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== Who wrote this?  Who administers the site? ==
 
                      WANTED
 
 
 
 
 
Written By : Alaa Soliman
 
  E-mail      :  alaa.din10@yahoo.com
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
March 2008 , Florida
 
Fade in :
 
INT. - Train    -      Day
 
-              Ray    about 30 years old
 
-              Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache
 
-              Have sunglasses
 
-              Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside      him on a seat .. EXT.  - Railway station – Day
 
          - Train stops 
 
          - Ray gets out from the train curries a bag
 
          - His eyes move in everywhere
 
          - Walks out among the crowd
 
          - Two women behind him
 
-        Whispering, while he can hear them .
 
 
 
Woman ( l )
 
How handsome that man !
 
He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.
 
Woman ( 2 )
 
Captain !
 
His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors
 
  INT.        - Ray's car              - Night
 
-        Black Ford Car 4x4
 
-        A street corner
 
-        Street is calm has little moving .
 
-        Ray inside the car without mustache
 
-        Smoking a cigarette .
 
-        Wears black T. shirt & jeans
 
- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....
 
-        Tony appears
 
-        Tony is about 32 years old.
 
-        Opening the door and sits beside him
 
- Lighting a cigarette
 
Tony
 
        Everything is ok ?
 
Ray
 
        Florida …. a wonder state !
 
        Everything is ok
 
Tony
 
        When did you decide to execute the first mission?
 
Ray
 
Saturday at night
 
Tony
 
After 3 days !!
 
Ray
 
        This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray
 
Tony
 
        I thought you shall kill him in his office
 
 
 
Ray
 
 
 
I found this is a very difficult
 
 
 
Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .
 
I planned for everything accurately
 
Tony
 
You're skillful in planning !
 
Ray
 
This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....
 
Tony
 
      I hope the mission won't be exceeded !
 
Ray
 
Won't exceed
 
Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,
 
I become more ardent to kill them .
 
Especially the bold one
 
Tony
 
        That bold shall leave the life next Saturday
 
Dissolve
 
Ext. – Robin's house      - Night
 
-        It consists of 4 floors
 
-        House is very luxury
 
-        A green area and plenty of trees
 
-        Ray's car is far in the backside .
 
INT.    -      Robin's car  - Night
 
-        Mercedes car
 
-        Robin is about 50 years old
 
-        Bold, very Rich....
 
-        Seating in the back seat
 
-        His private guards in another car back him
 
-        Driver drives the car
 
INT.  Robin's house    -an office room -Night
 
-        Office room is rather dark
 
-        Few light coming from out.
 
-        Ray inside the office room
 
-        Carrying a guns
 
-        Looks from the window
 
-        Getting out from the room careful
 
        INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night               
 
-        Ray is hiding behind a column
 
-        Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.
 
-        Gets attention    ……..  (Steady position to shoot. )
 
Ext.    -  Robin's house  -  Night
 
-        Robin arrives
 
-        Getting out from the car
 
-        He walks to the house entrance
 
-        Four guards around him
 
-        Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards
 
  Int. - Robin's house -  Reception - Night 
 
-        Light turns on
 
-        Robin enters to the office room with two guards
 
-        Ray nears from the window
 
-        Looks
 
-        Seeing two guards outside
 
-        Nears from the office room
 
   
 
-        Pushing the door by his foot
 
-          Ray shots a guard in his stomach.
 
-    Rushing into the office room
 
INT. - Robin's  house - an office room
 
-        Ray shoots Robin's head
 
-        With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury
 
-        The guard shoots Ray
 
-        Protecting himself through the door against shots
 
-        Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor
 
-        The guard is still alive beside the door
 
-        Tries to get his gun
 
-        Ray shots him while running, injuring his head
 
-        Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once
 
-        Ray runs towards the house door
 
-        A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside
 
-        Ray runs to out
 
Ext.    - Robin's House  - Night
 
-        A guard shoots
 
-        Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him
 
-        Steady to shoot
 
-        Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand
 
-        Runs
 
-        Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder
 
-        Drives his car with high speed
 
INT.  - Ray's car  - Night
 
-        Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury
 
-        He tries to overcome the pain
 
Ext.  - Private hospital  - Night
 
-        Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance
 
Int. - Hospital – corridor
 
-        A group of nurses
 
Ray
 
        Where the Emergency room?
 
A nurse
 
        The third room in the corridor end at right
 
A nurse
 
        What happened to you?
 
Ray
 
        Nothing serious
 
Int. - Emergency Room
 
-        Ray enters
 
-        Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed
 
-        A nurse enters
 
The nurse
 
        There's a child injured in his foot
 
        Calls Doctor Steve?
 
The doctor
 
Quickly
 
-        She gets out
 
-        Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid
 
The doctor
 
        Your wound isn't easy
 
        Is this shoot!  Isn't it?
 
Ray
 
Yes
 
The doctor
 
How you could bear such hard pain?
 
        Little people can bear pain such as you .
 
        Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger.
 
        The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!!
 
        The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound
 
        Are you policeman?
 
        Or someone shoot you?
 
Ray
 
-        From Florida police
 
-        The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse
 
-        A child has about nine years, crying
 
The nurse
 
        Bring the child here in the bed
 
-        The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain
 
-        Doctor Steve enters with two nurses
 
-        Begin to make the necessary aid for the child
 
-        Grandmother cries
 
The nurse
 
Be quite.. quite
 
        He shall be fine
 
Doctor Steve
 
        Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen
 
-        the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child
 
-        But Ray can see the child's face
 
The doctor
 
        Did you follow a criminal?
 
Ray
 
        An murderer criminal
 
The doctor
 
        This is too much cost paid by policemen
 
Ray
 
        That is right
 
The doctor
 
        You offer several sacrifices for us
 
(To the nurse)              what about the child.. ?
 
The nurse
 
        The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot .
 
Ray
 
        This is a very painful for a child in such age
 
The doctor
 
        Do you feel better now?
 
Ray
 
        Rather
 
The doctor
 
        Check his pressure
 
        Currently we don't need more that this
 
        Some analgesic for pain after surgery.
 
Ray
 
Thank you
 
The doctor
 
        Surely your pressure is lower
 
        You bleed too much
 
The nurse
 
        His blood pressure is really lower
 
The doctor
 
        Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours
 
        But the wound has been cleaned
 
-        Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain
 
The doctor
 
        You should be in a rest today
 
-        Ray tries to get up
 
-        Feels pain
 
The doctor
 
        To where?
 
Ray
 
        I can't stay in the hospital
 
        Thanks, anyway
 
The doctor
 
Why?
 
        Your wound needs some care
 
        Why you insist to go now?
 
Ray
 
        I must go now
 
        Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again
 
-        Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child
 
Ray ( to doctor Steve )
 
        What about his wound ?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        He shall improve at anyway
 
Ray
 
        Are you his grandmother?
 
The grandmother
 
        Yes
 
Ray
 
        What's his name?
 
The grandmother
 
        Anthony
 
Ray
 
        A handsome and charm boy
 
Doctor Steve
 
Don't worry
 
He shall be recovered
 
This shall take times.....
 
The grandmother
 
        How long?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        About 10 days, maybe rather more
 
The grandmother
 
        Should we come to hospital for another time?
 
Doctor Steve
 
        No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so.....
 
The grandmother
 
        Thank you
 
-        Anthony crying but little
 
-        Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other
 
Ray
 
        Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony?
 
The grandmother
 
        Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532
 
The doctor
 
        I didn't know your name yet.
 
Ray
 
        I'm Ray
 
The doctor
 
        I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve.
 
 
 
-        Ray looks to Anthony
 
                                     
 
Ray
 
Thank you.
 
-        Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.
 
Int. - Ray's apartment  - Night
 
A luxury apartment
 
        Ray is setting, drinks
 
        - Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne .
 
        - A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall
 
        - Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money
 
        - Looks to the other man's photo
 
        - Puts the cup of Brandy
 
        - Picks the gun up
 
        - Aiming the gun towards the man's photo
 
Ray
 
        Now is your turn
 
        Did you prepare your coffin?
 
        Ray's shot shall penetrate your head
 
        Your life becomes just little days.
 
        Your face is ugly!
 
    Makes me furious like your dead friend!
 
  Ext.        - Anthony's house - Day
 
-        Ray arrives in his car
 
-        Without wound bandage
 
  Int.  - Anthony's Apartment - Day
 
-        Knocking the door
 
-        The grandmother opens
 
The grandmother
 
        Welcome Mr. . Ray
 
Ray
 
        Good morning
 
The grandmother
 
        Please come in
 
-        He enters
 
Ray
 
        How is my friend Anthony now?
 
The grandmother
 
        He's sleeping since two hours
 
        Took analgesic then slept at once.
 
Ray
 
        A boy full of vital and joy!
 
The grandmother
 
        Would you like seeing him?
 
Ray
 
        I come exactly for this purpose
 
The grandmother
 
        With pleasure
 
-        To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen
 
-        Opening the door
 
-        Ray enters
 
 
 
Int.  - Anthony's bedroom      - Day
 
-        Looks to the innocent child's face
 
-        Gets out then gently closing the door
 
Int.  - Hall
 
Ray
 
        What about the pain?
 
The grandmother
 
        Every day improves than before .
 
        It was unforgettable day!
 
I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.
 
      When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood
 
        I wept also, Maybe I would faint
 
Ray
 
        Anthony looks like me when I was his age
 
The grandmother
 
        Really?!!
 
        Are you recovered from your injury?
 
Ray
 
          Rather
 
        Are you live with Anthony alone?
 
The grandmother
 
  His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me
 
        I don't know what I can say to them when ask me!
 
       
 
Ray
 
        Don't tell them anything.
 
        Don't make them worry.
 
The grandmother
 
        There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them
 
       
 
        My temper doesn’t bear anymore!
 
        I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years.
 
-        Anthony's voice from his bedroom
 
Anthony
 
        Grandma..      grandma
 
-        Ray with the grandmother to the room
 
Int.  - Anthony's bedroom
 
Anthony
 
        Ray!... My friend..
 
Ray
 
        My friend Anthony
 
Anthony
 
        I'm very glad to see you
 
Ray
 
        Do you feel any pain right now?
 
Anthony
 
        Pain hurts me from time to another
 
        But it isn't hard
 
Anthony
 
        And you?
 
        Is your shoulder hurts you?
 
Ray
 
        Sometime
 
        Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage
 
Anthony
 
        I will not do it again
 
But you didn't tell me?
 
Ray
 
        Tell you what?
 
Anthony
 
        How your shoulder injured?
 
Ray
 
        Is this important?
 
Anthony
 
        I'd like to know
 
Ray
 
        One of the murderer criminal shoot me
 
Anthony
 
        Why?
 
                                 
 
 
 
Ray
 
  I…….
 
-The grandmother interrupt Ray
 
The grandmother
 
        Do feel hungry Anthony?
 
Anthony
 
No, no
 
        I don't feel hungry now
 
        I want to drink water
 
        - Ray pouring him a glass of water
 
        - Grandmother looks to her watch
 
The grandmother
 
        After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication
 
        Its time after half an hour
 
Ray
 
        Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age
 
Anthony
 
        Am I ?
 
        I'm glad to hear that my friend
 
        Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself?
 
Int. - Florida police    - corridor    -Day
 
Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office
 
Int. - Florida police  -the commissioner's office
 
 
 
Neil gets in
 
Commissioner
 
        Robin is the Ray's first victim
 
                                Neil
 
        Maybe there's other victim or victims!
 
Commissioner
 
        Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..!
 
        Where's Albert?
 
Neil
 
      I saw him parking his car
 
        We shall do our best to arrest him
 
        We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida
 
        Time is very important
 
Commissioner
 
              We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent
 
        This made him in the list of the most wanted
 
-        Searching some documents on the desk
 
All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .
 
Neil
 
        Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control!
 
-        Albert from FBI enters
 
Commissioner
 
        Is there new news?
 
 
 
Albert
 
        There's no news except what we have verified
 
        A killed shoot in the victim's head by Ray!
 
Neil
 
        If one of Robin's guard still alive, we couldn't verify that the guard recognized his photo as soon as shown it
 
Albert
 
Yes
 
        In addition that, this criminal has super ability to aim the goal accurately, he distinguishes with disguise
 
Commissioner
 
We thank Ray that he didn't disguise when executing this
 
crime
 
Albert
 
        Since 6 months, we assured from our source that it was agreed with him to kill one of the elected person in the local municipality elections for the benefit of other elected in one of New York Subsidiaries, but so sorry it could approve the accusation on such elected.
 
Commissioner
 
It must arrest him before making more crimes, he considers a threat for public security
 
 
 
Albert
 
It should increase investigations in everywhere may suspecting to be there.
 
Neil
 
Many investigators and private detective are spreading now in everywhere.
 
- Ray's photo on the computer's monitor front of him
 
Commissioner
 
        What about the next plan?
 
        Did you discussed it together?
 
Neil
 
        Yes we discussed
 
Albert
 
        We have some notices shall be discussed together
 
Neil
 
I think if could hold this thread, it is probably arrest him
 
Commissioner
 
The success of this plan firstly depends on Brain's agreement to work with us without force.
 
Neil
 
This is very important
 
He departure the prison just from short time
 
Albert
 
If we could persuade him to work with us as a nark! It shall be good!
 
Brain Knows most Rich Businessmen and many persons who pay money versus killing.
 
He has multiple relationships with several gangs and murderers in Florida ! I think he shall do much if agreed to work with us!
 
Commissioner
 
Ok., we see what will happen with him 
 
Int. -  Ray's Car    -  Day
 
-        Listening to hit music
 
-        Mobile ringing
 
-        Turning down the music
 
Ray
 
Yes
 
Tony! Where are you?
 
Intercut with Tony in his Car – Day
 
Tony
 
                In my car
 
Ray
 
                I'm also in the car
 
Tony
 
                Are going to the apartment?
 
Ray
 
                Yes
 
Tony
 
                Ok, I will be at you after half an hour
 
-        Ray returns to hit music again
 
Int. -      Ray's apartment    - Day
 
-Ray holding a cup of wine
 
 
 
- Bell 's sound
 
- Opens the door
 
- Tony enters
 
                                          Ray
 
      Look……
 
- Refers to Anne's photo
 
Tony
 
        A charm woman!
 
        Wonder blond! Her golden hair makes her more charm and fascinating.
 
        She's really beautiful
 
Ray
 
        Would you like a cup?
 
Tony
 
        I'll be thankful
 
-        Ray prepare him a Cup
 
Tony
 
        In the newspaper, I saw the bold … Robin's photo shoot in his head
 
- Ray smiling
 
Tony
 
How I felt proud when you told me, you achieved the first mission!
 
I felt proud because my friend is a professional, never miss his goals
 
Ray
 
Tony…. Do you remember our last days in New York ?
 
Tony
 
I wish if such days returned again whatever for just one day!
 
It was nice days; I left New York to Florida . Since Hank told me that he wants to kill two persons and needs a professional to finishing those at once, I imagine you
 
Ray
 
        Hank pays a lot of money!
 
Tony
 
        He has great wealth
 
        He considers one of businessmen here in  Florida    . Everything, Trade and Industry.
 
Ray
 
        Drugs!
 
Tony
 
        No, no ,
 
He doesn't need more money
 
- Tony stands
 
- Fetch another Cup of wine , lighting a cigarette
 
        You didn't tell me about Robin, How could get the house?  Alarm system in everywhere, Secret doors, Guarding dogs
 
Ray
 
It wasn't a problem to me
 
Tony
 
Do you agree with me that the most danger gang that consisting of just one person… that's you?
 
Ray
 
I agree
 
Tony
 
I affirm that I admire you, Since We
 
Known each other and become friends from 12 years …!
 
-Tony puts his hand on his shoulder
 
Tony
 
Is your shoulder has been recovered?
 
Ray
 
Yes
 
Also Anthony can walk now
 
Exactly Ray but a child, when I saw him I felt that I'm facing myself when I was a child!
 
        Anthony asked me about the reason of my shoulder's injury? I forced to lie!
 
I told him that a criminal shot me … then he asked me about the reason too!
 
I dodged to answer … what I would telling him?!
 
I injured when providing a murder mission …! I don't like to know that.
 
Maybe he doesn't understand anything … but I don't like Anthony to know !
 
INT.          Brain's apartment – Bedroom – Night
 
-        Brain the criminal
 
-        Naked in bed with a naked woman
 
                            The woman
 
I'd like to be with you forever
 
How days, months and years have lost when you were in prison
 
Brain
 
            We shall recover those days now
 
-        Kissing her
 
-        Suddenly
 
Neil and Albert pushing the door strongly
 
-        Aiming their guns towards Brain's face
 
Brain
 
Who are you?        How did you get in?
 
-The woman screaming…. Putting bed sheet on her breast to cover it.
 
Brain
 
What do you want?
 
 
 
Neil
 
Florida police
 
Albert
 
FBI
 
Brain
 
What do you want?
 
I'm arrested?
 
If so, why?
 
Albert
 
You aren’t arrested exactly
 
It is our luck that door was rather opened so we entered
 
Brain
 
I want to know what's happened.
 
Neil
 
You will know everything
 
Brain
 
Shall you take me naked?
 
Albert
 
Wear your clothes then let us go
 
Brain (to Neil )
 
The pants beside you on the chair
 
I'll wear pants under over … would you please?
 
The woman
 
And me …. And me
 
Albert
 
Calm down for a while. you aren't aimed for anything
 
Brain
 
May you bring please?
 
Or you want to down from the bed then walking naked as I born front of you!
 
-        Neil throwing the pants on air then falling on his face
 
Brain
 
        Thanks
 
-        Trying to wear the pants ……. He still under bed sheet
 
-        Suddenly throwing the bed sheet on Neil's face
 
-        Quickly getting up
 
-        Pushing Albert by his hand
 
-        Takes his shirt quickly
 
-        The woman screaming
 
-        Brain running.. escaping from the apartment
 
Ext.        - Street            - Night
 
-        Wearing his shirt while running
 
-        Albert & Neil run after him
 
Neil
 
Stop Brain .. stop
 
Albert
 
Don't ever shoot
 
-        Hides behind a vettura
 
 
 
 
 
Neil
 
Rascal!
 
Albert
 
Damned! .. Vile!
 
Ext.        - streets -Crowd              - Night
 
Albert
 
He's there
 
-        Running
 
-        Brain among crowd, cars ,people
 
-        Trying to stop any car, but useless
 
-        Running among people
 
-        All go away from him
 
-        Hiding behind a stopped car
 
-        Careful, looks through car's glass
 
-        Sees Neil & Albert
 
-        Tries to open car's door
 
The car's Owner
 
Get away of  my car
 
- Brain    strike his face strongly
 
Neil
 
Is he lost in the crowed?
 
-        Brain running
 
-        Hits with a man, falling together
 
-        Quickly gets up
 
-        Keep running
 
Neil
 
He falls there!
 
-        Running towards him
 
-        Red Pontiac car driven by a woman was steady to be stopped
 
-        Brain pushes her out
 
-        The woman screaming
 
-        Brain rushing into the car
 
-        Drives the car with high speed
 
  -        A taxi is passing in this moment
 
-        Albert stops the taxi.
 
Int. - Taxi      - Streets          - Night
 
Albert
 
Quickly follow that red car
 
We're police
 
-        Neil makes a  contact
 
-        Neil
 
Unit 15
 
Unit 15
 
We're in san Dircy street , We need a police car to halt the way front of the fugitive. Right now. Red Pontiac car
 
Albert( to the taxi driver )
 
Don't let him runaway
 
                                      The taxi driver
 
He's crazy!
 
What this rash does? What is his crime? ...... why
 
Do you chasing him? !
 
Is he stolen this car?
 
Albert
 
Don't talk too much.
 
Keep following
 
Don't let him escape
 
Int.        - Streets  - The red car 
 
-        Brain drives the car frivolity
 
-        Crushing a car
 
-        Keep his way
 
Ext.                - Police car            - Night
 
-        Police car moves
 
Int. - Taxi      - Streets 
 
Albert
 
Foolish!
 
Neil
 
He near from the highway
 
 
 
Ext.        - The red car  - Street    - Night
 
-        Car's steering wheel out of his control
 
-        Crushing two cars
 
-        Getting away from the street
 
-        Brain turns with the car then keep his way
 
Ext.        - Police car   
 
-        Police car appears
 
 
 
Int. - Police car    - Night
 
-        3 Policemen
 
-        One of them makes a  contact
 
-Picks the microphone to call in
 
                                  The policeman
 
We can 't halt the way !
 
Very crowed !
 
 
 
Ext.  –The red car – Highway –Night
 
The red car to the Highway
 
Int..        - The taxi        - Highway             
 
Albert
 
We must contact the first intersection
 
-        Neil makes a contact
 
Neil
 
Unit 15 ..  unit 15
 
Telling the first intersection with car's details
 
Int.  - Police car    - Highway              - Night
 
The policeman
 
I'll do order right now
 
-        Picks up the microphone to call in
 
Intersection A
 
Intersection A
 
From Intersection
 
I hear you
 
The policeman
 
Here unit 15  ,A red Pontiac car
 
Its numbers panel is crushed
 
Driven by a man
 
You should stop this car
 
Int. -The red car    - Highway             
 
-        Brain trying to cross a big truck next to him
 
-        Steering wheel out of his control
 
-        The car gets away from the way
 
Ext.        -The red car - Highway                - Night
 
-The car crushing with the iron barrier
 
- Turning over many times
 
-        Police car stop
 
-        The taxi stop
 
-        Running towards Brain
 
-        Brain's face bleeding
 
Neil
 
Is he still alive?
 
Albert
 
I don't think so
 
                                        The taxi driver
 
Can I go?
 
Albert
 
We thank you
 
                                          The taxi driver
 
I'm always helping policemen
 
Is this crazy dead?
 
Int.  -  Neil's office    -Day
 
Neil & Albert
 
Neil
 
Our thread has been cut!
 
Albert
 
He's died!      I think we mistaken when we entered to his bedroom armed
 
-        Ray's photo on the wall …  [ Wanted ]
 
Neil
 
Don't forget Brain is a danger criminal
 
Always armed, shooting anyone facing his way
 
Albert
 
He though that we came to arrest him
 
Neil
 
He always used to escape from policemen
 
-        Mobile rings
 
Albert
 
Yes
 
When?
 
Watching 24 hours a day
 
Ok …  ok
 
Albert
 
There's a call from FBI
 
Neil
 
About Anne?
 
Albert
 
I asked to watch her 24 hours a day
 
Neil
 
        Maybe longing and yearning to her lover makes her coming to Florida
 
Albert
 
This is just probability
 
She will be under watching
 
Neil
 
If so, she will make a great help
 
Int. - Anthony's house - bedroom      - Day
 
-        Anthony wears his clothes
 
Anthony
 
What is your opinion about this red t. shirt?
 
Ray
 
As you like
 
Anthony
 
I ask you my friend
 
Ray
 
This red is elegant
 
Anthony
 
Ok
 
-The grandmother enters
 
Anthony
 
I didn't go out since 20 days grand ma … !
 
The grandmother
 
Anthony, you must be careful
 
Ray
 
Be quiet about him
 
-        Anthony combs his hair
 
Anthony
 
I 'm finished
 
Ray
 
Let 's go
 
-Ray helps him
 
Anthony( to his grandmother )
 
Do you change your mind and come with us?
 
-        Getting out from the room
 
Int. - Anthony's house - the hall
 
- She opens the door
 
The grandmother
 
Please Mr. Ray don't be late
 
Ray
 
We shall not
 
Ext. - Anthony's house  – Day
 
-        Ray helps Anthony to get in the car
 
-        Puts him safety belt
 
-        The boy salutes his  grandma
 
-        She salutes him
 
-        The car moves
 
 
 
Int. Ray's Car – Day
 
Ray
 
Would you Italian Food?
 
Anthony
 
Pizza?
 
Ray
 
Pizza.. Do you like pizza?
 
Anthony
 
I think nobody dislike it.
 
Pizza…. Italian food !
 
Ray
 
Also Italy distinguishing with macaroni..
 
Anthony
 
Did you visit Italy before?
 
Ray
 
Since 7 years!
 
Anthony
 
Do you like Pizza my friend?
 
                                      Ray
 
As you said  ....No body dislike pizza
 
Anthony
 
To the Italian pizza
 
Ray
 
When your parents come?
 
Anthony
 
I don't know
 
My father called yesterday but didn't tell anything
 
Ray
 
Did you talk with him
 
Anthony
 
Little
 
He called lately at night
 
I was sleepy
 
My grandma didn't tell him about my accident
 
She told me to not say anything
 
                                      Ray
 
well done
 
Anthony
 
Mum will be so sad when knowing what happened to me and of course dad too.
 
But when they come, I shall tell them about you!
 
Ray
 
Me?!
 
What you will say?
 
 
 
Anthony
 
I shall say you're my new friend
 
Although you're older than me
 
How old are you?
 
Ray
 
Guess?
 
Anthony
 
25 , 28 years
 
Ray
 
How old are you exactly?
 
Anthony
 
9 years
 
Ray
 
I'm older than you about 21 years
 
Anthony
 
30 years
 
Ray
 
I seem older or younger?
 
Anthony
 
Seem younger
 
Ext.                The restaurant        - Day
 
-        The car is parking
 
-        Ray get out
 
-        Helps Anthony to getting out
 
 
 
Ray
 
What about this Italian restaurant?
 
It offers all kind of Italian food , especially pizza
 
-They enter
 
Int. The restaurant        - Day
 
Anthony
 
Is there unoccupied table!
 
What shall we do now  ?
 
Going to other restaurant ? … we haven't luck to eat pizza  today ?! 
 
Ray
 
This time usually crowded
 
-Ray sees unoccupied table
 
Ray
 
There's one
 
-They go to unoccupied table … seating
 
-        Waiter gives each one a menu
 
Ray
 
2 pizza
 
Waiter
 
Which kind?
 
Ray
 
All in the menu?
 
Waiter
 
Yes
 
                                  Anthony
 
Great!
 
There're many kinds … sea food pizza, vegetables, meat and others.
 
I take pizza with vegetables
 
And you?
 
Ray
 
Me..
 
This.. no
 
Pizza with tune
 
Waiter
 
Ok sir
 
Anthony
 
Look..
 
-Ray turns around
 
Ray
 
What?
 
Anthony
 
This fat man!
 
Eats with a funny way!
 
Eats gluttony! Doesn't care anyone around him.
 
Doesn't feel shame?!
 
Ray
 
In which class are you in?
 
 
 
Anthony
 
Fifth class
 
Ray
 
Are you success or not?
 
Anthony
 
I didn't fall up till now in any exam
 
Ray
 
What would you like to be?
 
Anthony
 
A pilot in U.S. Air forces
 
Ray
 
Do you like air ?
 
Anthony
 
I like planes and pilot's uniform
 
But I prefer warplanes than civilian planes
 
I keep many pictures from magazines and internet about warplanes F16  – F 22 , Ghost, French Mirage, and others . 
 
- Waiter brings the pizza
 
Anthony
 
Delicious!
 
Isn't it?
 
Ray
 
Very delicious!
 
Anthony
 
I forget to ask you, what is your job?
 
Ray
 
Why do ask me about my job?
 
Anthony
 
I want to know everything about you.
 
Ray
 
As you guessed my age, can you guess my job?!
 
Anthony
 
This is very difficult!..
 
Ext.        Gym  center – Day
 
-        Tony 's BMW car stopped next to the Gym  center
 
-        Getting out from the car
 
-        Enters
 
Int.  Gym  Center – Day
 
-        Tony walks till reaching the receptionist
 
-        Talks with him
 
-        Turns around then going to a hall
 
Int.  Gym – Center
 
-        Looking around
 
-        The center has some men and youth in different ages practicing sport with devices
 
-        Tony sees Mr.Hank ,about 55 years old
 
-        Hank Manilow , one of businessmen , and the most rich man
 
-        Tony going forward to him
 
Tony
 
Mr. Hank
 
Hank
 
Tony! … What do you want?
 
Tony
 
Don't want see me?
 
Hank
 
I told you before we shouldn't meet till finishing everything!
 
Tony
 
That's right
 
But …
 
Hank
 
But what?
 
Speak……..
 
Tony
 
You seem annoyed from seeing me!!
 
Hank
 
I don't want anyone seeing us till finishing everything … I warned you before and you disregarded my warning.....
 
Tony
 
Why overdone fear and worry?!
 
Mr. Hank, you seem that you forget our agreement!
 
Hank
 
No
 
I didn't forget
 
Shall we talk in another time
 
 
 
Tony
 
When?
 
Hank
 
Tomorrow at seven P.M.
 
Tell me, what about your friend Ray?!
 
Be careful, don't tell him anything about me
 
Never Tony…. Never!
 
You shouldn't mention my name … I don't tell you what I shall do if happened so! Consider it is a threat… warning as you wish…do you understand?
 
Tony
 
The important thing at him is money… just money
 
Be quiet , he doesn't know anything about you
 
Hank
 
Also the important thing  for you is money
 
Just money
 
Did he tell you about the second mission?
 
Tony
 
He plans , determining time and place then execute
 
I think he execute successfully
 
He doesn't like to stay here for long time , as soon as finishing the second mission, he will leave Florida
 
Hank
 
Ok Tony
 
You can go
 
 
 
Tony
 
Bye..
 
- Hank returns to his gym
 
Hank ( to himself )
 
Vile!
 
Ignoble!
 
Ext.                Gym  Center                - Day
 
-        Tony gets out
 
-        Drives his car
 
Int.          Tony 's  apartment  - bedroom      - Day
 
-        A woman in nightgown lies in a bed
 
-        The woman is Tony 's lover , Martina
 
-        Tony arrives
 
-        She hiding behind the door
 
-        He begins to take off his shirt
 
-        She kissing him
 
Tony
 
Honey!
 
Martina
 
Didn't you feel my presence?
 
Tony
 
It is a pleased surprise!
 
Martina
 
I missed you too much
 
 
 
Tony
 
How I miss you!
 
-He kisses her hot deep kiss in her lips
 
Martina
 
We didn't meet than 20 days!
 
Tony
 
I'm really busy these days
 
Do you feel hungry?
 
Martina
 
I prepare you wonder food within minutes
 
-        She getting out
 
-        He looks to his face on the mirror
 
-        Touches his beard
 
-        Enters the attached small bathroom to bedroom
 
Int .        The bathroom
 
-        Tony  begins to shave his beard
 
-        Martina's voice from the kitchen
 
Martina
 
Would you like omelet with salad or …
 
-        Tony doesn't hear 
 
Martina
 
Tony … Tony
 
Tony
 
What?
 
-        Turns shaver off
 
Tony
 
Do you say something?
 
Martina
 
Would you like omelet with salad or cheese with boiled vegetables?
 
Tony
 
As you with
 
-        Turns shaver on
 
Ext.                A street  - Day
 
-        Ray's car stopped
 
-        Daimler car stops next to a building
 
Int.          Ray's car        – Day
 
-        Ray watching the building's entrance
 
-        Opens car's window little
 
Ext.                The building's entrance        - Day
 
Arthur… the man whom his photo was hanged beside Robin's photo in Ray's apartment appears.
 
A rich man about 48 years old surrounded with 3 men of his guards.
 
Int.          Ray's car                        - Day
 
-        Steady position to shoot
 
-        Aiming the gun towards Arthur's head
 
-        But suddenly a woman appears cut vision
 
-        She kisses Arthur
 
-        Guards turning around them
 
-        One of them opening the car's door
 
-        Arthur sits beside her in  the back seat
 
-        The car moves
 
-        Ray lights a cigarette
 
 
 
Ray ( to himself )
 
What is damned luck?!
 
Ignoble prostitute woman!
 
-        Turns with the car in the other direction
 
Int. Tony 's apartment  – bedroom      - Day
 
-        Tony with his lover naked in the bed
 
-        Dalliances , kisses and embraces
 
-        Mobile ringing
 
Tony
 
-        Is this a time for calls!
 
-        Go to hell
 
Martina
 
Maybe it is an important call
 
Tony
 
There's no one in the world more important than you … I love you … I love you ….
 
Int.          Ray's car                – Day
 
-        Ray trying to make a mobile call , but useless
 
-        Throwing mobile with  a nervous action to the back seat
 
Ext.                Ray's car               
 
-        Ray's car crossing down town streets
 
-        Stops next to a bar
 
-        Getting out from the car
 
-        Quarrel in the street next to the bar … two men are fighting.
 
-        Ray looks to them….
 
-        Enters to  the bar
 
Int.          bar          - Day
 
 
 
Ray
 
Beer
 
-        The barman prepares a cup
 
Man (1)
 
This is the worst bar!
 
 
 
Man (2)
 
All bars here worst each other!
 
The barman ( to Ray )
 
 
 
Is this the first time come to here?
 
-        Gives him a Cup
 
-                              Ray
 
And the last time
 
- They laughing
 
Man (1)
 
Did I tell you!
 
This man shall not come to here again
 
This is the last time
 
-        Ray drinks
 
-        Looking to them
 
Ray
 
Shut up
 
Man (2)
 
Do you prevent our talks?
 
-        Ray going towards him
 
-        Catches him from his shirt
 
Ray
 
I don't like to hear your voice
 
Or I shall break your neck
 
The barman
 
I'm sorry for this
 
-        Ray ready to go out form the bar
 
The barman
 
You didn't complete your drink ! 
 
-        Ray throwing him about 100 dollar in the air
 
Int.          Florida Police        - Neil's office - Day
 
-        Neil makes mobile call
 
Neil
 
Where are you?
 
Intercut  with Albert in a room – Florida Police – Day
 
Albert
 
Floor 2
 
Neil
 
Okay
 
-        Neil gets out
 
INT.    Corridor  -    Florida Police
 
Neil ( to Margrate ) Police woman
 
Margrate !congratulations for come back
 
Margrate
 
Hi, Neil , thanks
 
-        Neil arrives to a room in floor 2 , then enters
 
Int.  - Florida Police-  an office room
 
-        Ray's photo victims on the wall
 
-        The victims , men , woman
 
Neil
 
Ray's Victims!
 
Albert
 
This man!
 
Ray killed him in 1994 . His name
 
Jeff Kilsany . In 1995 another crime has been committed
 
Neil
 
Every year he used to commit a crime As long an there is the sponsor of the committed crimes, he is ready.
 
Albert
 
His victims are many .Look… In the year 2000, he killed that husband after his wife paid to money to do this.
 
Neil
 
There's no thing important in his life more than money
 
Ext. – Ray's Apartment - Night
 
-        Light glimmering.
 
-        Charming view
 
-    Ray looks from the window
 
-        Drinks a cup of wine
 
     
 
-        looking at the photo of the second man, Arthur on the wall.
 
-        Spitting on it.
 
Ray
 
You can't escape the next time.
 
I'll kill you ………...... Kill you.
 
-        Bell 's sound.
 
-        Ray opening the door.
 
-        Tony & Ray are embracing each other's.
 
Tony
 
My dear friend
 
Ray
 
You look tired..!
 
Tony
 
Is this clearly appearing on my face?
 
Ray
 
What are you doing to look so tired?
 
Tony
 
Nothing new!
 
-        Tony is looking at Anne's photo on the wall....
 
Tony
 
Good Evening my fair lady.
 
Ray
 
I have called you today
 
The mobile was off....
 
Tony
 
I was so busy at that time
 
Ray
 
In what?
 
Tony
 
I went to bed with a woman.
 
- They laughing
 
                                           
 
Ray
 
Beautiful?
 
Tony
 
So beautiful.. Charm brunette
 
                                        Ray
 
I don't like brunettes
 
Tony
 
When will you execute the second mission?
 
-Ray sits
 
Ray
 
I was about to kill him, unfortunately he escape
 
Tony
 
How?
 
Ray
 
I was about to shoot him; unfortunately an old cursed woman cut vision.
 
Tony
 
Where?
 
Ray
 
Before the building of his office.
 
-        Tony fetch cup of wine
 
Ray
 
He will not escape
 
I need to make surveillance and collect the required information
 
Tony
 
Then, the mission shall be long?
 
Ray
 
                                                         
 
Not much
 
Tony
 
I'm waiting
 
-        Ray standing
 
Ray
 
The problem that this scoundrel has no appointed time or fixed places.
 
He moves from place to anther continually!
 
He will not escape from Ray's bullet!
 
What's your next deal with Hank?
 
Tony
 
Every thing is delayed!
 
I shall be a partner with 20 %
 
EXT.-    Building                      - Day
 
Ray's car stopped before a building .It consists of 3 floors.
 
-        Arthur, appears from the window, with the owner of this building.
 
-        Ray is getting out his gun
 
-        Directing the gun toward Arthur's head.
 
-        But, Arthur enters.
 
-        Ray is getting out from the car.
 
-        Running toward the building
 
INT.            The building                   
 
-        Ray enters
 
-        The building is unoccupied.
 
-        Ray creeping to the floor where Arthur present in.
 
-        Listening to the dialogue..
 
-        A group of Arthur's guards.
 
                                 
 
Arthur
 
Be sure, the amount I give you can't be paid by anyone else.
 
The owner
 
I know that
 
Arthur
 
Ok, we agree
 
The owner
 
You offered me very enough amount more than I expected.
 
Arthur
 
Do you know why I bought this building?
 
I shall change it into super restaurant as I shall call it the name of my new wife.
 
She will be so happy when knowing that.
 
You shall get cheque with all amount on Citibank.
 
The owner
 
But… I wished if the cheque was directly on HSBC bank
 
Arthur
 
As you like. No problem
 
Tomorrow morning, I will be in my grange.
 
You can come to sign the cheque
 
The owner
 
Ok
 
Arthur
 
Now, I want to have another look at the floor 3
 
INT. - Corridor                    - Building
 
-        Ray is hiding
 
-        Steady position to shoot.
 
-        Directing his gun toward Arthur's head, but a guard cut vision.
 
-        They are going up to the floor 3
 
-        Ray is going down quickly..
 
EXT.          - Street                                    - Day
 
-        Ray gets out
 
-        Running quickly toward his car.
 
-        D riving with high speed
 
EXT.                    - The grange                          - Day
 
-        A large area, bushy trees .
 
-        A high fence of wires surrounds the grange.
 
-        The gate is closed and guarded by a security man.
 
-        Ray wearing a black suit.
 
-        Standing before the wires..
 
INT.            - The grange                                   
 
-        Arthur is lying down in the terrace
 
-        Beside him Linda the woman who appeared with him in the entrance of the building of his company .
 
-        The guards are four men in different places....
 
 
 
-          Mobile ringing
 
Arthur
 
Oh my God!
 
Calls never stop         
 
 
 
Linda
 
Calls means money
 
Arthur
 
It looks no time for relaxation and rest.
 
-          Holds mobile sees the called number
 
Arthur
 
He is one of those stupid who doesn't differ between work and rest time!
 
Put this disturb mobile inside , I don't like to hear its ringing!
 
                                    The guard
 
Ok, sir
 
EXT.          - the grange                                      - Day
 
-        Ray is examining the wires.
 
-        He is trying to penetrate the gun through the wires.
 
-        But, he can't because of the narrow holes.
 
-        Running to his car
 
INT.            - The grange  - The terrace
 
-        Arthur and Linda are still lying down in the terrace
 
A guard
 
The horses are ready
 
-        They are getting up
 
Arthur
 
A quite and peaceful horse for you
 
Horses ridding is so enjoyable! Especially in this wonder place and weather!
 
Linda
 
I'm ridding horses since I was eighteen.      I didn't continue more than this
 
Arthur
 
You look as you still eighteen!
 
EXT.          - Road                                    - Day
 
-        Ray has got out his bag from the car
 
-        The bag contains a number of tools, wires, scissors and iron equipments.
 
-        Taking an iron scissor.
 
-        Testing the scissor using a strong cable.
 
-        The scissor is cutting the cable.
 
-        Taking the scissor.
 
INT. - The grange                                    - Day
 
-        Arthur is on the horse.
 
-        While Linda on another.
 
-        The guards are watching them.
 
-        Two of them are on their horses.
 
-        While the others are standing.
 
                    Arthur (to the horse)
 
Oh Faslom! Since a long time, we haven't met
 
Three months ago, I didn't come here.
 
Linda
 
Projects, deals and meetings
 
Arthur
 
My life full of hard work all time
 
                                 
 
Imagine also weekend ,Projects, Deals and Meetings !
 
Linda
 
It is hard! And health ruinous.
 
Arthur
 
I will try to arrange it even if it is hard
 
Linda
 
Did you try before?
 
Arthur
 
I did but I failed
 
Linda
 
Try again
 
EXT.          - The grange                                    - Day
 
-        Ray is trying to cut parts of the cable using a scissor.
 
-        But, he coudn 't
 
-  Seeing a  big vettura beside the wires , thinking                for a moment
 
-  Running, getting up of the vettura then, climbs , jumping into the grange without being noticed .
 
INT. - The grange
 
-        Ray inside the grange.
 
-        Hiding behind a tree.
 
-        The horses are before him nearby.
 
-        At this moment, One of the guards has been seen him!
 
-        Ray is steady position to shoot.
 
                                    The guard
 
Look!
 
-        The two guards are shooting
 
-        Ray shoots Arthur's head.
 
-        Linda screams
 
Linda
 
Arthur!                Arthur!
 
-        The guards are running toward Arthur.
 
Linda
 
Carry him to the car, I take him to hospital immediately
 
-        Two guards carrying him, while the other guards shooting in everywhere.
 
                                        Guard (1)
 
There!
 
                                      Guard (2)
 
He can't escape
 
-        The guards are ridding the horses shoot.
 
-        Ray is looking at the gate.
 
-        He has observed the security man of the gate carrying his gun.
 
-        Running behind the trees.
 
-        One of guards on his horse has observed him....
 
-        He shoots him.
 
-        Ray is hiding well behind a tree.
 
-        Steady position to shoot.
 
-        He has shot the guard on the horse and killed him.
 
-        Running, hiding behind the bushy trees and stones.
 
-        The four are running, three of them are guards and the forth is a security man.
 
                      A guard (to the security man)
 
Oh rascal! Stay in the gate
 
-        The security man is running toward the gate
 
-        Ray is shooting him in his back.
 
A guard
 
This is the villain!
 
-        He is shoots
 
A guard
 
We should surround him carefully
 
I'm from this side and you from the right..... Come!
 
-        Ray is watching the guard who is moving in the    right side.
 
-        Steady position to shoots..
 
-        Shooting him in his head
 
-        Running quickly from the right toward the gate.
 
-        The other two guards are running
 
-        Ray is coming out to the road.
 
EXT. – Road                -Day
 
-        Running toward his car.
 
-        One of the guards is shooting him.
 
-        The bullet hits the car's door.
 
-        Getting into the car, driving at utmost speed.
 
-        - The guards getting into a car.
 
INT. - Ray's car            -        Day
 
-        He has smashed small wooden booth.
 
-        Its parts have scattered.
 
-        He is looking at the car mirror.
 
-        The guard's car follows him
 
-    Ray has heightened the car speed
 
-    As a result of the high speed, the car is hitting a tree.
 
-    The front part of the car has smashed then stopped.
 
-    Comes out quickly.
 
Ext. – Road                  - Day
 
-        Ray running. They are follow him
 
-        Before him, a school
 
-        Running into the school
 
INT.            - school
 
-          Teachers and  students
 
-        Ray rushing to one of the rooms.
 
INT  .  School      -  Room
 
-        A lady is ready to go out
 
-    She hits with Ray, screams
 
-        Ray is hiding behind the curtains.
 
-        The guards are rushing to the room.
 
-        The lady is weeping
 
-        Ray is steady position to shoot.
 
-        One of them has injured in his shoulder and the other in his foot.
 
-        The lady is crying
 
-        Screaming from outside
 
-        Ray is ready to jump from the window.
 
-        Jumping outside.
 
Ext. – Road                  - Day
 
-        Looking at the road, hoping to find any car
 
-        A car has appeared from a distance.
 
-        Weaving to the car
 
-        The car has topped.
 
-        A young man of 18 years has driven it.
 
Ray
 
I want to go to the downtown.
 
The young man
 
You are welcome
 
INT. – The car          - Day
 
                                              The young man
 
Did you find any problem in this area?
 
Ray
 
No
 
-        Ray is getting out tissue from his pocket.
 
-        Drying his sweat.
 
-        The young man glances a gun
 
-        He is worried and confused.
 
The young man
 
Are you a policeman?
 
Ray
 
How did you know?
 
They young man
 
I had glanced a gun
 
- Ray gets a gun
 
Ray
 
It is a gun never leave me
 
It is always my sincere friend
 
I'm a policeman.. Yes
 
I was following one of the criminals
 
                                         
 
 
 
                                          The young man
 
Has he escaped?
 
Ray
 
I killed him
 
No one can get away of me
 
                                              The young man
 
It seems that you are an experienced and clever policeman
 
Ray
 
That's what they are saying
 
The young man
 
What did this criminal do?
 
What is his crime?
 
Ray
 
These are top secrets
 
The young man
 
Sorry
 
Policemen very danger job!
 
Full of risks!
 
                                                       
 
Ray
 
Won't you stop talking?
 
The young man
 
Sorry again
 
Dissolve
 
INT. – Florida police – commissioner's office – Day
 
-        The commissioner and Albert with the two guards of Arthur.
 
-        The two guards with wound bandage
 
-        Albert is holding Ray's photo.
 
-        One of the guards is looking at the photo.
 
The guard
 
Yes, he is
 
-        The other guards is taking the photo
 
 
 
The other
 
He is the dirty criminal!
 
The guard
 
This criminal caused us a disaster!
 
The other
 
We didn't know how he could sneak into the grange?
 
Albert (to commissioner)
 
Concerning the black car, FORD model, it appeared that he has rented of office using a false name called (Ronald Ziessy).
 
The owner of the office has recognized his photo.
 
Knocking on the door.
 
Commissioner.
 
Yes
 
-        Linda is entering
 
Commissioner
 
When did your relation begin with Arthur?
 
Linda
 
Since one year
 
Albert
 
Did you see the man of this photo before?
 
-        She is looking at Ray's photo
 
Linda
 
No
 
 
 
Albert
 
 
 
If he has enemies, who are they?
 
Linda
 
I recognized him in one of the biggest concert
 
He was charm and emotional
 
It was the gladdest year of my life.. last year that we spent it together
 
Oh! Such happens has been finished and never come back
 
                                           
 
I don't know anyone of his friends
 
I know only the guards.
 
He was living alone.
 
We were about to marry.
 
-She is crying
 
Commissioner
 
Please, be calm
 
Linda
 
Why has he been killed? Why?! Why?!
 
It's very difficult and hard
 
They killed all my dreams
 
Albert,
 
Please, don’t cry
 
                                        Linda
 
The killer must be submitted to justice
 
Albert
 
This we trying to do so.
 
Did you leave your address, telephone and mobile number with the officer outside?
 
Linda
 
Yes, I did
 
Can I go?
 
Albert
 
But, remember that you are under request at any time and you will be called again for the investigation.
 
- she is coming out
 
                                                                               
 
The guard
 
She is a respectful woman
 
Albert
 
Have you any comment on her tales?
 
The other
 
No
 
                                     
 
All what she has said is true.
 
It was a wonder love story between them .It ended painfully!
 
Commissioner
 
You can go
 
Albert
 
It should be made a comprehensive investigation concerning to determine the enemies.
 
EXT. – skyscraper                  - Day
 
-        A car of Cadillac has stopped.
 
-        A businessman is coming out of it.
 
-        He is Dan who is 51 years old.
 
-        Enters.
 
INT. – Hank's office – Skyscraper- Day
 
-        The 51st floor.
 
-        A wonderful decoration.
 
-        An extremely majestic office.
 
-        Expensive antiques
 
-        Hank in his office.
 
-        A charming view appears behind the glass.
 
-        Knocking on the door.
 
Hank
 
Yes,
 
  - The office manger enters                             
 
The office manger
 
Timetable that you ordered
 
Hank
 
Is there any meeting in the evening?
 
The office manger
 
At  seven p.m. with NIOP chairman, Mr. Douglas. That's all
 
Hank
 
Delay such meeting with him.
 
-The office manger gets out.
 
-        Dan enters.
 
-        Shaking hands.
 
-        Dan sits
 
Hank
 
Welcome Dan
 
DAN
 
Did you read the newspapers of the last five days?
 
Hank
 
Just dirty things and have been removed forever.
 
This is the normal punition of those people who trying to dare me. I could revenge for myself in the suitable time
 
Dan
 
Your reaction was danger and unexpected!
 
I surprised for what had happened!
 
Hank
 
They caused me much pain and troubles.
 
Did you forget? They tried to kill me!
 
Dan
 
It couldn't assure that
 
Hank
 
No, I assured
 
I haven't enemies except them
 
-Hank stands looks at the window
 
Dan
 
The comprehensive investigation is still running till now.
 
I hope that you will be above suspicion.
 
                                                                           
 
-Hank turns to Dan
 
Hank
 
I'm out of any suspicion. I did it to conserve my life and reputation. It was my life's fault that I dealt with those people. But it will not happen again
 
 
 
Dan
 
I don't support aggressive and killing as a way of solving the problems and disputes.
 
Hank
 
It is the only way that those know and understand it
 
Without God's blessing I would die now.
 
-Hank sits again
 
Because one of them I lost 19 million dollars in a month!.. The villain Arthur!
 
You  think I shall be patient more than that?
 
Dan
 
Be calm.. Relax
 
If you had asked my advice, I would not have given you the permission to do it.
 
It's no use crying over spilt milk.
 
Hank
 
You utter this because they never hurt you.
 
As for me, the situation is completely different.
 
The criminal who is killed doesn't live here 
 
Dan
 
I know this before....
 
Hank
 
I was in a badly need first , for a professional killer .Second , in a short time . Third  , A killer from outside
 
                                                   
 
Dan
 
You attached yourself in a circle! Never can penetrate it easily
 
Hank
 
I was ready to pay any amount whatever
 
There is a mediator between me and the criminal
 
This mediator is a Ragamuffin!
 
He doesn't  know anything about me
 
He had never seen me before ,and I 'm too
 
If we meet together anywhere, no one will know the other
 
I feel comfortable now!
 
After killing this scoundrels
 
Dan
 
Who believes that Hank manilow can be involved in such crimes?
 
Hank
 
It's the first time and it will be the last.
 
Dan
 
Although Robin & Arthur are surrounded by a large group of guards , they are killed! I astonish how they could live normally among theses guards!
 
Didn't they feel restricted?
 
Hank
 
They are surrounded by guards of a dirty business in addition to their original work, drugs, money laundering. Etc I'm sure of that
 
Dan
 
You also have two guards!
 
Hank
 
They are guards.  Not criminals ! 
 
-Moment of silence
 
Dan
 
What do you think about?!
 
INT.            - taxi                    - Night
 
-Ray is making a mobile call.
 
-Intercut with Anne in her apartment (bathroom)- Night
 
-The mobile is ringing
 
                                        Anne
 
Ray !!
 
I miss you
 
 
 
                                        Ray
 
Me too honey
 
I missed you so much
 
Anne
 
All matters are ok?
 
Ray
 
No problems
 
I performed the two missions successfully.....
 
Anne
 
What about your injury ?!
 
 
 
Ray
 
It was little injury
 
Anne
 
I can't absolutely bear that
 
Ray
 
Where are you now? What are you doing?
 
Anne
 
In the bathroom
 
While the mobile was ringing, I was taking shower
 
I was feeling that you are going to call me.
 
So I put the mobile on a stand
 
Ray
 
Then you are naked?!
 
                                         
 
-        They are laughing
 
Anne
 
We will meet soon!
 
Ray
 
I'm in my way to see Anthony
 
Anne
 
 
 
Is he recover from his  injury?
 
Ray
 
Yes he can walk normally now.
 
You will see his photo when I come back. I got a photo from him
 
Anne
 
You make me ardent to see his photo
 
Ray
 
I liked him so much
 
Anne
 
I'm going to surprise you
 
Ray
 
You are my charming princess and fair lady
 
What is the surprise?
 
Anne
 
No, I will not tell you
 
 
 
Ray
 
Kiss you
 
Anne
 
Kiss you
 
-Turns mobile off
 
-Ray looks from the window seeing  a store for toys and gifts
 
Ray (to the driver )
 
please stop front of this store, Wait me
 
-The taxi stops
 
-Ray gets out
 
-Enters to the store
 
INT.            -        The store    -        Day
 
Ray
 
I want to buy an airplane but warplane
 
The seller
 
Is this important?
 
Ray
 
Yes,. yes very important
 
                                      The seller
 
Sorry
 
You can find your request after two days if you visited
 
us
 
Ray
 
Unfortunately!.. Thanks
 
-Ray gets out getting in the taxi. Its move
 
INT.    - Anthony's apartment        - Night
 
-    Anthony is looking through the window.
 
-  Seeing Ray
 
-  Anthony is walking toward the door.
 
The grandmother
 
Anthony !
 
Anthony
 
My Friend …Ray!
 
- Ray enters                         
 
Ray
 
How are you my little friend, Anthony?
 
                                            Anthony
 
Fine
 
Ray
 
Good evening
 
                                          The grandmother
 
Good evening, you are welcome
 
Next Sunday Anthony's Parents shall come
 
Ray
 
Really?!
 
The grandmother
 
They called me yesterday morning
 
Ray
 
Pleasant news for you Anthony !
 
Anthony
 
I missed them so much
 
Ray
 
I notice that you walk naturally now
 
Anthony
 
Pain has decreased completely
 
Ray
 
I came today to say goodbye
 
                                           
 
Anthony
 
Why?
 
Ray
 
There is no reason to stay here any more Anthony
 
Anthony
 
Why don't you stay here with me?
 
Ray
 
It doesn't mean we shall not meet again
 
Surely I'll back to visit you.
 
Believe me, I wish if time was longer. But sorry
 
Anthony
 
I am so sad to hear this
 
Ray
 
I don't want to see you unhappy
 
The grandmother
 
You will come to visit us?
 
Ray
 
Of course.
 
INT.            -Night club                            -Night
 
-        A nightclub in downtown.
 
-        Tony with Martina
 
-        Drinking
 
Martina
 
This is the last cup please Tony
 
Tony
 
No. we will go on drinking, then spend a hot night
 
We shall spend one of an enjoyable night in our life
 
Martina
 
I'm agree
 
-        He kissing her.
 
-        Touches her cheek.
 
Martina
 
You excite me
 
Tony
 
This is exactly what I meant
 
Martina
 
Stop it
 
-        One of Hank's guards.
 
                                              The guard
 
Mr. Hank wants you at once
 
Tony
 
Now?!
 
The guard
 
He sent me to bring you to him
 
Tony
 
Why did not he contact me through the mobile?
 
The guard
 
I do not know  I have no information
 
Tony
 
I shall drink the last cup …,then go with you           
 
Shall I bring you a cup                                           
 
The guard
 
No
 
You drink too much                                         
 
Tony
 
Where is he now?
 
The guard
 
In the garden of the villa
 
Tony
 
So it is not far
 
                                        Tony (to Martina)
 
If I am late, go to the apartment
 
I will return back to you
 
They go towards the exit door
 
Tony
 
This is the first time he sends you to arrest me in this way!
 
                                           
 
                                         
 
Ext.  Nightclub-Night
 
Tony
 
My car is not here
 
The guard
 
I came in a car
 
-They getting in
 
INT.  Bentley Car
 
Tony
 
Wonderful Bentley!
 
The guard
 
He owns a collection of the most excellent recent cars.
 
Tony
 
Do you remember the black MAYBACH car that he bought last month?
 
The guard
 
It is fantastic masterpiece!
 
It made especially for him!
 
EXT. - Garden –Hank 's villa -Night                     
 
-        A villa like a castle
 
-        Lights glimmering around the swimming pool that is located in a middle of a garden
 
-        Hank is sitting on a chair
 
-        A guard is a few meters away
 
-        Hank is reading some documents
 
- Tony with the guard entering
 
Tony
 
Is there anything that necessitates coming in this way?
 
-  Hank puts the documents on the table.                           
 
Hank
 
Have a seat
 
Tony
 
Scarcely, I see you in such case
 
Hank
 
Which case you mean?
 
Tony
 
Relaxed. . Not nervous. . not stressed
 
                                        Hank ( to the guard )
 
You can go
 
- The other guard is still here.
 
                                        Tony
 
Why did you ask to see me?
 
                                        Hank
 
Don't be hurry
 
 
 
Tony
 
This is the first time happened so
 
                                    Hank
 
I wanted to talk with you
 
Tony
 
In which thing?
 
Hank
 
You were in the bar?
 
Tony
 
Yes
 
                                      Hank
 
Undoubtedly, you won a lot of money since I helped you.
 
Profits from deals from everywhere
 
Commissions, rewards and so on
 
 
 
Tony
 
You opened for me many closed doors
 
Hank
 
I think you were and still very loyal
 
Isn't it?!
 
Tony
 
Of course
 
Hank
 
All right
 
 
 
Tony
 
I don't understand what you mean?
 
Hank
 
I just wanted to remember you
 
Your friend is so professional
 
He could achieve the two missions successfully.
 
Tony
 
I was sure that. Did I tell you no one as my friend Ray
 
                                           
 
The two missions were done as agreed!
 
Hank
 
Yes . . . Yes
 
Where is he?
 
Tony
 
Why? I think he will leave Florida tomorrow
 
Don't worry .As I told you many times he doesn't know anything about you!
 
He took the money then did the mission
 
Hank
 
Why did you leave New York ?
 
Tony
 
I came to Florida to establish import and export company
 
But unfortunately, project was broken down!
 
I couldn't make any achievement
 
                                                     
 
                                                 
 
Hank
 
Maybe this is the last meeting between us......
 
Tony
 
Are you traveling abroad?
 
Hank
 
Not me who shall travel
 
Tony
 
I don't understand
 
Hank
 
Never mind
 
-        A moment of silence.
 
-        Hank with a gestured from his head to the guard
 
-        Comes from behind Tony cautiously carrying a gun
 
-        The guard shoot Tony
 
-        Tony falls on the ground bleeding
 
Hank
 
Sorry Tony
 
You are just an insect that has performed its role . . . a climber!
 
Now your mission is complete
 
(to the guard) As I promised you a big reward is waiting for you …You wouldn't have dreamed of it all your life
 
The guard
 
I am at your service Mr. Hank
 
                                               
 
-        The guard puts the corpse in a bursa, ties with iron chains    -    Carrying it to the car.
 
EXT.  –Streets -Night -     
 
-  The car that carries Tony's corpse crossing down town streets.
 
-        A sound of music.
 
EXT.  Bridge  -Night    -
 
-        He reaches
 
-        Carrying the corpse
 
-        The guard watches all directions.
 
-        No one
 
-        He throws the corpse from the bridge
 
-          It sinks in the river
 
The guard
 
Good bye Tony!
 
Money important than anything else
 
I think you know that very well.
 
Dissolve
 
EXT –Tony 's house - Night                                 
 
-        Ray is looking at the window of the apartment
 
-        No lights
 
-        Making a mobile call
 
-        But useless
 
INT.  Florida police- Day
 
-        Neil is reading some documents
 
-        Albert enters
 
Neil
 
  We couldn't reach anything important up till now!
 
Albert
 
We couldn't reach Ray or the instigator who paid him the money
 
Neil
 
We need more patience and time
 
Albert
 
Danger criminals don't easily arrest them
 
Most know nothing about the enemies
 
Neil
 
They are trying to hide some facts and data because they don't want to involve in any problems
 
Albert
 
This makes our mission more difficult
 
Neil
 
This is the daily reports for the intelligencers , private detectives and investigators
 
Nothing new !
 
Albert
 
The investigation reports are familiar
 
Neil
 
Did you order to continue watching?
 
 
 
Albert
 
Yes
 
Watching will not stop on all persons who probably have relation with the two crimes
 
In the first crime, there're 6 persons under control, and in the second crime there're about 11 persons
 
Neil
 
                                           
 
Look! There's news !
 
-They're reading from the computer's monitor
 
Albert
 
Good Anne!
 
-        The mobile is ringing.
 
Albert
 
Yes
 
When?
 
This is great news
 
Flight number 542
 
-        He looks at his watch
 
Ok
 
We will be waiting
 
Neil
 
Anne!
 
Albert
 
The lover couldn't bear her lover's absence any more.
 
After two hours, she will be at the airport
 
To the airport immediately
 
Come on
 
Neil
 
Unasked, she will lead us to Ray
 
Albert
 
Watching continued for more than two months
 
-        They getting out.
 
  INT.          - Corridor    - Florida police      - Day
 
Albert & Neil
 
Neil
 
You will fall in the trap today Ray
 
Albert
 
The car is ready?
 
Neil
 
Of course
 
EXT. – Florida police
 
-        They getting in a car
 
-        Not a police car
 
INT. –The car -Day
 
-        Albert drives.
 
Neil
 
Finally Ray!
 
Albert
 
Ray shall be arrest by us within hours
 
                                       
 
Ext.–Airport  -Day                                                                   
 
-        An plane lands
 
-        The passengers to the arrival hall
 
INT.  AirPort –Arrival hall                             
 
-        Albert and Neil are waiting
 
-        They watch all the passengers.
 
-        Anne appears
 
-        Albert sees her
 
Albert
 
Welcome Anne
 
Neil
 
                                                   
 
She looks very happy
 
Albert
 
She will see her lover after long time.
 
Neil
 
We leave her till she passes from the arrival hall
 
We will go out from the other door
 
Come on
 
-        Anne gets out
 
Ext. –AirPort -Day                                                -
 
                            Anne (to a taxi driver)
 
Please to the downtown
 
-        Albert and Neil are getting into the car.
 
INT. Taxi -Day                                                    -                                   
 
-        Air touches Anne's hair.
 
-          She smiles
 
Anne
 
Weather is wonder!
 
                                                                   
 
Florida doesn't get crowd like New York
 
The driver
 
I drives slowly, Is this annoying you?
 
Anne
 
Are you a new driver?
 
Int. -The car –Day
 
Albert
 
Come on Anne quickly
 
Neil
 
This taxi driver is very slow
 
Albert
 
I don't know why he drives slowly?!
 
Neil
 
She didn't find except this driver..!
 
Int. –The taxi - Day                                                 
 
-        The driver looks at the mirror
 
The driver
 
This car is following us
 
Anne
 
What?!
 
The driver
 
Since we moved from the Airport ,this car is following us
 
I 'm sure
 
Anne
 
That Car?
 
The driver
 
Yes
 
-Anne is thinking for minutes
 
Anne
 
Stop please
 
- The taxi stops
 
INT. –The car -Day       
 
-The car stops
 
Neil
 
What happened?
 
Albert
 
Oh! My God!
 
A stupid driver!
 
Neil
 
I fear if she observed our following up to her?
 
 
 
 
 
Int.    Taxi    - Day
 
 
 
The driver
 
Is there any problem between you and the driver of this car?
 
-        Anne is thinking
 
-        An idea comes to her mind
 
-        She looks at the car
 
Anne
 
Is there a hotel nearby?
 
The driver
 
There a small hotel
 
Anne
 
It doesn't important, to that hotel please
 
Where is this hotel?
 
The driver
 
Not far
 
Could you know him? And why following you?
 
Anne
 
No
 
The driver
 
What about if we stop and ask him why he follows us?
 
Anne
 
No …. No don't stop
 
To the hotel quickly
 
 
 
                                     
 
The driver
 
This is your first visit to Florida ?
 
Anne
 
The first time
 
INT. Ray's apartment -Day
 
                                             
 
-        Checks his gun
 
-        The photos are still on the wall. A red sign x on Arthur's photo.
 
-        Taking the photos off.
 
-        He lights a fire in them
 
-        Whops Anne's photo
 
-        Kisses it
 
-        Puts it inside the bag
 
-        A mobile is ringing.
 
Ray
 
Yes
 
Anne!!
 
Intercut with Anne in the taxi – Day
 
Anne
 
Listen to me
 
I am here in Florida  in a taxi
 
There is a car follows me now
 
Ray
 
Why did you do that? Why?
 
Do not come to the apartment
 
Take care Anne
 
Anne
 
Sorry my dear
 
Now, I am on my way to one of the hotels
 
Ray
 
Stay in this hotel
 
Anne
 
I never expected that I'd be under surveillance
 
Ray
 
I will leave the apartment
 
Anne
 
To where?
 
Ray
 
I'll leave Florida today despite everything
 
Thanks for your calling.. Anne
 
Sure, the airports are being watched, the high way , The railway
 
If they aren't from the policemen, who are they then?
 
You should stay in the hotel today .Act naturally till you go once again to New York
 
Anne
 
I don't know if there will be an air flight tomorrow or not.
 
Ray
 
You can stay here for some days.
 
Anne
 
I am sorry. I am stupid, foolish
 
Ray
 
No time now
 
Do exactly as I say
 
Anne
 
I will do
 
Ext. –Hotel - Day                                               
 
-        The taxi stops.
 
-        Anne gets out
 
-        Towards the hotel door
 
-        She sees the car
 
INT. –The car -Day                                            Neil                                                                                                             
 
In that hotel you stay Ray!
 
-        The taxi moves
 
-        Albert (to the driver)
 
        Go to hill
 
INT.– Hotel  -Day
 
                                                         
 
Anne
 
Please, I want a room
 
The receptionist
 
Do you want certain requirements for the room?
 
 
 
Anne
 
Please, quickly
 
The receptionist
 
How many days will you stay here?
 
I asked you before if you want certain requirements for the room.
 
Anne
 
No. No, any room.. Any room
 
The receptionist
 
Please, your I.D. or your passport
 
Anne
 
-        Giving him her I.D.
 
The receptionist
 
      Room No. 186
 
-        Albert & Neil is entering
 
-        Only 3 ladies in the reception.
 
-        Anne looking to Neil & Albert.
 
                    The receptionist (to the bellman)
 
Carry the bag to room No.186 
 
- The bellman is carrying it to the upper floor
 
- Anne is following him
 
- Albert & Neil to the receptionist
 
Albert
 
We are from FBI and Florida police
 
-        Neil is getting out Ray's photo.
 
Neil
 
Is the man of this photo is resider in the hotel now?
 
And in which room?
 
-        The receptionist is looking at the photo.
 
The receptionist
 
I had never seen him before
 
Albert
 
Are you sure?
 
The receptionist
 
Yes
 
Neil
 
  Verifying from the photo again
 
The receptionist
 
I 'm sure ,          I didn't see the man of this photo before
 
Albert
 
Guest list please
 
The receptionist
 
Here you're
 
Neil
 
Is there another receptionist here who changes the shifts?
 
The receptionist
 
Amelia starts her shift at six pm.
 
Albert
 
It is possible that Ray has a false I.D or passport
 
Also, probably, he may be disguised.
 
How many guests now in the hotel?
 
The receptionist
 
Only this 3 ladies, with their children and two men, but in out now!
 
-        Albert, Neil looking to the 3 ladies
 
-        Close up on their faces one after one
 
Neil
 
Oh! My God! I think we need to policewoman for actualization those ladies!
 
Albert
 
We'll wait the two men
 
Neil
 
Don't tell anyone that we're police
 
The receptionist
 
Ok ,sir
 
Neil
 
When these two men come back?
 
The receptionist
 
I don't know
 
Int. Anne's room – Hotel- Day-     
 
-    Anne is weeping
 
-        Making a call
 
Anne
 
Please, Is there is a flight to New York now?  
 
At 3 pm.
 
Very Good
 
I want to a ticket please
 
Yes..first class
 
No..no thanks
 
My name is Anne Tieowhel
 
  Thank you
 
- Drying her tears
 
EXT. - Cafeteria  - Railway station- Day       
 
-        Ray disguised in a priest dress with beard
 
-        Reading a newspaper.
 
-        Having two bags.
 
Int. –Hotel – Day
 
-        Anne appears going down the stairs
 
-        Still Neil, Albert in the reception
 
Anne
 
I have to go now.
 
Sorry
 
The receptionist
 
What has happened?
 
The room unappealing ?
 
Anne
 
The room is fine.
 
This isn't the reason.
 
The receptionist
 
It's a bad luck
 
 
 
Anne
 
Thank you
 
The receptionist
 
I wish to see you again in our hotel
 
Anne
 
Thanks again
 
-        Anne is looking to Neil & Albert
 
-        She is going to the exit door.
 
-        Neil & Albert following her
 
Ext. – Hotel- Day
 
-        Anne is waving to a taxi.
 
-        Getting into.
 
-        Alberto & Neil are getting in the car.
 
  Int.  The car - Day
 
Albert
 
To where Anne?
 
Neil
 
Sure to her lover
 
INT. The taxi
 
-Anne is drying her tears
 
The driver
 
What had happened?!
 
Anne
 
Nothing. Nothing
 
 
 
The driver
 
I 'm sorry
 
INT. The car – Day
 
Neil
 
Oh! My God!
 
Albert
 
Impossible!
 
She is returning to the Airport!
 
Neil
 
Caused by the damned driver!
 
                             
 
What a bad luck!
 
Albert
 
She called Ray to warm him
 
Neil
 
If wasn't that foolish driver!
 
Albert
 
All threads that would lead to Ray have cut.
 
Neil
 
Maybe ,Ray is back with here on the same plane
 
Of course disguising
 
Albert
 
Anyone with her shall be arrested . if he is Ray or not
 
Neil
 
We must arrest her
 
 
 
She is accused of helping a criminal to escape.
 
Neil
 
The stupid taxi driver!
 
He could see us in despite of the long distance between the two cars.
 
INT.- Cafeteria - Railway station -Day
 
-        Ray is sitting.
 
-        Watching the place.
 
-        He stands
 
-        The porter approaches him..
 
The porter
 
Can I help you?
 
Ray
 
Carry this bag, please.
 
 
 
-        Ray is carrying only the bag of money and his guns
 
-        Going to the platform
 
INT. –The AirPort - Day                                   
 
-        Anne is waiting the plane..
 
-        Watching the place surrounded.
 
Albert
 
We must verify from all of those.
 
- Passengers on the plane in different ages, old, young, women and men
 
Neil
 
Is he so professional in disguising to this way!
 
-        Albert & Neil are approaching her.
 
Albert
 
Let me introduce myself to you
 
I'm Albert, from FBI.
 
-        Anne is trying to be calm..
 
Neil
 
Neil from Florida police
 
-        Each one of them is showing his I.D. card
 
Anne
 
What do you want?
 
Albert
 
You have come to Florida one hour ago.
 
You didn't stay in the hotel
 
Then you have decided to come back again.
 
Anne
 
Is it outlawed?!
 
Neil
 
  But, Helping the criminals to escape are outlawed
 
Anne
 
I don't understand
 
What do you mean?
 
Albert
 
Where is Ray?
 
Anne
 
Who's Ray? I don't know this Ray!
 
What is my crime to arrest me?
 
Albert
 
Help a criminal to escape.
 
Anne
 
I don't know criminals
 
Neil
 
You're Ray's lover, we know that
 
Albert
 
You were watched from the police
 
- Taking her out, Get in the car with them.
 
Int. Florida police - Day
 
Neil
 
Please your handbag
 
Anne
 
It isn't allow to you that
 
Commissioner
 
No, it is allowing....
 
-        Neil opens it.
 
-        Gets a notebook
 
-        Gets mobile out.
 
Albert
 
Where's Ray? Is he still in Florida ? Or back to New York ?
 
Anne
 
I told you I don't know that Ray.
 
- Singer sings this song
 
(the lyric of the song, written by Alaa Soliman)
 
Title:- Can You Sing With Me?!
 
Can you sing with me?!
 
Now.. Sing.. Sing..... Sing.. with me
 
Believe me.. we have a lot to live together and starting again
 
Believe me.. we shall coloring our next life with loud color
 
We are as two birds.. two birds
 
I can take off my heart.. take off my heart
 
Then offering it to you
 
There's no thing shall change our modes.
 
INT.    Train      - Sunset  - Dissolve
 
-        The train moves speedy.
 
-        Ray is looking at the sights through the window.
 
- The song continues -
 
Sun rises on your face
 
I'll fly from the earth to the sky
 
I'll fly with two wings.
 
Colors dancing front of me
 
All barriers and forests shall be broken.
 
Can you sing with me
 
Sing . sing. sing with me ( END )


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                      WANTED 



Written By : Alaa Soliman

 E-mail       :  alaa.din10@yahoo.com 






March 2008 , Florida

Fade in :

INT. - Train - Day

- Ray about 30 years old

- Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache

- Have sunglasses

- Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside him on a seat .. EXT. - Railway station – Day

          - Train stops   
          - Ray gets out from the train curries a bag 
          - His eyes move in everywhere 
          - Walks out among the crowd 
          - Two women behind him 

- Whispering, while he can hear them .


Woman ( l )

How handsome that man !

He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.

Woman ( 2 )

Captain !

His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors

 INT.        - Ray's car              - Night 

- Black Ford Car 4x4

- A street corner

- Street is calm has little moving .

- Ray inside the car without mustache

- Smoking a cigarette .

- Wears black T. shirt & jeans

- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....

- Tony appears

- Tony is about 32 years old.

- Opening the door and sits beside him

- Lighting a cigarette

Tony

       Everything is ok ? 

Ray

       Florida …. a wonder state ! 
       Everything is ok 

Tony

       When did you decide to execute the first mission? 

Ray

Saturday at night

Tony

After 3 days !!

Ray

       This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray 

Tony

       I thought you shall kill him in his office 


Ray


I found this is a very difficult


Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .

I planned for everything accurately

Tony

You're skillful in planning !

Ray

This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....

Tony

      I hope the mission won't be exceeded ! 

Ray

Won't exceed 

Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,

I become more ardent to kill them .

Especially the bold one

Tony

       That bold shall leave the life next Saturday 

Dissolve

Ext. – Robin's house - Night

- It consists of 4 floors

- House is very luxury

- A green area and plenty of trees

- Ray's car is far in the backside .

INT. - Robin's car - Night

- Mercedes car

- Robin is about 50 years old

- Bold, very Rich....

- Seating in the back seat

- His private guards in another car back him

- Driver drives the car

INT. Robin's house -an office room -Night

- Office room is rather dark

- Few light coming from out.

- Ray inside the office room

- Carrying a guns

- Looks from the window

- Getting out from the room careful

       INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night                

- Ray is hiding behind a column

- Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.

- Gets attention …….. (Steady position to shoot. )

Ext. - Robin's house - Night

- Robin arrives

- Getting out from the car

- He walks to the house entrance

- Four guards around him

- Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards

 Int. - Robin's house -  Reception - Night  

- Light turns on

- Robin enters to the office room with two guards

- Ray nears from the window

- Looks

- Seeing two guards outside

- Nears from the office room


- Pushing the door by his foot

- Ray shots a guard in his stomach.

- Rushing into the office room

INT. - Robin's house - an office room

- Ray shoots Robin's head

- With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury

- The guard shoots Ray

- Protecting himself through the door against shots

- Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor

- The guard is still alive beside the door

- Tries to get his gun

- Ray shots him while running, injuring his head

- Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once

- Ray runs towards the house door

- A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside

- Ray runs to out

Ext. - Robin's House - Night

- A guard shoots

- Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him

- Steady to shoot

- Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand

- Runs

- Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder

- Drives his car with high speed

INT. - Ray's car - Night

- Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury

- He tries to overcome the pain

Ext. - Private hospital - Night

- Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance

Int. - Hospital – corridor

- A group of nurses

Ray

       Where the Emergency room? 

A nurse

       The third room in the corridor end at right 

A nurse

       What happened to you? 

Ray

       Nothing serious 

Int. - Emergency Room

- Ray enters

- Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed

- A nurse enters

The nurse

       There's a child injured in his foot 
        Calls Doctor Steve? 

The doctor

Quickly

- She gets out

- Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid

The doctor

       Your wound isn't easy 
       Is this shoot!  Isn't it? 

Ray

Yes

The doctor

How you could bear such hard pain?

       Little people can bear pain such as you . 
       Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger. 
       The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!! 
       The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound 
       Are you policeman? 
       Or someone shoot you? 

Ray

- From Florida police

- The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse

- A child has about nine years, crying

The nurse

       Bring the child here in the bed 

- The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain

- Doctor Steve enters with two nurses

- Begin to make the necessary aid for the child

- Grandmother cries

The nurse

Be quite.. quite

       He shall be fine 

Doctor Steve

       Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen 

- the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child

- But Ray can see the child's face

The doctor

       Did you follow a criminal? 

Ray

       An murderer criminal 

The doctor

       This is too much cost paid by policemen 

Ray

       That is right 

The doctor

       You offer several sacrifices for us 

(To the nurse) what about the child.. ?

The nurse

       The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot . 

Ray

       This is a very painful for a child in such age 

The doctor

       Do you feel better now? 

Ray

       Rather 

The doctor

       Check his pressure 
       Currently we don't need more that this 
       Some analgesic for pain after surgery. 

Ray

Thank you

The doctor

       Surely your pressure is lower 
       You bleed too much 

The nurse

       His blood pressure is really lower 

The doctor

       Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours 
       But the wound has been cleaned 

- Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain

The doctor

       You should be in a rest today 

- Ray tries to get up

- Feels pain

The doctor

       To where? 

Ray

       I can't stay in the hospital 
       Thanks, anyway 

The doctor

Why?

       Your wound needs some care 
       Why you insist to go now? 

Ray

       I must go now 
       Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again 

- Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child

Ray ( to doctor Steve )

       What about his wound ? 

Doctor Steve

       He shall improve at anyway 

Ray

       Are you his grandmother? 

The grandmother

       Yes 

Ray

       What's his name? 

The grandmother

       Anthony 

Ray

       A handsome and charm boy 

Doctor Steve

Don't worry

He shall be recovered

This shall take times.....

The grandmother

       How long? 

Doctor Steve

       About 10 days, maybe rather more 

The grandmother

       Should we come to hospital for another time? 

Doctor Steve

       No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so..... 

The grandmother

       Thank you 

- Anthony crying but little

- Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other

Ray

       Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony? 

The grandmother

       Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532 

The doctor

       I didn't know your name yet. 

Ray

       I'm Ray 

The doctor

       I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve. 


- Ray looks to Anthony


Ray

Thank you.

- Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.

Int. - Ray's apartment - Night

A luxury apartment

        Ray is setting, drinks 
       - Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne . 
       - A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall 
       - Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money 
       - Looks to the other man's photo 
       - Puts the cup of Brandy 
       - Picks the gun up 
       - Aiming the gun towards the man's photo 

Ray

       Now is your turn 
       Did you prepare your coffin? 
       Ray's shot shall penetrate your head 
       Your life becomes just little days. 
       Your face is ugly! 
    Makes me furious like your dead friend! 
 Ext.         - Anthony's house - Day 

- Ray arrives in his car

- Without wound bandage

 Int.   - Anthony's Apartment - Day 

- Knocking the door

- The grandmother opens

The grandmother

       Welcome Mr. . Ray 

Ray

       Good morning 

The grandmother

       Please come in 

- He enters

Ray

       How is my friend Anthony now? 

The grandmother

       He's sleeping since two hours 
       Took analgesic then slept at once. 

Ray

       A boy full of vital and joy! 

The grandmother

       Would you like seeing him? 

Ray

       I come exactly for this purpose 

The grandmother

       With pleasure 

- To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen

- Opening the door

- Ray enters


Int. - Anthony's bedroom - Day

- Looks to the innocent child's face

- Gets out then gently closing the door

Int. - Hall

Ray

       What about the pain? 

The grandmother

       Every day improves than before . 
       It was unforgettable day! 

I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.

      When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood 
       I wept also, Maybe I would faint 

Ray

       Anthony looks like me when I was his age 

The grandmother

       Really?!! 
       Are you recovered from your injury? 

Ray

         Rather 
       Are you live with Anthony alone? 

The grandmother

 His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me 
       I don't know what I can say to them when ask me! 


Ray

       Don't tell them anything. 
       Don't make them worry. 

The grandmother

       There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them 


       My temper doesn’t bear anymore! 
       I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years. 

- Anthony's voice from his bedroom

Anthony

       Grandma..      grandma 

- Ray with the grandmother to the room

Int. - Anthony's bedroom

Anthony

       Ray!... My friend.. 

Ray

       My friend Anthony 

Anthony

       I'm very glad to see you 

Ray

       Do you feel any pain right now? 

Anthony

       Pain hurts me from time to another 
       But it isn't hard 

Anthony

       And you? 
       Is your shoulder hurts you? 

Ray

       Sometime 
       Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage 

Anthony

       I will not do it again 

But you didn't tell me?

Ray

       Tell you what? 

Anthony

       How your shoulder injured? 

Ray

       Is this important? 

Anthony

       I'd like to know 

Ray

       One of the murderer criminal shoot me 

Anthony

       Why? 



Ray

 I……. 

-The grandmother interrupt Ray

The grandmother

       Do feel hungry Anthony? 

Anthony

No, no

       I don't feel hungry now 
       I want to drink water 
       - Ray pouring him a glass of water 
       - Grandmother looks to her watch 

The grandmother

       After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication 
       Its time after half an hour 

Ray

       Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age 

Anthony

       Am I ? 
       I'm glad to hear that my friend 
       Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself? 

Int. - Florida police - corridor -Day

Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office

Int. - Florida police -the commissioner's office


Neil gets in

Commissioner

       Robin is the Ray's first victim 
                                Neil 
       Maybe there's other victim or victims! 

Commissioner

       Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..! 
       Where's Albert? 

Neil

      I saw him parking his car 
       We shall do our best to arrest him 
       We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida 
       Time is very important 

Commissioner

              We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent 
       This made him in the list of the most wanted 

- Searching some documents on the desk

All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .

Neil

       Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control! 

- Albert from FBI enters

Commissioner

       Is there new news? 


Albert

       There's no news except what we have verified 
       A killed shoot in the victim's head by Ray! 

Neil

       If one of Robin's guard still alive, we couldn't verify that the guard recognized his photo as soon as shown it 

Albert

Yes

       In addition that, this criminal has super ability to aim the goal accurately, he distinguishes with disguise 

Commissioner

We thank Ray that he didn't disguise when executing this

crime

Albert

       Since 6 months, we assured from our source that it was agreed with him to kill one of the elected person in the local municipality elections for the benefit of other elected in one of New York Subsidiaries, but so sorry it could approve the accusation on such elected. 

Commissioner

It must arrest him before making more crimes, he considers a threat for public security


Albert

It should increase investigations in everywhere may suspecting to be there.

Neil

Many investigators and private detective are spreading now in everywhere.

- Ray's photo on the computer's monitor front of him

Commissioner

       What about the next plan? 
       Did you discussed it together? 

Neil

       Yes we discussed 

Albert

       We have some notices shall be discussed together 

Neil

I think if could hold this thread, it is probably arrest him

Commissioner

The success of this plan firstly depends on Brain's agreement to work with us without force.

Neil

This is very important

He departure the prison just from short time

Albert

If we could persuade him to work with us as a nark! It shall be good!

Brain Knows most Rich Businessmen and many persons who pay money versus killing.

He has multiple relationships with several gangs and murderers in Florida ! I think he shall do much if agreed to work with us!

Commissioner

Ok., we see what will happen with him

Int. - Ray's Car - Day

- Listening to hit music

- Mobile ringing

- Turning down the music

Ray

Yes

Tony! Where are you?

Intercut with Tony in his Car – Day

Tony

               In my car 

Ray

               I'm also in the car 

Tony

               Are going to the apartment? 

Ray

               Yes 

Tony

               Ok, I will be at you after half an hour 

- Ray returns to hit music again

Int. - Ray's apartment - Day

-Ray holding a cup of wine


- Bell 's sound

- Opens the door

- Tony enters

                                          Ray 
      Look…… 

- Refers to Anne's photo

Tony

       A charm woman! 
       Wonder blond! Her golden hair makes her more charm and fascinating. 
       She's really beautiful 

Ray

       Would you like a cup? 

Tony

       I'll be thankful 

- Ray prepare him a Cup

Tony

       In the newspaper, I saw the bold … Robin's photo shoot in his head 

- Ray smiling

Tony

How I felt proud when you told me, you achieved the first mission!

I felt proud because my friend is a professional, never miss his goals

Ray

Tony…. Do you remember our last days in New York ?

Tony

I wish if such days returned again whatever for just one day!

It was nice days; I left New York to Florida . Since Hank told me that he wants to kill two persons and needs a professional to finishing those at once, I imagine you

Ray

       Hank pays a lot of money! 

Tony

       He has great wealth 
       He considers one of businessmen here in  Florida    . Everything, Trade and Industry. 

Ray

       Drugs! 

Tony

       No, no , 

He doesn't need more money

- Tony stands

- Fetch another Cup of wine , lighting a cigarette

       You didn't tell me about Robin, How could get the house?   Alarm system in everywhere, Secret doors, Guarding dogs 

Ray

It wasn't a problem to me

Tony

Do you agree with me that the most danger gang that consisting of just one person… that's you?

Ray

I agree

Tony

I affirm that I admire you, Since We

Known each other and become friends from 12 years …!

-Tony puts his hand on his shoulder

Tony

Is your shoulder has been recovered?

Ray

Yes

Also Anthony can walk now

Exactly Ray but a child, when I saw him I felt that I'm facing myself when I was a child!

       Anthony asked me about the reason of my shoulder's injury? I forced to lie! 

I told him that a criminal shot me … then he asked me about the reason too!

I dodged to answer … what I would telling him?!

I injured when providing a murder mission …! I don't like to know that.

Maybe he doesn't understand anything … but I don't like Anthony to know !

INT. Brain's apartment – Bedroom – Night

- Brain the criminal

- Naked in bed with a naked woman

                           The woman 

I'd like to be with you forever

How days, months and years have lost when you were in prison

Brain

           We shall recover those days now 

- Kissing her

- Suddenly

Neil and Albert pushing the door strongly

- Aiming their guns towards Brain's face

Brain

Who are you? How did you get in?

-The woman screaming…. Putting bed sheet on her breast to cover it.

Brain

What do you want?


Neil

Florida police

Albert

FBI

Brain

What do you want?

I'm arrested?

If so, why?

Albert

You aren’t arrested exactly

It is our luck that door was rather opened so we entered

Brain

I want to know what's happened.

Neil

You will know everything

Brain

Shall you take me naked?

Albert

Wear your clothes then let us go

Brain (to Neil )

The pants beside you on the chair

I'll wear pants under over … would you please?

The woman

And me …. And me

Albert

Calm down for a while. you aren't aimed for anything

Brain

May you bring please?

Or you want to down from the bed then walking naked as I born front of you!

- Neil throwing the pants on air then falling on his face

Brain

       Thanks 

- Trying to wear the pants ……. He still under bed sheet

- Suddenly throwing the bed sheet on Neil's face

- Quickly getting up

- Pushing Albert by his hand

- Takes his shirt quickly

- The woman screaming

- Brain running.. escaping from the apartment

Ext. - Street - Night

- Wearing his shirt while running

- Albert & Neil run after him

Neil

Stop Brain .. stop

Albert

Don't ever shoot

- Hides behind a vettura



Neil

Rascal!

Albert

Damned! .. Vile!

Ext. - streets -Crowd - Night

Albert

He's there

- Running

- Brain among crowd, cars ,people

- Trying to stop any car, but useless

- Running among people

- All go away from him

- Hiding behind a stopped car

- Careful, looks through car's glass

- Sees Neil & Albert

- Tries to open car's door

The car's Owner

Get away of my car

- Brain strike his face strongly

Neil

Is he lost in the crowed?

- Brain running

- Hits with a man, falling together

- Quickly gets up

- Keep running

Neil

He falls there!

- Running towards him

- Red Pontiac car driven by a woman was steady to be stopped

- Brain pushes her out

- The woman screaming

- Brain rushing into the car

- Drives the car with high speed

 -        A taxi is passing in this moment 

- Albert stops the taxi.

Int. - Taxi - Streets - Night

Albert

Quickly follow that red car

We're police

- Neil makes a contact

- Neil

Unit 15

Unit 15

We're in san Dircy street , We need a police car to halt the way front of the fugitive. Right now. Red Pontiac car

Albert( to the taxi driver )

Don't let him runaway

                                      The taxi driver 

He's crazy!

What this rash does? What is his crime? ...... why

Do you chasing him? !

Is he stolen this car?

Albert

Don't talk too much.

Keep following

Don't let him escape 

Int. - Streets - The red car

- Brain drives the car frivolity

- Crushing a car

- Keep his way

Ext. - Police car - Night

- Police car moves

Int. - Taxi - Streets

Albert

Foolish!

Neil

He near from the highway


Ext. - The red car - Street - Night

- Car's steering wheel out of his control

- Crushing two cars

- Getting away from the street

- Brain turns with the car then keep his way

Ext. - Police car

- Police car appears


Int. - Police car - Night

- 3 Policemen

- One of them makes a contact

-Picks the microphone to call in 
                                 The policeman 

We can 't halt the way !

Very crowed !


Ext. –The red car – Highway –Night

The red car to the Highway

Int.. - The taxi - Highway

Albert

We must contact the first intersection

- Neil makes a contact

Neil

Unit 15 .. unit 15

Telling the first intersection with car's details

Int. - Police car - Highway - Night

The policeman

I'll do order right now

- Picks up the microphone to call in

Intersection A

Intersection A

From Intersection

I hear you

The policeman

Here unit 15 ,A red Pontiac car

Its numbers panel is crushed

Driven by a man

You should stop this car

Int. -The red car - Highway

- Brain trying to cross a big truck next to him

- Steering wheel out of his control

- The car gets away from the way

Ext. -The red car - Highway - Night

-The car crushing with the iron barrier

- Turning over many times 

- Police car stop

- The taxi stop

- Running towards Brain

- Brain's face bleeding

Neil

Is he still alive?

Albert

I don't think so

                                        The taxi driver 

Can I go?

Albert

We thank you

                                         The taxi driver 

I'm always helping policemen

Is this crazy dead?

Int. - Neil's office -Day

Neil & Albert

Neil

Our thread has been cut!

Albert

He's died! I think we mistaken when we entered to his bedroom armed

- Ray's photo on the wall … [ Wanted ]

Neil

Don't forget Brain is a danger criminal

Always armed, shooting anyone facing his way

Albert

He though that we came to arrest him

Neil

He always used to escape from policemen

- Mobile rings

Albert

Yes

When?

Watching 24 hours a day

Ok … ok

Albert

There's a call from FBI

Neil

About Anne?

Albert

I asked to watch her 24 hours a day

Neil

       Maybe longing and yearning to her lover makes her coming to Florida 

Albert

This is just probability

She will be under watching

Neil

If so, she will make a great help

Int. - Anthony's house - bedroom - Day

- Anthony wears his clothes

Anthony

What is your opinion about this red t. shirt?

Ray

As you like

Anthony

I ask you my friend

Ray

This red is elegant

Anthony

Ok

-The grandmother enters

Anthony

I didn't go out since 20 days grand ma … !

The grandmother

Anthony, you must be careful

Ray

Be quiet about him

- Anthony combs his hair

Anthony

I 'm finished

Ray

Let 's go

-Ray helps him

Anthony( to his grandmother )

Do you change your mind and come with us?

- Getting out from the room

Int. - Anthony's house - the hall

- She opens the door

The grandmother

Please Mr. Ray don't be late

Ray

We shall not

Ext. - Anthony's house – Day

- Ray helps Anthony to get in the car

- Puts him safety belt

- The boy salutes his grandma

- She salutes him

- The car moves


Int. Ray's Car – Day

Ray

Would you Italian Food?

Anthony

Pizza?

Ray

Pizza.. Do you like pizza?

Anthony

I think nobody dislike it.

Pizza…. Italian food !

Ray

Also Italy distinguishing with macaroni..

Anthony

Did you visit Italy before?

Ray

Since 7 years!

Anthony

Do you like Pizza my friend?

                                     Ray 

As you said ....No body dislike pizza

Anthony

To the Italian pizza

Ray

When your parents come?

Anthony

I don't know

My father called yesterday but didn't tell anything

Ray

Did you talk with him

Anthony

Little

He called lately at night

I was sleepy

My grandma didn't tell him about my accident

She told me to not say anything

                                     Ray 

well done

Anthony

Mum will be so sad when knowing what happened to me and of course dad too.

But when they come, I shall tell them about you!

Ray

Me?!

What you will say?


Anthony

I shall say you're my new friend

Although you're older than me

How old are you?

Ray

Guess?

Anthony

25 , 28 years

Ray

How old are you exactly?

Anthony

9 years

Ray

I'm older than you about 21 years

Anthony

30 years

Ray

I seem older or younger?

Anthony

Seem younger

Ext. The restaurant - Day

- The car is parking

- Ray get out

- Helps Anthony to getting out


Ray

What about this Italian restaurant?

It offers all kind of Italian food , especially pizza

-They enter

Int. The restaurant - Day

Anthony

Is there unoccupied table!

What shall we do now  ?

Going to other restaurant ? … we haven't luck to eat pizza today ?!

Ray

This time usually crowded

-Ray sees unoccupied table

Ray

There's one

-They go to unoccupied table … seating

- Waiter gives each one a menu

Ray

2 pizza

Waiter

Which kind?

Ray

All in the menu?

Waiter

Yes

                                  Anthony 

Great!

There're many kinds … sea food pizza, vegetables, meat and others.

I take pizza with vegetables

And you?

Ray

Me..

This.. no

Pizza with tune

Waiter

Ok sir

Anthony

Look..

-Ray turns around

Ray

What?

Anthony

This fat man!

Eats with a funny way!

Eats gluttony! Doesn't care anyone around him.

Doesn't feel shame?!

Ray

In which class are you in?


Anthony

Fifth class

Ray

Are you success or not?

Anthony

I didn't fall up till now in any exam

Ray

What would you like to be?

Anthony

A pilot in U.S. Air forces

Ray

Do you like air ?

Anthony

I like planes and pilot's uniform

But I prefer warplanes than civilian planes

I keep many pictures from magazines and internet about warplanes F16 – F 22 , Ghost, French Mirage, and others .

- Waiter brings the pizza

Anthony

Delicious!

Isn't it?

Ray

Very delicious!

Anthony

I forget to ask you, what is your job?

Ray

Why do ask me about my job?

Anthony

I want to know everything about you.

Ray

As you guessed my age, can you guess my job?!

Anthony

This is very difficult!..

Ext. Gym center – Day

- Tony 's BMW car stopped next to the Gym center

- Getting out from the car

- Enters

Int. Gym Center – Day

- Tony walks till reaching the receptionist

- Talks with him

- Turns around then going to a hall

Int. Gym – Center

- Looking around

- The center has some men and youth in different ages practicing sport with devices

- Tony sees Mr.Hank ,about 55 years old

- Hank Manilow , one of businessmen , and the most rich man

- Tony going forward to him

Tony

Mr. Hank

Hank

Tony! … What do you want?

Tony

Don't want see me?

Hank

I told you before we shouldn't meet till finishing everything!

Tony

That's right

But …

Hank

But what?

Speak……..

Tony

You seem annoyed from seeing me!!

Hank

I don't want anyone seeing us till finishing everything … I warned you before and you disregarded my warning.....

Tony

Why overdone fear and worry?!

Mr. Hank, you seem that you forget our agreement!

Hank

No

I didn't forget

Shall we talk in another time


Tony

When?

Hank

Tomorrow at seven P.M.

Tell me, what about your friend Ray?!

Be careful, don't tell him anything about me

Never Tony…. Never!

You shouldn't mention my name … I don't tell you what I shall do if happened so! Consider it is a threat… warning as you wish…do you understand?

Tony

The important thing at him is money… just money

Be quiet , he doesn't know anything about you

Hank

Also the important thing for you is money

Just money

Did he tell you about the second mission?

Tony

He plans , determining time and place then execute

I think he execute successfully

He doesn't like to stay here for long time , as soon as finishing the second mission, he will leave Florida

Hank

Ok Tony

You can go


Tony

Bye..

- Hank returns to his gym

Hank ( to himself )

Vile!

Ignoble!

Ext. Gym Center - Day

- Tony gets out

- Drives his car

Int. Tony 's apartment - bedroom - Day

- A woman in nightgown lies in a bed

- The woman is Tony 's lover , Martina

- Tony arrives

- She hiding behind the door

- He begins to take off his shirt

- She kissing him

Tony

Honey!

Martina

Didn't you feel my presence?

Tony

It is a pleased surprise!

Martina

I missed you too much


Tony

How I miss you!

-He kisses her hot deep kiss in her lips

Martina

We didn't meet than 20 days!

Tony

I'm really busy these days

Do you feel hungry?

Martina

I prepare you wonder food within minutes

- She getting out

- He looks to his face on the mirror

- Touches his beard

- Enters the attached small bathroom to bedroom

Int . The bathroom

- Tony begins to shave his beard

- Martina's voice from the kitchen

Martina

Would you like omelet with salad or …

- Tony doesn't hear

Martina

Tony … Tony

Tony

What?

- Turns shaver off

Tony

Do you say something?

Martina

Would you like omelet with salad or cheese with boiled vegetables?

Tony

As you with

- Turns shaver on

Ext. A street - Day

- Ray's car stopped

- Daimler car stops next to a building

Int. Ray's car – Day

- Ray watching the building's entrance

- Opens car's window little

Ext. The building's entrance - Day

Arthur… the man whom his photo was hanged beside Robin's photo in Ray's apartment appears.

A rich man about 48 years old surrounded with 3 men of his guards.

Int. Ray's car - Day

- Steady position to shoot

- Aiming the gun towards Arthur's head

- But suddenly a woman appears cut vision

- She kisses Arthur

- Guards turning around them

- One of them opening the car's door

- Arthur sits beside her in the back seat

- The car moves

- Ray lights a cigarette


Ray ( to himself )

What is damned luck?!

Ignoble prostitute woman!

- Turns with the car in the other direction

Int. Tony 's apartment – bedroom - Day

- Tony with his lover naked in the bed

- Dalliances , kisses and embraces

- Mobile ringing

Tony

- Is this a time for calls!

- Go to hell

Martina

Maybe it is an important call

Tony

There's no one in the world more important than you … I love you … I love you ….

Int. Ray's car – Day

- Ray trying to make a mobile call , but useless

- Throwing mobile with a nervous action to the back seat

Ext. Ray's car

- Ray's car crossing down town streets

- Stops next to a bar

- Getting out from the car

- Quarrel in the street next to the bar … two men are fighting.

- Ray looks to them….

- Enters to the bar

Int. bar - Day


Ray

Beer

- The barman prepares a cup

Man (1)

This is the worst bar!


Man (2)

All bars here worst each other!

The barman ( to Ray )


Is this the first time come to here?

- Gives him a Cup

- Ray

And the last time

- They laughing

Man (1)

Did I tell you!

This man shall not come to here again

This is the last time

- Ray drinks

- Looking to them

Ray

Shut up

Man (2)

Do you prevent our talks?

- Ray going towards him

- Catches him from his shirt

Ray

I don't like to hear your voice

Or I shall break your neck

The barman

I'm sorry for this

- Ray ready to go out form the bar

The barman

You didn't complete your drink !

- Ray throwing him about 100 dollar in the air

Int. Florida Police - Neil's office - Day

- Neil makes mobile call

Neil

Where are you?

Intercut with Albert in a room – Florida Police – Day

Albert

Floor 2

Neil

Okay

- Neil gets out

INT. Corridor - Florida Police

Neil ( to Margrate ) Police woman

Margrate !congratulations for come back

Margrate

Hi, Neil , thanks

- Neil arrives to a room in floor 2 , then enters

Int. - Florida Police- an office room

- Ray's photo victims on the wall

- The victims , men , woman

Neil

Ray's Victims!

Albert

This man!

Ray killed him in 1994 . His name

Jeff Kilsany . In 1995 another crime has been committed

Neil

Every year he used to commit a crime As long an there is the sponsor of the committed crimes, he is ready.

Albert

His victims are many .Look… In the year 2000, he killed that husband after his wife paid to money to do this.

Neil

There's no thing important in his life more than money

Ext. – Ray's Apartment - Night

- Light glimmering.

- Charming view

- Ray looks from the window

- Drinks a cup of wine


- looking at the photo of the second man, Arthur on the wall.

- Spitting on it.

Ray

You can't escape the next time.

I'll kill you ………...... Kill you.

- Bell 's sound.

- Ray opening the door.

- Tony & Ray are embracing each other's.

Tony

My dear friend

Ray

You look tired..!

Tony

Is this clearly appearing on my face?

Ray

What are you doing to look so tired?

Tony

Nothing new!

- Tony is looking at Anne's photo on the wall....

Tony

Good Evening my fair lady.

Ray

I have called you today

The mobile was off....

Tony

I was so busy at that time

Ray

In what?

Tony

I went to bed with a woman.

- They laughing


Ray

Beautiful?

Tony

So beautiful.. Charm brunette

                                        Ray 

I don't like brunettes

Tony

When will you execute the second mission?

-Ray sits

Ray

I was about to kill him, unfortunately he escape

Tony

How?

Ray

I was about to shoot him; unfortunately an old cursed woman cut vision.

Tony

Where?

Ray

Before the building of his office.

- Tony fetch cup of wine

Ray

He will not escape

I need to make surveillance and collect the required information

Tony

Then, the mission shall be long?

Ray


Not much

Tony

I'm waiting

- Ray standing

Ray

The problem that this scoundrel has no appointed time or fixed places.

He moves from place to anther continually!

He will not escape from Ray's bullet!

What's your next deal with Hank?

Tony

Every thing is delayed!

I shall be a partner with 20 %

EXT.- Building - Day

Ray's car stopped before a building .It consists of 3 floors.

- Arthur, appears from the window, with the owner of this building.

- Ray is getting out his gun

- Directing the gun toward Arthur's head.

- But, Arthur enters.

- Ray is getting out from the car.

- Running toward the building

INT. The building

- Ray enters

- The building is unoccupied.

- Ray creeping to the floor where Arthur present in.

- Listening to the dialogue..

- A group of Arthur's guards.


Arthur

Be sure, the amount I give you can't be paid by anyone else.

The owner

I know that

Arthur

Ok, we agree

The owner

You offered me very enough amount more than I expected.

Arthur

Do you know why I bought this building?

I shall change it into super restaurant as I shall call it the name of my new wife.

She will be so happy when knowing that.

You shall get cheque with all amount on Citibank.

The owner

But… I wished if the cheque was directly on HSBC bank

Arthur

As you like. No problem

Tomorrow morning, I will be in my grange.

You can come to sign the cheque

The owner

Ok

Arthur

Now, I want to have another look at the floor 3

INT. - Corridor - Building

- Ray is hiding

- Steady position to shoot.

- Directing his gun toward Arthur's head, but a guard cut vision.

- They are going up to the floor 3

- Ray is going down quickly..

EXT. - Street - Day

- Ray gets out

- Running quickly toward his car.

- D riving with high speed

EXT. - The grange - Day

- A large area, bushy trees .

- A high fence of wires surrounds the grange.

- The gate is closed and guarded by a security man.

- Ray wearing a black suit.

- Standing before the wires..

INT. - The grange

- Arthur is lying down in the terrace

- Beside him Linda the woman who appeared with him in the entrance of the building of his company .

- The guards are four men in different places....


- Mobile ringing

Arthur

Oh my God!

Calls never stop


Linda

Calls means money

Arthur

It looks no time for relaxation and rest.

- Holds mobile sees the called number

Arthur

He is one of those stupid who doesn't differ between work and rest time!

Put this disturb mobile inside , I don't like to hear its ringing!

                                    The guard 

Ok, sir

EXT. - the grange - Day

- Ray is examining the wires.

- He is trying to penetrate the gun through the wires.

- But, he can't because of the narrow holes.

- Running to his car

INT. - The grange - The terrace

- Arthur and Linda are still lying down in the terrace

A guard

The horses are ready

- They are getting up

Arthur

A quite and peaceful horse for you

Horses ridding is so enjoyable! Especially in this wonder place and weather!

Linda

I'm ridding horses since I was eighteen. I didn't continue more than this

Arthur

You look as you still eighteen!

EXT. - Road - Day

- Ray has got out his bag from the car

- The bag contains a number of tools, wires, scissors and iron equipments.

- Taking an iron scissor.

- Testing the scissor using a strong cable.

- The scissor is cutting the cable.

- Taking the scissor.

INT. - The grange - Day

- Arthur is on the horse.

- While Linda on another.

- The guards are watching them.

- Two of them are on their horses.

- While the others are standing.

                   Arthur (to the horse) 

Oh Faslom! Since a long time, we haven't met

Three months ago, I didn't come here.

Linda

Projects, deals and meetings

Arthur

My life full of hard work all time


Imagine also weekend ,Projects, Deals and Meetings !

Linda

It is hard! And health ruinous.

Arthur

I will try to arrange it even if it is hard

Linda

Did you try before?

Arthur

I did but I failed

Linda

Try again

EXT. - The grange - Day

- Ray is trying to cut parts of the cable using a scissor.

- But, he coudn 't

- Seeing a big vettura beside the wires , thinking for a moment

- Running, getting up of the vettura then, climbs , jumping into the grange without being noticed .

INT. - The grange

- Ray inside the grange.

- Hiding behind a tree.

- The horses are before him nearby.

- At this moment, One of the guards has been seen him!

- Ray is steady position to shoot.

                                   The guard 

Look!

- The two guards are shooting

- Ray shoots Arthur's head.

- Linda screams

Linda

Arthur! Arthur!

- The guards are running toward Arthur.

Linda

Carry him to the car, I take him to hospital immediately

- Two guards carrying him, while the other guards shooting in everywhere.

                                       Guard (1) 

There!

                                      Guard (2) 

He can't escape

- The guards are ridding the horses shoot.

- Ray is looking at the gate.

- He has observed the security man of the gate carrying his gun.

- Running behind the trees.

- One of guards on his horse has observed him....

- He shoots him.

- Ray is hiding well behind a tree.

- Steady position to shoot.

- He has shot the guard on the horse and killed him.

- Running, hiding behind the bushy trees and stones.

- The four are running, three of them are guards and the forth is a security man.

                     A guard (to the security man) 

Oh rascal! Stay in the gate

- The security man is running toward the gate

- Ray is shooting him in his back.

A guard

This is the villain!

- He is shoots

A guard

We should surround him carefully

I'm from this side and you from the right..... Come!

- Ray is watching the guard who is moving in the right side.

- Steady position to shoots..

- Shooting him in his head

- Running quickly from the right toward the gate.

- The other two guards are running

- Ray is coming out to the road.

EXT. – Road -Day

- Running toward his car.

- One of the guards is shooting him.

- The bullet hits the car's door.

- Getting into the car, driving at utmost speed.

- - The guards getting into a car.

INT. - Ray's car - Day

- He has smashed small wooden booth.

- Its parts have scattered.

- He is looking at the car mirror.

- The guard's car follows him

- Ray has heightened the car speed

- As a result of the high speed, the car is hitting a tree.

- The front part of the car has smashed then stopped.

- Comes out quickly.

Ext. – Road - Day

- Ray running. They are follow him

- Before him, a school

- Running into the school

INT. - school

- Teachers and students

- Ray rushing to one of the rooms.

INT . School - Room

- A lady is ready to go out

- She hits with Ray, screams

- Ray is hiding behind the curtains.

- The guards are rushing to the room.

- The lady is weeping

- Ray is steady position to shoot.

- One of them has injured in his shoulder and the other in his foot.

- The lady is crying

- Screaming from outside

- Ray is ready to jump from the window.

- Jumping outside.

Ext. – Road - Day

- Looking at the road, hoping to find any car

- A car has appeared from a distance.

- Weaving to the car

- The car has topped.

- A young man of 18 years has driven it.

Ray

I want to go to the downtown.

The young man

You are welcome

INT. – The car - Day

                                              The young man 

Did you find any problem in this area?

Ray

No

- Ray is getting out tissue from his pocket.

- Drying his sweat.

- The young man glances a gun

- He is worried and confused.

The young man

Are you a policeman?

Ray

How did you know?

They young man

I had glanced a gun

- Ray gets a gun

Ray

It is a gun never leave me

It is always my sincere friend

I'm a policeman.. Yes

I was following one of the criminals



                                         The young man 

Has he escaped?

Ray

I killed him

No one can get away of me

                                              The young man 

It seems that you are an experienced and clever policeman

Ray

That's what they are saying

The young man

What did this criminal do?

What is his crime?

Ray

These are top secrets

The young man

Sorry

Policemen very danger job!

Full of risks!


Ray

Won't you stop talking?

The young man

Sorry again

Dissolve

INT. – Florida police – commissioner's office – Day

- The commissioner and Albert with the two guards of Arthur.

- The two guards with wound bandage

- Albert is holding Ray's photo.

- One of the guards is looking at the photo.

The guard

Yes, he is

- The other guards is taking the photo


The other

He is the dirty criminal!

The guard

This criminal caused us a disaster!

The other

We didn't know how he could sneak into the grange?

Albert (to commissioner)

Concerning the black car, FORD model, it appeared that he has rented of office using a false name called (Ronald Ziessy).

The owner of the office has recognized his photo.

Knocking on the door.

Commissioner.

Yes

- Linda is entering

Commissioner

When did your relation begin with Arthur?

Linda

Since one year

Albert

Did you see the man of this photo before?

- She is looking at Ray's photo

Linda

No


Albert


If he has enemies, who are they?

Linda

I recognized him in one of the biggest concert

He was charm and emotional

It was the gladdest year of my life.. last year that we spent it together

Oh! Such happens has been finished and never come back


I don't know anyone of his friends

I know only the guards.

He was living alone.

We were about to marry.

-She is crying

Commissioner

Please, be calm

Linda

Why has he been killed? Why?! Why?!

It's very difficult and hard

They killed all my dreams

Albert,

Please, don’t cry

                                       Linda 

The killer must be submitted to justice

Albert

This we trying to do so.

Did you leave your address, telephone and mobile number with the officer outside?

Linda

Yes, I did

Can I go?

Albert

But, remember that you are under request at any time and you will be called again for the investigation.

- she is coming out


The guard

She is a respectful woman

Albert

Have you any comment on her tales?

The other

No


All what she has said is true.

It was a wonder love story between them .It ended painfully!

Commissioner

You can go

Albert

It should be made a comprehensive investigation concerning to determine the enemies.

EXT. – skyscraper - Day

- A car of Cadillac has stopped.

- A businessman is coming out of it.

- He is Dan who is 51 years old.

- Enters.

INT. – Hank's office – Skyscraper- Day

- The 51st floor.

- A wonderful decoration.

- An extremely majestic office.

- Expensive antiques

- Hank in his office.

- A charming view appears behind the glass.

- Knocking on the door.

Hank

Yes,

  - The office manger enters                               

The office manger

Timetable that you ordered

Hank

Is there any meeting in the evening?

The office manger

At  seven p.m. with NIOP chairman, Mr. Douglas. That's all 

Hank

Delay such meeting with him.

-The office manger gets out.

- Dan enters.

- Shaking hands.

- Dan sits

Hank

Welcome Dan

DAN

Did you read the newspapers of the last five days?

Hank

Just dirty things and have been removed forever.

This is the normal punition of those people who trying to dare me. I could revenge for myself in the suitable time

Dan

Your reaction was danger and unexpected!

I surprised for what had happened!

Hank

They caused me much pain and troubles.

Did you forget? They tried to kill me!

Dan

It couldn't assure that

Hank

No, I assured

I haven't enemies except them

-Hank stands looks at the window

Dan

The comprehensive investigation is still running till now.

I hope that you will be above suspicion.


-Hank turns to Dan

Hank

I'm out of any suspicion. I did it to conserve my life and reputation. It was my life's fault that I dealt with those people. But it will not happen again


Dan

I don't support aggressive and killing as a way of solving the problems and disputes.

Hank

It is the only way that those know and understand it

Without God's blessing I would die now.

-Hank sits again

Because one of them I lost 19 million dollars in a month!.. The villain Arthur!

You think I shall be patient more than that?

Dan

Be calm.. Relax

If you had asked my advice, I would not have given you the permission to do it.

It's no use crying over spilt milk.

Hank

You utter this because they never hurt you.

As for me, the situation is completely different.

The criminal who is killed doesn't live here

Dan

I know this before....

Hank

I was in a badly need first , for a professional killer .Second , in a short time . Third , A killer from outside


Dan

You attached yourself in a circle! Never can penetrate it easily

Hank

I was ready to pay any amount whatever

There is a mediator between me and the criminal

This mediator is a Ragamuffin!

He doesn't know anything about me

He had never seen me before ,and I 'm too

If we meet together anywhere, no one will know the other

I feel comfortable now!

After killing this scoundrels

Dan

Who believes that Hank manilow can be involved in such crimes?

Hank

It's the first time and it will be the last.

Dan

Although Robin & Arthur are surrounded by a large group of guards , they are killed! I astonish how they could live normally among theses guards!

Didn't they feel restricted?

Hank

They are surrounded by guards of a dirty business in addition to their original work, drugs, money laundering. Etc I'm sure of that

Dan

You also have two guards!

Hank

They are guards. Not criminals !

-Moment of silence

Dan

What do you think about?!

INT. - taxi - Night

-Ray is making a mobile call.

-Intercut with Anne in her apartment (bathroom)- Night

-The mobile is ringing

                                        Anne 

Ray !!

I miss you


                                        Ray 

Me too honey

I missed you so much

Anne

All matters are ok?

Ray

No problems

I performed the two missions successfully.....

Anne

What about your injury ?!


Ray

It was little injury

Anne

I can't absolutely bear that

Ray

Where are you now? What are you doing?

Anne

In the bathroom

While the mobile was ringing, I was taking shower

I was feeling that you are going to call me.

So I put the mobile on a stand

Ray

Then you are naked?!


- They are laughing

Anne

We will meet soon!

Ray

I'm in my way to see Anthony

Anne


Is he recover from his injury?

Ray

Yes he can walk normally now.

You will see his photo when I come back. I got a photo from him

Anne

You make me ardent to see his photo

Ray

I liked him so much

Anne

I'm going to surprise you

Ray

You are my charming princess and fair lady

What is the surprise?

Anne

No, I will not tell you


Ray

Kiss you

Anne

Kiss you

-Turns mobile off

-Ray looks from the window seeing a store for toys and gifts

Ray (to the driver )

please stop front of this store, Wait me

-The taxi stops

-Ray gets out

-Enters to the store

INT. - The store - Day

Ray

I want to buy an airplane but warplane

The seller

Is this important?

Ray

Yes,. yes very important

                                     The seller 

Sorry

You can find your request after two days if you visited

us

Ray

Unfortunately!.. Thanks

-Ray gets out getting in the taxi. Its move

INT. - Anthony's apartment - Night

- Anthony is looking through the window.

- Seeing Ray

- Anthony is walking toward the door.

The grandmother

Anthony !

Anthony

My Friend …Ray!

- Ray enters

Ray

How are you my little friend, Anthony?

                                           Anthony 

Fine

Ray

Good evening

                                         The grandmother 

Good evening, you are welcome

Next Sunday Anthony's Parents shall come

Ray

Really?!

The grandmother

They called me yesterday morning

Ray

Pleasant news for you Anthony !

Anthony

I missed them so much

Ray

I notice that you walk naturally now

Anthony

Pain has decreased completely

Ray

I came today to say goodbye


Anthony

Why?

Ray

There is no reason to stay here any more Anthony

Anthony

Why don't you stay here with me?

Ray

It doesn't mean we shall not meet again

Surely I'll back to visit you.

Believe me, I wish if time was longer. But sorry

Anthony

I am so sad to hear this

Ray

I don't want to see you unhappy

The grandmother

You will come to visit us?

Ray

Of course.

INT. -Night club -Night

- A nightclub in downtown.

- Tony with Martina

- Drinking

Martina

This is the last cup please Tony

Tony

No. we will go on drinking, then spend a hot night

We shall spend one of an enjoyable night in our life

Martina

I'm agree

- He kissing her.

- Touches her cheek.

Martina

You excite me

Tony

This is exactly what I meant

Martina

Stop it

- One of Hank's guards.

                                             The guard 

Mr. Hank wants you at once

Tony

Now?!

The guard

He sent me to bring you to him

Tony

Why did not he contact me through the mobile?

The guard

I do not know I have no information

Tony

I shall drink the last cup …,then go with you

Shall I bring you a cup

The guard

No

You drink too much

Tony

Where is he now?

The guard

In the garden of the villa

Tony

So it is not far

                                       Tony (to Martina) 

If I am late, go to the apartment

I will return back to you

They go towards the exit door

Tony

This is the first time he sends you to arrest me in this way!



Ext. Nightclub-Night

Tony

My car is not here

The guard

I came in a car

-They getting in

INT. Bentley Car

Tony

Wonderful Bentley!

The guard

He owns a collection of the most excellent recent cars.

Tony

Do you remember the black MAYBACH car that he bought last month?

The guard

It is fantastic masterpiece!

It made especially for him!

EXT. - Garden –Hank 's villa -Night

- A villa like a castle

- Lights glimmering around the swimming pool that is located in a middle of a garden

- Hank is sitting on a chair

- A guard is a few meters away

- Hank is reading some documents

- Tony with the guard entering

Tony

Is there anything that necessitates coming in this way?

- Hank puts the documents on the table.

Hank

Have a seat

Tony

Scarcely, I see you in such case

Hank

Which case you mean?

Tony

Relaxed. . Not nervous. . not stressed

                                        Hank ( to the guard ) 

You can go

- The other guard is still here.

                                        Tony 

Why did you ask to see me?

                                        Hank 

Don't be hurry


Tony

This is the first time happened so

                                    Hank 

I wanted to talk with you

Tony

In which thing?

Hank

You were in the bar?

Tony

Yes

                                     Hank 

Undoubtedly, you won a lot of money since I helped you.

Profits from deals from everywhere

Commissions, rewards and so on


Tony

You opened for me many closed doors

Hank

I think you were and still very loyal

Isn't it?!

Tony

Of course

Hank

All right


Tony

I don't understand what you mean?

Hank

I just wanted to remember you

Your friend is so professional

He could achieve the two missions successfully.

Tony

I was sure that. Did I tell you no one as my friend Ray


The two missions were done as agreed!

Hank

Yes . . . Yes

Where is he?

Tony

Why? I think he will leave Florida tomorrow

Don't worry .As I told you many times he doesn't know anything about you!

He took the money then did the mission

Hank

Why did you leave New York ?

Tony

I came to Florida to establish import and export company

But unfortunately, project was broken down!

I couldn't make any achievement



Hank

Maybe this is the last meeting between us......

Tony

Are you traveling abroad?

Hank

Not me who shall travel

Tony

I don't understand

Hank

Never mind

- A moment of silence.

- Hank with a gestured from his head to the guard

- Comes from behind Tony cautiously carrying a gun

- The guard shoot Tony

- Tony falls on the ground bleeding

Hank

Sorry Tony

You are just an insect that has performed its role . . . a climber!

Now your mission is complete

(to the guard) As I promised you a big reward is waiting for you …You wouldn't have dreamed of it all your life

The guard

I am at your service Mr. Hank


- The guard puts the corpse in a bursa, ties with iron chains - Carrying it to the car.

EXT. –Streets -Night -

- The car that carries Tony's corpse crossing down town streets.

- A sound of music.

EXT. Bridge -Night -

- He reaches

- Carrying the corpse

- The guard watches all directions.

- No one

- He throws the corpse from the bridge

- It sinks in the river

The guard

Good bye Tony!

Money important than anything else

I think you know that very well.

Dissolve

EXT –Tony 's house - Night

- Ray is looking at the window of the apartment

- No lights

- Making a mobile call

- But useless

INT. Florida police- Day

- Neil is reading some documents

- Albert enters

Neil

 We couldn't reach anything important up till now! 

Albert

We couldn't reach Ray or the instigator who paid him the money

Neil

We need more patience and time

Albert

Danger criminals don't easily arrest them

Most know nothing about the enemies

Neil

They are trying to hide some facts and data because they don't want to involve in any problems

Albert

This makes our mission more difficult

Neil

This is the daily reports for the intelligencers , private detectives and investigators

Nothing new !

Albert

The investigation reports are familiar

Neil

Did you order to continue watching?


Albert

Yes

Watching will not stop on all persons who probably have relation with the two crimes

In the first crime, there're 6 persons under control, and in the second crime there're about 11 persons

Neil


Look! There's news !

-They're reading from the computer's monitor

Albert

Good Anne!

- The mobile is ringing.

Albert

Yes

When?

This is great news

Flight number 542

- He looks at his watch

Ok

We will be waiting

Neil

Anne!

Albert

The lover couldn't bear her lover's absence any more.

After two hours, she will be at the airport

To the airport immediately

Come on

Neil

Unasked, she will lead us to Ray

Albert

Watching continued for more than two months

- They getting out.

 INT.          - Corridor     - Florida police      - Day 

Albert & Neil

Neil

You will fall in the trap today Ray

Albert

The car is ready?

Neil

Of course

EXT. – Florida police

- They getting in a car

- Not a police car

INT. –The car -Day 

- Albert drives.

Neil

Finally Ray!

Albert

Ray shall be arrest by us within hours


Ext.–Airport -Day

- An plane lands

- The passengers to the arrival hall

INT. AirPort –Arrival hall

- Albert and Neil are waiting

- They watch all the passengers.

- Anne appears

- Albert sees her

Albert

Welcome Anne

Neil


She looks very happy

Albert

She will see her lover after long time.

Neil

We leave her till she passes from the arrival hall

We will go out from the other door

Come on

- Anne gets out

Ext. –AirPort -Day -

                           Anne (to a taxi driver) 

Please to the downtown

- Albert and Neil are getting into the car.

INT. Taxi -Day -

- Air touches Anne's hair.

- She smiles

Anne

Weather is wonder!


Florida doesn't get crowd like New York

The driver

I drives slowly, Is this annoying you?

Anne

Are you a new driver?

Int. -The car –Day

Albert

Come on Anne quickly

Neil

This taxi driver is very slow

Albert

I don't know why he drives slowly?!

Neil

She didn't find except this driver..!

Int. –The taxi - Day

- The driver looks at the mirror

The driver

This car is following us

Anne

What?!

The driver

Since we moved from the Airport ,this car is following us

I 'm sure

Anne

That Car?

The driver

Yes

-Anne is thinking for minutes

Anne

Stop please 

- The taxi stops

INT. –The car -Day

-The car stops

Neil

What happened?

Albert

Oh! My God!

A stupid driver!

Neil

I fear if she observed our following up to her?



Int. Taxi - Day


The driver

Is there any problem between you and the driver of this car?

- Anne is thinking

- An idea comes to her mind

- She looks at the car

Anne

Is there a hotel nearby?

The driver

There a small hotel

Anne

It doesn't important, to that hotel please

Where is this hotel?

The driver

Not far

Could you know him? And why following you?

Anne

No

The driver

What about if we stop and ask him why he follows us?

Anne

No …. No don't stop

To the hotel quickly



The driver

This is your first visit to Florida ?

Anne

The first time

INT. Ray's apartment -Day


- Checks his gun

- The photos are still on the wall. A red sign x on Arthur's photo.

- Taking the photos off.

- He lights a fire in them

- Whops Anne's photo

- Kisses it

- Puts it inside the bag

- A mobile is ringing.

Ray

Yes

Anne!!

Intercut with Anne in the taxi – Day 

Anne

Listen to me

I am here in Florida in a taxi

There is a car follows me now

Ray

Why did you do that? Why?

Do not come to the apartment

Take care Anne

Anne

Sorry my dear

Now, I am on my way to one of the hotels

Ray

Stay in this hotel

Anne

I never expected that I'd be under surveillance

Ray

I will leave the apartment

Anne

To where?

Ray

I'll leave Florida today despite everything

Thanks for your calling.. Anne

Sure, the airports are being watched, the high way , The railway

If they aren't from the policemen, who are they then?

You should stay in the hotel today .Act naturally till you go once again to New York

Anne

I don't know if there will be an air flight tomorrow or not.

Ray

You can stay here for some days.

Anne

I am sorry. I am stupid, foolish

Ray

No time now

Do exactly as I say

Anne

I will do

Ext. –Hotel - Day

- The taxi stops.

- Anne gets out

- Towards the hotel door

- She sees the car

INT. –The car -Day Neil

In that hotel you stay Ray!

- The taxi moves

- Albert (to the driver)

       Go to hill 

INT.– Hotel -Day


Anne

Please, I want a room

The receptionist

Do you want certain requirements for the room?


Anne

Please, quickly

The receptionist

How many days will you stay here?

I asked you before if you want certain requirements for the room.

Anne

No. No, any room.. Any room

The receptionist

Please, your I.D. or your passport

Anne

- Giving him her I.D.

The receptionist

     Room No. 186 

- Albert & Neil is entering

- Only 3 ladies in the reception.

- Anne looking to Neil & Albert.

                   The receptionist (to the bellman) 

Carry the bag to room No.186

- The bellman is carrying it to the upper floor

- Anne is following him

- Albert & Neil to the receptionist

Albert

We are from FBI and Florida police

- Neil is getting out Ray's photo.

Neil

Is the man of this photo is resider in the hotel now?

And in which room?

- The receptionist is looking at the photo.

The receptionist

I had never seen him before

Albert

Are you sure?

The receptionist

Yes

Neil

 Verifying from the photo again 

The receptionist

I 'm sure , I didn't see the man of this photo before

Albert

Guest list please

The receptionist

Here you're

Neil

Is there another receptionist here who changes the shifts?

The receptionist

Amelia starts her shift at six pm.

Albert

It is possible that Ray has a false I.D or passport

Also, probably, he may be disguised.

How many guests now in the hotel?

The receptionist

Only this 3 ladies, with their children and two men, but in out now!

- Albert, Neil looking to the 3 ladies

- Close up on their faces one after one

Neil

Oh! My God! I think we need to policewoman for actualization those ladies!

Albert

We'll wait the two men

Neil

Don't tell anyone that we're police

The receptionist

Ok ,sir

Neil

When these two men come back?

The receptionist

I don't know

Int. Anne's room – Hotel- Day-

- Anne is weeping

- Making a call

Anne

Please, Is there is a flight to New York now?

At 3 pm.

Very Good

I want to a ticket please

Yes..first class

No..no thanks

My name is Anne Tieowhel

 Thank you 

- Drying her tears

EXT. - Cafeteria - Railway station- Day

- Ray disguised in a priest dress with beard

- Reading a newspaper.

- Having two bags.

Int. –Hotel – Day

- Anne appears going down the stairs

- Still Neil, Albert in the reception

Anne

I have to go now.

Sorry

The receptionist

What has happened?

The room unappealing ?

Anne

The room is fine.

This isn't the reason.

The receptionist

It's a bad luck


Anne

Thank you

The receptionist

I wish to see you again in our hotel

Anne

Thanks again

- Anne is looking to Neil & Albert

- She is going to the exit door.

- Neil & Albert following her

Ext. – Hotel- Day

- Anne is waving to a taxi.

- Getting into.

- Alberto & Neil are getting in the car.

 Int.  The car - Day 

Albert

To where Anne?

Neil

Sure to her lover

INT. The taxi

-Anne is drying her tears

The driver

What had happened?!

Anne

Nothing. Nothing


The driver

I 'm sorry

INT. The car – Day

Neil

Oh! My God!

Albert

Impossible!

She is returning to the Airport!

Neil

Caused by the damned driver!


What a bad luck!

Albert

She called Ray to warm him

Neil

If wasn't that foolish driver!

Albert

All threads that would lead to Ray have cut.

Neil

Maybe ,Ray is back with here on the same plane

Of course disguising

Albert

Anyone with her shall be arrested . if he is Ray or not

Neil

We must arrest her


She is accused of helping a criminal to escape.

Neil

The stupid taxi driver!

He could see us in despite of the long distance between the two cars.

INT.- Cafeteria - Railway station -Day

- Ray is sitting.

- Watching the place.

- He stands

- The porter approaches him..

The porter

Can I help you?

Ray

Carry this bag, please.


- Ray is carrying only the bag of money and his guns

- Going to the platform

INT. –The AirPort - Day

- Anne is waiting the plane..

- Watching the place surrounded.

Albert

We must verify from all of those.

- Passengers on the plane in different ages, old, young, women and men

Neil

Is he so professional in disguising to this way!

- Albert & Neil are approaching her.

Albert

Let me introduce myself to you

I'm Albert, from FBI.

- Anne is trying to be calm..

Neil

Neil from Florida police

- Each one of them is showing his I.D. card

Anne

What do you want?

Albert

You have come to Florida one hour ago.

You didn't stay in the hotel

Then you have decided to come back again.

Anne

Is it outlawed?!

Neil

 But, Helping the criminals to escape are outlawed 

Anne

I don't understand

What do you mean?

Albert

Where is Ray?

Anne

Who's Ray? I don't know this Ray!

What is my crime to arrest me?

Albert

Help a criminal to escape.

Anne

I don't know criminals

Neil

You're Ray's lover, we know that

Albert

You were watched from the police

- Taking her out, Get in the car with them.

Int. Florida police - Day

Neil

Please your handbag

Anne

It isn't allow to you that

Commissioner

No, it is allowing....

- Neil opens it.

- Gets a notebook

- Gets mobile out.

Albert

Where's Ray? Is he still in Florida ? Or back to New York ?

Anne

I told you I don't know that Ray.

- Singer sings this song

(the lyric of the song, written by Alaa Soliman)

Title:- Can You Sing With Me?!

Can you sing with me?!

Now.. Sing.. Sing..... Sing.. with me

Believe me.. we have a lot to live together and starting again

Believe me.. we shall coloring our next life with loud color

We are as two birds.. two birds

I can take off my heart.. take off my heart

Then offering it to you

There's no thing shall change our modes.

INT.     Train       - Sunset   - Dissolve 

- The train moves speedy.

- Ray is looking at the sights through the window.

- The song continues -

Sun rises on your face

I'll fly from the earth to the sky

I'll fly with two wings.

Colors dancing front of me

All barriers and forests shall be broken.

Can you sing with me

Sing . sing. sing with me ( END )

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