of vital and joy!
 
The grandmother
 
        Would you like seeing him?
 
Ray
 
        I come exactly for this purpose
 
The grandmother
 
        With pleasure
 
-        To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen
 
-        Opening the door
 
-        Ray enters
 
 
 
Int.  - Anthony's bedroom      - Day
 
-        Looks to the innocent child's face
 
-        Gets out then gently closing the door
 
Int.  - Hall
 
Ray
 
        What about the pain?
 
The grandmother
 
        Every day improves than before .
 
        It was unforgettable day!
 
I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.
 
      When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood
 
        I wept also, Maybe I would faint
 
Ray
 
        Anthony looks like me when I was his age
 
The grandmother
 
        Really?!!
 
        Are you recovered from your injury?
 
Ray
 
          Rather
 
        Are you live with Anthony alone?
 
The grandmother
 
  His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me
 
        I don't know what I can say to them when ask me!
 
       
 
Ray
 
        Don't tell them anything.
 
        Don't make them worry.
 
The grandmother
 
        There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them
 
       
 
        My temper doesn’t bear anymore!
 
        I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years.
 
-        Anthony's voice from his bedroom
 
Anthony
 
        Grandma..      grandma
 
-        Ray with the grandmother to the room
 
Int.  - Anthony's bedroom
 
Anthony
 
        Ray!... My friend..
 
Ray
 
        My friend Anthony
 
Anthony
 
        I'm very glad to see you
 
Ray
 
        Do you feel any pain right now?
 
Anthony
 
        Pain hurts me from time to another
 
        But it isn't hard
 
Anthony
 
        And you?
 
        Is your shoulder hurts you?
 
Ray
 
        Sometime
 
        Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage
 
Anthony
 
        I will not do it again
 
But you didn't tell me?
 
Ray
 
        Tell you what?
 
Anthony
 
        How your shoulder injured?
 
Ray
 
        Is this important?
 
Anthony
 
        I'd like to know
 
Ray
 
        One of the murderer criminal shoot me
 
Anthony
 
        Why?
 
                                 
 
 
 
Ray
 
  I…
 
-The grandmother interrupt Ray
 
The grandmother
 
        Do feel hungry Anthony?
 
Anthony
 
No, no
 
        I don't feel hungry now
 
        I want to drink water
 
        - Ray pouring him a glass of water
 
        - Grandmother looks to her watch
 
The grandmother
 
        After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication
 
        Its time after half an hour
 
Ray
 
        Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age
 
Anthony
 
        Am I ?
 
        I'm glad to hear that my friend
 
        Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself?
 
Int. - Florida police    - corridor    -Day
 
Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office
 
Int. - Florida police  -the commissioner's office
 
 
 
Neil gets in
 
Commissioner
 
        Robin is the Ray's first victim
 
                                Neil
 
        Maybe there's other victim or victims!  
 
Commissioner
 
        Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..!  
 
        Where's Albert?
 
Neil
 
      I saw him parking his car
 
        We shall do our best to arrest him
 
        We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida
 
        Time is very important
 
Commissioner
 
              We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent
 
        This made him in the list of the most wanted
 
-        Searching some documents on the desk
 
All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .
 
Neil
 
        Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control!  
 
-        Albert from FBI enters
 
Commissioner
 
        Is there new news?

Revision as of 09:13, 26 April 2009

can someone plese fix this site!!!!!

there is some guys random crap on your main page!!!