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March 2008 , Florida
Fade in :
INT. - Train - Day
- Ray about 30 years old
- Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache
- Have sunglasses
- Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside him on a seat .. EXT. - Railway station – Day
- Train stops
- Ray gets out from the train curries a bag
- His eyes move in everywhere
- Walks out among the crowd
- Two women behind him
- Whispering, while he can hear them .
Woman ( l )
How handsome that man !
He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.
Woman ( 2 )
Captain !
His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors
INT. - Ray's car - Night
- Black Ford Car 4x4
- A street corner
- Street is calm has little moving .
- Ray inside the car without mustache
- Smoking a cigarette .
- Wears black T. shirt & jeans
- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....
- Tony appears
- Tony is about 32 years old.
- Opening the door and sits beside him
- Lighting a cigarette
Tony
Everything is ok ?
Ray
Florida …. a wonder state !
Everything is ok
Tony
When did you decide to execute the first mission?
Ray
Saturday at night
Tony
After 3 days !!
Ray
This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray
Tony
I thought you shall kill him in his office
Ray
I found this is a very difficult
Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .
I planned for everything accurately
Tony
You're skillful in planning !
Ray
This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....
Tony
I hope the mission won't be exceeded !
Ray
Won't exceed
Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,
I become more ardent to kill them .
Especially the bold one
Tony
That bold shall leave the life next Saturday
Dissolve
Ext. – Robin's house - Night
- It consists of 4 floors
- House is very luxury
- A green area and plenty of trees
- Ray's car is far in the backside .
INT. - Robin's car - Night
- Mercedes car
- Robin is about 50 years old
- Bold, very Rich....
- Seating in the back seat
- His private guards in another car back him
- Driver drives the car
INT. Robin's house -an office room -Night
- Office room is rather dark
- Few light coming from out.
- Ray inside the office room
- Carrying a guns
- Looks from the window
- Getting out from the room careful
INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night
- Ray is hiding behind a column
- Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.
- Gets attention …….. (Steady position to shoot. )
Ext. - Robin's house - Night
- Robin arrives
- Getting out from the car
- He walks to the house entrance
- Four guards around him
- Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards
Int. - Robin's house - Reception - Night
- Light turns on
- Robin enters to the office room with two guards
- Ray nears from the window
- Looks
- Seeing two guards outside
- Nears from the office room
- Pushing the door by his foot
- Ray shots a guard in his stomach.
- Rushing into the office room
INT. - Robin's house - an office room
- Ray shoots Robin's head
- With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury
- The guard shoots Ray
- Protecting himself through the door against shots
- Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor
- The guard is still alive beside the door
- Tries to get his gun
- Ray shots him while running, injuring his head
- Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once
- Ray runs towards the house door
- A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside
- Ray runs to out
Ext. - Robin's House - Night
- A guard shoots
- Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him
- Steady to shoot
- Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand
- Runs
- Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder
- Drives his car with high speed
INT. - Ray's car - Night
- Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury
- He tries to overcome the pain
Ext. - Private hospital - Night
- Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance
Int. - Hospital – corridor
- A group of nurses
Ray
Where the Emergency room?
A nurse
The third room in the corridor end at right
A nurse
What happened to you?
Ray
Nothing serious
Int. - Emergency Room
- Ray enters
- Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed
- A nurse enters
The nurse
There's a child injured in his foot
Calls Doctor Steve?
The doctor
Quickly
- She gets out
- Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid
The doctor
Your wound isn't easy
Is this shoot! Isn't it?
Ray
Yes
The doctor
How you could bear such hard pain?
Little people can bear pain such as you .
Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger.
The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!!
The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound
Are you policeman?
Or someone shoot you?
Ray
- From Florida police
- The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse
- A child has about nine years, crying
The nurse
Bring the child here in the bed
- The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain
- Doctor Steve enters with two nurses
- Begin to make the necessary aid for the child
- Grandmother cries
The nurse
Be quite.. quite
He shall be fine
Doctor Steve
Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen
- the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child
- But Ray can see the child's face
The doctor
Did you follow a criminal?
Ray
An murderer criminal
The doctor
This is too much cost paid by policemen
Ray
That is right
The doctor
You offer several sacrifices for us
(To the nurse) what about the child.. ?
The nurse
The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot .
Ray
This is a very painful for a child in such age
The doctor
Do you feel better now?
Ray
Rather
The doctor
Check his pressure
Currently we don't need more that this
Some analgesic for pain after surgery.
Ray
Thank you
The doctor
Surely your pressure is lower
You bleed too much
The nurse
His blood pressure is really lower
The doctor
Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours
But the wound has been cleaned
- Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain
The doctor
You should be in a rest today
- Ray tries to get up
- Feels pain
The doctor
To where?
Ray
I can't stay in the hospital
Thanks, anyway
The doctor
Why?
Your wound needs some care
Why you insist to go now?
Ray
I must go now
Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again
- Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child
Ray ( to doctor Steve )
What about his wound ?
Doctor Steve
He shall improve at anyway
Ray
Are you his grandmother?
The grandmother
Yes
Ray
What's his name?
The grandmother
Anthony
Ray
A handsome and charm boy
Doctor Steve
Don't worry
He shall be recovered
This shall take times.....
The grandmother
How long?
Doctor Steve
About 10 days, maybe rather more
The grandmother
Should we come to hospital for another time?
Doctor Steve
No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so.....
The grandmother
Thank you
- Anthony crying but little
- Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other
Ray
Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony?
The grandmother
Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532
The doctor
I didn't know your name yet.
Ray
I'm Ray
The doctor
I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve.
- Ray looks to Anthony
Ray
Thank you.
- Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.
Int. - Ray's apartment - Night
A luxury apartment
Ray is setting, drinks
- Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne .
- A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall
- Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money
- Looks to the other man's photo
- Puts the cup of Brandy
- Picks the gun up
- Aiming the gun towards the man's photo
Ray
Now is your turn
Did you prepare your coffin?
Ray's shot shall penetrate your head
Your life becomes just little days.
Your face is ugly!
Makes me furious like your dead friend!
Ext. - Anthony's house - Day
- Ray arrives in his car
- Without wound bandage
Int. - Anthony's Apartment - Day
- Knocking the door
- The grandmother opens
The grandmother
Welcome Mr. . Ray
Ray
Good morning
The grandmother
Please come in
- He enters
Ray
How is my friend Anthony now?
The grandmother
He's sleeping since two hours
Took analgesic then slept at once.
Ray
A boy full of vital and joy!
The grandmother
Would you like seeing him?
Ray
I come exactly for this purpose
The grandmother
With pleasure
- To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen
- Opening the door
- Ray enters
Int. - Anthony's bedroom - Day
- Looks to the innocent child's face
- Gets out then gently closing the door
Int. - Hall
Ray
What about the pain?
The grandmother
Every day improves than before .
It was unforgettable day!
I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.
When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood
I wept also, Maybe I would faint
Ray
Anthony looks like me when I was his age
The grandmother
Really?!!
Are you recovered from your injury?
Ray
Rather
Are you live with Anthony alone?
The grandmother
His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me
I don't know what I can say to them when ask me!
Ray
Don't tell them anything.
Don't make them worry.
The grandmother
There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them
My temper doesn’t bear anymore!
I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years.
- Anthony's voice from his bedroom
Anthony
Grandma.. grandma
- Ray with the grandmother to the room
Int. - Anthony's bedroom
Anthony
Ray!... My friend..
Ray
My friend Anthony
Anthony
I'm very glad to see you
Ray
Do you feel any pain right now?
Anthony
Pain hurts me from time to another
But it isn't hard
Anthony
And you?
Is your shoulder hurts you?
Ray
Sometime
Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage
Anthony
I will not do it again
But you didn't tell me?
Ray
Tell you what?
Anthony
How your shoulder injured?
Ray
Is this important?
Anthony
I'd like to know
Ray
One of the murderer criminal shoot me
Anthony
Why?
Ray
I…….
-The grandmother interrupt Ray
The grandmother
Do feel hungry Anthony?
Anthony
No, no
I don't feel hungry now
I want to drink water
- Ray pouring him a glass of water
- Grandmother looks to her watch
The grandmother
After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication
Its time after half an hour
Ray
Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age
Anthony
Am I ?
I'm glad to hear that my friend
Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself?
Int. - Florida police - corridor -Day
Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office
Int. - Florida police -the commissioner's office
Neil gets in
Commissioner
Robin is the Ray's first victim
Neil
Maybe there's other victim or victims!
Commissioner
Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..!
Where's Albert?
Neil
I saw him parking his car
We shall do our best to arrest him
We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida
Time is very important
Commissioner
We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent
This made him in the list of the most wanted
- Searching some documents on the desk
All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .
Neil
Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control!
- Albert from FBI enters
Commissioner
Is there new news?
Albert
There's no news except what we have verified
A killed shoot in the victim's head by Ray!
Neil
If one of Robin's guard still alive, we couldn't verify that the guard recognized his photo as soon as shown it
Albert
Yes
In addition that, this criminal has super ability to aim the goal accurately, he distinguishes with disguise
Commissioner
We thank Ray that he didn't disguise when executing this
crime
Albert
Since 6 months, we assured from our source that it was agreed with him to kill one of the elected person in the local municipality elections for the benefit of other elected in one of New York Subsidiaries, but so sorry it could approve the accusation on such elected.
Commissioner
It must arrest him before making more crimes, he considers a threat for public security
Albert
It should increase investigations in everywhere may suspecting to be there.
Neil
Many investigators and private detective are spreading now in everywhere.
- Ray's photo on the computer's monitor front of him
Commissioner
What about the next plan?
Did you discussed it together?
Neil
Yes we discussed
Albert
We have some notices shall be discussed together
Neil
I think if could hold this thread, it is probably arrest him
Commissioner
The success of this plan firstly depends on Brain's agreement to work with us without force.
Neil
This is very important
He departure the prison just from short time
Albert
If we could persuade him to work with us as a nark! It shall be good!
Brain Knows most Rich Businessmen and many persons who pay money versus killing.
He has multiple relationships with several gangs and murderers in Florida ! I think he shall do much if agreed to work with us!
Commissioner
Ok., we see what will happen with him
Int. - Ray's Car - Day
- Listening to hit music
- Mobile ringing
- Turning down the music
Ray
Yes
Tony! Where are you?
Intercut with Tony in his Car – Day
Tony
In my car
Ray
I'm also in the car
Tony
Are going to the apartment?
Ray
Yes
Tony
Ok, I will be at you after half an hour
- Ray returns to hit music again
Int. - Ray's apartment - Day
-Ray holding a cup of wine
- Bell 's sound
- Opens the door
- Tony enters
Ray
Look……
- Refers to Anne's photo
Tony
A charm woman!
Wonder blond! Her golden hair makes her more charm and fascinating.
She's really beautiful
Ray
Would you like a cup?
Tony
I'll be thankful
- Ray prepare him a Cup
Tony
In the newspaper, I saw the bold … Robin's photo shoot in his head
- Ray smiling
Tony
How I felt proud when you told me, you achieved the first mission!
I felt proud because my friend is a professional, never miss his goals
Ray
Tony…. Do you remember our last days in New York ?
Tony
I wish if such days returned again whatever for just one day!
It was nice days; I left New York to Florida . Since Hank told me that he wants to kill two persons and needs a professional to finishing those at once, I imagine you
Ray
Hank pays a lot of money!
Tony
He has great wealth
He considers one of businessmen here in Florida . Everything, Trade and Industry.
Ray
Drugs!
Tony
No, no ,
He doesn't need more money
- Tony stands
- Fetch another Cup of wine , lighting a cigarette
You didn't tell me about Robin, How could get the house? Alarm system in everywhere, Secret doors, Guarding dogs
Ray
It wasn't a problem to me
Tony
Do you agree with me that the most danger gang that consisting of just one person… that's you?
Ray
I agree
Tony
I affirm that I admire you, Since We
Known each other and become friends from 12 years …!
-Tony puts his hand on his shoulder
Tony
Is your shoulder has been recovered?
Ray
Yes
Also Anthony can walk now
Exactly Ray but a child, when I saw him I felt that I'm facing myself when I was a child!
Anthony asked me about the reason of my shoulder's injury? I forced to lie!
I told him that a criminal shot me … then he asked me about the reason too!
I dodged to answer … what I would telling him?!
I injured when providing a murder mission …! I don't like to know that.
Maybe he doesn't understand anything … but I don't like Anthony to know !
INT. Brain's apartment – Bedroom – Night
- Brain the criminal
- Naked in bed with a naked woman
The woman
I'd like to be with you forever
How days, months and years have lost when you were in prison
Brain
We shall recover those days now
- Kissing her
- Suddenly
Neil and Albert pushing the door strongly
- Aiming their guns towards Brain's face
Brain
Who are you? How did you get in?
-The woman screaming…. Putting bed sheet on her breast to cover it.
Brain
What do you want?
Neil
Florida police
Albert
FBI
Brain
What do you want?
I'm arrested?
If so, why?
Albert
You aren’t arrested exactly
It is our luck that door was rather opened so we entered
Brain
I want to know what's happened.
Neil
You will know everything
Brain
Shall you take me naked?
Albert
Wear your clothes then let us go
Brain (to Neil )
The pants beside you on the chair
I'll wear pants under over … would you please?
The woman
And me …. And me
Albert
Calm down for a while. you aren't aimed for anything
Brain
May you bring please?
Or you want to down from the bed then walking naked as I born front of you!
- Neil throwing the pants on air then falling on his face
Brain
Thanks
- Trying to wear the pants ……. He still under bed sheet
- Suddenly throwing the bed sheet on Neil's face
- Quickly getting up
- Pushing Albert by his hand
- Takes his shirt quickly
- The woman screaming
- Brain running.. escaping from the apartment
Ext. - Street - Night
- Wearing his shirt while running
- Albert & Neil run after him
Neil
Stop Brain .. stop
Albert
Don't ever shoot
- Hides behind a vettura
Neil
Rascal!
Albert
Damned! .. Vile!
Ext. - streets -Crowd - Night
Albert
He's there
- Running
- Brain among crowd, cars ,people
- Trying to stop any car, but useless
- Running among people
- All go away from him
- Hiding behind a stopped car
- Careful, looks through car's glass
- Sees Neil & Albert
- Tries to open car's door
The car's Owner
Get away of my car
- Brain strike his face strongly
Neil
Is he lost in the crowed?
- Brain running
- Hits with a man, falling together
- Quickly gets up
- Keep running
Neil
He falls there!
- Running towards him
- Red Pontiac car driven by a woman was steady to be stopped
- Brain pushes her out
- The woman screaming
- Brain rushing into the car
- Drives the car with high speed
- A taxi is passing in this moment
- Albert stops the taxi.
Int. - Taxi - Streets - Night
Albert
Quickly follow that red car
We're police
- Neil makes a contact
- Neil
Unit 15
Unit 15
We're in san Dircy street , We need a police car to halt the way front of the fugitive. Right now. Red Pontiac car
Albert( to the taxi driver )
Don't let him runaway
The taxi driver
He's crazy!
What this rash does? What is his crime? ...... why
Do you chasing him? !
Is he stolen this car?
Albert
Don't talk too much.
Keep following
Don't let him escape
Int. - Streets - The red car
- Brain drives the car frivolity
- Crushing a car
- Keep his way
Ext. - Police car - Night
- Police car moves
Int. - Taxi - Streets
Albert
Foolish!
Neil
He near from the highway
Ext. - The red car - Street - Night
- Car's steering wheel out of his control
- Crushing two cars
- Getting away from the street
- Brain turns with the car then keep his way
Ext. - Police car
- Police car appears
Int. - Police car - Night
- 3 Policemen
- One of them makes a contact
-Picks the microphone to call in
The policeman
We can 't halt the way !
Very crowed !
Ext. –The red car – Highway –Night
The red car to the Highway
Int.. - The taxi - Highway
Albert
We must contact the first intersection
- Neil makes a contact
Neil
Unit 15 .. unit 15
Telling the first intersection with car's details
Int. - Police car - Highway - Night
The policeman
I'll do order right now
- Picks up the microphone to call in
Intersection A
Intersection A
From Intersection
I hear you
The policeman
Here unit 15 ,A red Pontiac car
Its numbers panel is crushed
Driven by a man
You should stop this car
Int. -The red car - Highway
- Brain trying to cross a big truck next to him
- Steering wheel out of his control
- The car gets away from the way
Ext. -The red car - Highway - Night
-The car crushing with the iron barrier
- Turning over many times
- Police car stop
- The taxi stop
- Running towards Brain
- Brain's face bleeding
Neil
Is he still alive?
Albert
I don't think so
The taxi driver
Can I go?
Albert
We thank you
The taxi driver
I'm always helping policemen
Is this crazy dead?
Int. - Neil's office -Day
Neil & Albert
Neil
Our thread has been cut!
Albert
He's died! I think we mistaken when we entered to his bedroom armed
- Ray's photo on the wall … [ Wanted ]
Neil
Don't forget Brain is a danger criminal
Always armed, shooting anyone facing his way
Albert
He though that we came to arrest him
Neil
He always used to escape from policemen
- Mobile rings
Albert
Yes
When?
Watching 24 hours a day
Ok … ok
Albert
There's a call from FBI
Neil
About Anne?
Albert
I asked to watch her 24 hours a day
Neil
Maybe longing and yearning to her lover makes her coming to Florida
Albert
This is just probability
She will be under watching
Neil
If so, she will make a great help
Int. - Anthony's house - bedroom - Day
- Anthony wears his clothes
Anthony
What is your opinion about this red t. shirt?
Ray
As you like
Anthony
I ask you my friend
Ray
This red is elegant
Anthony
Ok
-The grandmother enters
Anthony
I didn't go out since 20 days grand ma … !
The grandmother
Anthony, you must be careful
Ray
Be quiet about him
- Anthony combs his hair
Anthony
I 'm finished
Ray
Let 's go
-Ray helps him
Anthony( to his grandmother )
Do you change your mind and come with us?
- Getting out from the room
Int. - Anthony's house - the hall
- She opens the door
The grandmother
Please Mr. Ray don't be late
Ray
We shall not
Ext. - Anthony's house – Day
- Ray helps Anthony to get in the car
- Puts him safety belt
- The boy salutes his grandma
- She salutes him
- The car moves
Int. Ray's Car – Day
Ray
Would you Italian Food?
Anthony
Pizza?
Ray
Pizza.. Do you like pizza?
Anthony
I think nobody dislike it.
Pizza…. Italian food !
Ray
Also Italy distinguishing with macaroni..
Anthony
Did you visit Italy before?
Ray
Since 7 years!
Anthony
Do you like Pizza my friend?
Ray
As you said ....No body dislike pizza
Anthony
To the Italian pizza
Ray
When your parents come?
Anthony
I don't know
My father called yesterday but didn't tell anything
Ray
Did you talk with him
Anthony
Little
He called lately at night
I was sleepy
My grandma didn't tell him about my accident
She told me to not say anything
Ray
well done
Anthony
Mum will be so sad when knowing what happened to me and of course dad too.
But when they come, I shall tell them about you!
Ray
Me?!
What you will say?
Anthony
I shall say you're my new friend
Although you're older than me
How old are you?
Ray
Guess?
Anthony
25 , 28 years
Ray
How old are you exactly?
Anthony
9 years
Ray
I'm older than you about 21 years
Anthony
30 years
Ray
I seem older or younger?
Anthony
Seem younger
Ext. The restaurant - Day
- The car is parking
- Ray get out
- Helps Anthony to getting out
Ray
What about this Italian restaurant?
It offers all kind of Italian food , especially pizza
-They enter
Int. The restaurant - Day
Anthony
Is there unoccupied table!
What shall we do now ?
Going to other restaurant ? … we haven't luck to eat pizza today ?!
Ray
This time usually crowded
-Ray sees unoccupied table
Ray
There's one
-They go to unoccupied table … seating
- Waiter gives each one a menu
Ray
2 pizza
Waiter
Which kind?
Ray
All in the menu?
Waiter
Yes
Anthony
Great!
There're many kinds … sea food pizza, vegetables, meat and others.
I take pizza with vegetables
And you?
Ray
Me..
This.. no
Pizza with tune
Waiter
Ok sir
Anthony
Look..
-Ray turns around
Ray
What?
Anthony
This fat man!
Eats with a funny way!
Eats gluttony! Doesn't care anyone around him.
Doesn't feel shame?!
Ray
In which class are you in?
Anthony
Fifth class
Ray
Are you success or not?
Anthony
I didn't fall up till now in any exam
Ray
What would you like to be?
Anthony
A pilot in U.S. Air forces
Ray
Do you like air ?
Anthony
I like planes and pilot's uniform
But I prefer warplanes than civilian planes
I keep many pictures from magazines and internet about warplanes F16 – F 22 , Ghost, French Mirage, and others .
- Waiter brings the pizza
Anthony
Delicious!
Isn't it?
Ray
Very delicious!
Anthony
I forget to ask you, what is your job?
Ray
Why do ask me about my job?
Anthony
I want to know everything about you.
Ray
As you guessed my age, can you guess my job?!
Anthony
This is very difficult!..
Ext. Gym center – Day
- Tony 's BMW car stopped next to the Gym center
- Getting out from the car
- Enters
Int. Gym Center – Day
- Tony walks till reaching the receptionist
- Talks with him
- Turns around then going to a hall
Int. Gym – Center
- Looking around
- The center has some men and youth in different ages practicing sport with devices
- Tony sees Mr.Hank ,about 55 years old
- Hank Manilow , one of businessmen , and the most rich man
- Tony going forward to him
Tony
Mr. Hank
Hank
Tony! … What do you want?
Tony
Don't want see me?
Hank
I told you before we shouldn't meet till finishing everything!
Tony
That's right
But …
Hank
But what?
Speak……..
Tony
You seem annoyed from seeing me!!
Hank
I don't want anyone seeing us till finishing everything … I warned you before and you disregarded my warning.....
Tony
Why overdone fear and worry?!
Mr. Hank, you seem that you forget our agreement!
Hank
No
I didn't forget
Shall we talk in another time
Tony
When?
Hank
Tomorrow at seven P.M.
Tell me, what about your friend Ray?!
Be careful, don't tell him anything about me
Never Tony…. Never!
You shouldn't mention my name … I don't tell you what I shall do if happened so! Consider it is a threat… warning as you wish…do you understand?
Tony
The important thing at him is money… just money
Be quiet , he doesn't know anything about you
Hank
Also the important thing for you is money
Just money
Did he tell you about the second mission?
Tony
He plans , determining time and place then execute
I think he execute successfully
He doesn't like to stay here for long time , as soon as finishing the second mission, he will leave Florida
Hank
Ok Tony
You can go
Tony
Bye..
- Hank returns to his gym
Hank ( to himself )
Vile!
Ignoble!
Ext. Gym Center - Day
- Tony gets out
- Drives his car
Int. Tony 's apartment - bedroom - Day
- A woman in nightgown lies in a bed
- The woman is Tony 's lover , Martina
- Tony arrives
- She hiding behind the door
- He begins to take off his shirt
- She kissing him
Tony
Honey!
Martina
Didn't you feel my presence?
Tony
It is a pleased surprise!
Martina
I missed you too much
Tony
How I miss you!
-He kisses her hot deep kiss in her lips
Martina
We didn't meet than 20 days!
Tony
I'm really busy these days
Do you feel hungry?
Martina
I prepare you wonder food within minutes
- She getting out
- He looks to his face on the mirror
- Touches his beard
- Enters the attached small bathroom to bedroom
Int . The bathroom
- Tony begins to shave his beard
- Martina's voice from the kitchen
Martina
Would you like omelet with salad or …
- Tony doesn't hear
Martina
Tony … Tony
Tony
What?
- Turns shaver off
Tony
Do you say something?
Martina
Would you like omelet with salad or cheese with boiled vegetables?
Tony
As you with
- Turns shaver on
Ext. A street - Day
- Ray's car stopped
- Daimler car stops next to a building
Int. Ray's car – Day
- Ray watching the building's entrance
- Opens car's window little
Ext. The building's entrance - Day
Arthur… the man whom his photo was hanged beside Robin's photo in Ray's apartment appears.
A rich man about 48 years old surrounded with 3 men of his guards.
Int. Ray's car - Day
- Steady position to shoot
- Aiming the gun towards Arthur's head
- But suddenly a woman appears cut vision
- She kisses Arthur
- Guards turning around them
- One of them opening the car's door
- Arthur sits beside her in the back seat
- The car moves
- Ray lights a cigarette
Ray ( to himself )
What is damned luck?!
Ignoble prostitute woman!
- Turns with the car in the other direction
Int. Tony 's apartment – bedroom - Day
- Tony with his lover naked in the bed
- Dalliances , kisses and embraces
- Mobile ringing
Tony
- Is this a time for calls!
- Go to hell
Martina
Maybe it is an important call
Tony
There's no one in the world more important than you … I love you … I love you ….
Int. Ray's car – Day
- Ray trying to make a mobile call , but useless
- Throwing mobile with a nervous action to the back seat
Ext. Ray's car
- Ray's car crossing down town streets
- Stops next to a bar
- Getting out from the car
- Quarrel in the street next to the bar … two men are fighting.
- Ray looks to them….
- Enters to the bar
Int. bar - Day
Ray
Beer
- The barman prepares a cup
Man (1)
This is the worst bar!
Man (2)
All bars here worst each other!
The barman ( to Ray )
Is this the first time come to here?
- Gives him a Cup
- Ray
And the last time
- They laughing
Man (1)
Did I tell you!
This man shall not come to here again
This is the last time
- Ray drinks
- Looking to them
Ray
Shut up
Man (2)
Do you prevent our talks?
- Ray going towards him
- Catches him from his shirt
Ray
I don't like to hear your voice
Or I shall break your neck
The barman
I'm sorry for this
- Ray ready to go out form the bar
The barman
You didn't complete your drink !
- Ray throwing him about 100 dollar in the air
Int. Florida Police - Neil's office - Day
- Neil makes mobile call
Neil
Where are you?
Intercut with Albert in a room – Florida Police – Day
Albert
Floor 2
Neil
Okay
- Neil gets out
INT. Corridor - Florida Police
Neil ( to Margrate ) Police woman
Margrate !congratulations for come back
Margrate
Hi, Neil , thanks
- Neil arrives to a room in floor 2 , then enters
Int. - Florida Police- an office room
- Ray's photo victims on the wall
- The victims , men , woman
Neil
Ray's Victims!
Albert
This man!
Ray killed him in 1994 . His name
Jeff Kilsany . In 1995 another crime has been committed
Neil
Every year he used to commit a crime As long an there is the sponsor of the committed crimes, he is ready.
Albert
His victims are many .Look… In the year 2000, he killed that husband after his wife paid to money to do this.
Neil
There's no thing important in his life more than money
Ext. – Ray's Apartment - Night
- Light glimmering.
- Charming view
- Ray looks from the window
- Drinks a cup of wine
- looking at the photo of the second man, Arthur on the wall.
- Spitting on it.
Ray
You can't escape the next time.
I'll kill you ………...... Kill you.
- Bell 's sound.
- Ray opening the door.
- Tony & Ray are embracing each other's.
Tony
My dear friend
Ray
You look tired..!
Tony
Is this clearly appearing on my face?
Ray
What are you doing to look so tired?
Tony
Nothing new!
- Tony is looking at Anne's photo on the wall....
Tony
Good Evening my fair lady.
Ray
I have called you today
The mobile was off....
Tony
I was so busy at that time
Ray
In what?
Tony
I went to bed with a woman.
- They laughing
Ray
Beautiful?
Tony
So beautiful.. Charm brunette
Ray
I don't like brunettes
Tony
When will you execute the second mission?
-Ray sits
Ray
I was about to kill him, unfortunately he escape
Tony
How?
Ray
I was about to shoot him; unfortunately an old cursed woman cut vision.
Tony
Where?
Ray
Before the building of his office.
- Tony fetch cup of wine
Ray
He will not escape
I need to make surveillance and collect the required information
Tony
Then, the mission shall be long?
Ray
Not much
Tony
I'm waiting
- Ray standing
Ray
The problem that this scoundrel has no appointed time or fixed places.
He moves from place to anther continually!
He will not escape from Ray's bullet!
What's your next deal with Hank?
Tony
Every thing is delayed!
I shall be a partner with 20 %
EXT.- Building - Day
Ray's car stopped before a building .It consists of 3 floors.
- Arthur, appears from the window, with the owner of this building.
- Ray is getting out his gun
- Directing the gun toward Arthur's head.
- But, Arthur enters.
- Ray is getting out from the car.
- Running toward the building
INT. The building
- Ray enters
- The building is unoccupied.
- Ray creeping to the floor where Arthur present in.
- Listening to the dialogue..
- A group of Arthur's guards.
Arthur
Be sure, the amount I give you can't be paid by anyone else.
The owner
I know that
Arthur
Ok, we agree
The owner
You offered me very enough amount more than I expected.
Arthur
Do you know why I bought this building?
I shall change it into super restaurant as I shall call it the name of my new wife.
She will be so happy when knowing that.
You shall get cheque with all amount on Citibank.
The owner
But… I wished if the cheque was directly on HSBC bank
Arthur
As you like. No problem
Tomorrow morning, I will be in my grange.
You can come to sign the cheque
The owner
Ok
Arthur
Now, I want to have another look at the floor 3
INT. - Corridor - Building
- Ray is hiding
- Steady position to shoot.
- Directing his gun toward Arthur's head, but a guard cut vision.
- They are going up to the floor 3
- Ray is going down quickly..
EXT. - Street - Day
- Ray gets out
- Running quickly toward his car.
- D riving with high speed
EXT. - The grange - Day
- A large area, bushy trees .
- A high fence of wires surrounds the grange.
- The gate is closed and guarded by a security man.
- Ray wearing a black suit.
- Standing before the wires..
INT. - The grange
- Arthur is lying down in the terrace
- Beside him Linda the woman who appeared with him in the entrance of the building of his company .
- The guards are four men in different places....
- Mobile ringing
Arthur
Oh my God!
Calls never stop
Linda
Calls means money
Arthur
It looks no time for relaxation and rest.
- Holds mobile sees the called number
Arthur
He is one of those stupid who doesn't differ between work and rest time!
Put this disturb mobile inside , I don't like to hear its ringing!
The guard
Ok, sir
EXT. - the grange - Day
- Ray is examining the wires.
- He is trying to penetrate the gun through the wires.
- But, he can't because of the narrow holes.
- Running to his car
INT. - The grange - The terrace
- Arthur and Linda are still lying down in the terrace
A guard
The horses are ready
- They are getting up
Arthur
A quite and peaceful horse for you
Horses ridding is so enjoyable! Especially in this wonder place and weather!
Linda
I'm ridding horses since I was eighteen. I didn't continue more than this
Arthur
You look as you still eighteen!
EXT. - Road - Day
- Ray has got out his bag from the car
- The bag contains a number of tools, wires, scissors and iron equipments.
- Taking an iron scissor.
- Testing the scissor using a strong cable.
- The scissor is cutting the cable.
- Taking the scissor.
INT. - The grange - Day
- Arthur is on the horse.
- While Linda on another.
- The guards are watching them.
- Two of them are on their horses.
- While the others are standing.
Arthur (to the horse)
Oh Faslom! Since a long time, we haven't met
Three months ago, I didn't come here.
Linda
Projects, deals and meetings
Arthur
My life full of hard work all time
Imagine also weekend ,Projects, Deals and Meetings !
Linda
It is hard! And health ruinous.
Arthur
I will try to arrange it even if it is hard
Linda
Did you try before?
Arthur
I did but I failed
Linda
Try again
EXT. - The grange - Day
- Ray is trying to cut parts of the cable using a scissor.
- But, he coudn 't
- Seeing a big vettura beside the wires , thinking for a moment
- Running, getting up of the vettura then, climbs , jumping into the grange without being noticed .
INT. - The grange
- Ray inside the grange.
- Hiding behind a tree.
- The horses are before him nearby.
- At this moment, One of the guards has been seen him!
- Ray is steady position to shoot.
The guard
Look!
- The two guards are shooting
- Ray shoots Arthur's head.
- Linda screams
Linda
Arthur! Arthur!
- The guards are running toward Arthur.
Linda
Carry him to the car, I take him to hospital immediately
- Two guards carrying him, while the other guards shooting in everywhere.
Guard (1)
There!
Guard (2)
He can't escape
- The guards are ridding the horses shoot.
- Ray is looking at the gate.
- He has observed the security man of the gate carrying his gun.
- Running behind the trees.
- One of guards on his horse has observed him....
- He shoots him.
- Ray is hiding well behind a tree.
- Steady position to shoot.
- He has shot the guard on the horse and killed him.
- Running, hiding behind the bushy trees and stones.
- The four are running, three of them are guards and the forth is a security man.
A guard (to the security man)
Oh rascal! Stay in the gate
- The security man is running toward the gate
- Ray is shooting him in his back.
A guard
This is the villain!
- He is shoots
A guard
We should surround him carefully
I'm from this side and you from the right..... Come!
- Ray is watching the guard who is moving in the right side.
- Steady position to shoots..
- Shooting him in his head
- Running quickly from the right toward the gate.
- The other two guards are running
- Ray is coming out to the road.
EXT. – Road -Day
- Running toward his car.
- One of the guards is shooting him.
- The bullet hits the car's door.
- Getting into the car, driving at utmost speed.
- - The guards getting into a car.
INT. - Ray's car - Day
- He has smashed small wooden booth.
- Its parts have scattered.
- He is looking at the car mirror.
- The guard's car follows him
- Ray has heightened the car speed
- As a result of the high speed, the car is hitting a tree.
- The front part of the car has smashed then stopped.
- Comes out quickly.
Ext. – Road - Day
- Ray running. They are follow him
- Before him, a school
- Running into the school
INT. - school
- Teachers and students
- Ray rushing to one of the rooms.
INT . School - Room
- A lady is ready to go out
- She hits with Ray, screams
- Ray is hiding behind the curtains.
- The guards are rushing to the room.
- The lady is weeping
- Ray is steady position to shoot.
- One of them has injured in his shoulder and the other in his foot.
- The lady is crying
- Screaming from outside
- Ray is ready to jump from the window.
- Jumping outside.
Ext. – Road - Day
- Looking at the road, hoping to find any car
- A car has appeared from a distance.
- Weaving to the car
- The car has topped.
- A young man of 18 years has driven it.
Ray
I want to go to the downtown.
The young man
You are welcome
INT. – The car - Day
The young man
Did you find any problem in this area?
Ray
No
- Ray is getting out tissue from his pocket.
- Drying his sweat.
- The young man glances a gun
- He is worried and confused.
The young man
Are you a policeman?
Ray
How did you know?
They young man
I had glanced a gun
- Ray gets a gun
Ray
It is a gun never leave me
It is always my sincere friend
I'm a policeman.. Yes
I was following one of the criminals
The young man
Has he escaped?
Ray
I killed him
No one can get away of me
The young man
It seems that you are an experienced and clever policeman
Ray
That's what they are saying
The young man
What did this criminal do?
What is his crime?
Ray
These are top secrets
The young man
Sorry
Policemen very danger job!
Full of risks!
Ray
Won't you stop talking?
The young man
Sorry again
Dissolve
INT. – Florida police – commissioner's office – Day
- The commissioner and Albert with the two guards of Arthur.
- The two guards with wound bandage
- Albert is holding Ray's photo.
- One of the guards is looking at the photo.
The guard
Yes, he is
- The other guards is taking the photo
The other
He is the dirty criminal!
The guard
This criminal caused us a disaster!
The other
We didn't know how he could sneak into the grange?
Albert (to commissioner)
Concerning the black car, FORD model, it appeared that he has rented of office using a false name called (Ronald Ziessy).
The owner of the office has recognized his photo.
Knocking on the door.
Commissioner.
Yes
- Linda is entering
Commissioner
When did your relation begin with Arthur?
Linda
Since one year
Albert
Did you see the man of this photo before?
- She is looking at Ray's photo
Linda
No
Albert
If he has enemies, who are they?
Linda
I recognized him in one of the biggest concert
He was charm and emotional
It was the gladdest year of my life.. last year that we spent it together
Oh! Such happens has been finished and never come back
I don't know anyone of his friends
I know only the guards.
He was living alone.
We were about to marry.
-She is crying
Commissioner
Please, be calm
Linda
Why has he been killed? Why?! Why?!
It's very difficult and hard
They killed all my dreams
Albert,
Please, don’t cry
Linda
The killer must be submitted to justice
Albert
This we trying to do so.
Did you leave your address, telephone and mobile number with the officer outside?
Linda
Yes, I did
Can I go?
Albert
But, remember that you are under request at any time and you will be called again for the investigation.
- she is coming out
The guard
She is a respectful woman
Albert
Have you any comment on her tales?
The other
No
All what she has said is true.
It was a wonder love story between them .It ended painfully!
Commissioner
You can go
Albert
It should be made a comprehensive investigation concerning to determine the enemies.
EXT. – skyscraper - Day
- A car of Cadillac has stopped.
- A businessman is coming out of it.
- He is Dan who is 51 years old.
- Enters.
INT. – Hank's office – Skyscraper- Day
- The 51st floor.
- A wonderful decoration.
- An extremely majestic office.
- Expensive antiques
- Hank in his office.
- A charming view appears behind the glass.
- Knocking on the door.
Hank
Yes,
- The office manger enters
The office manger
Timetable that you ordered
Hank
Is there any meeting in the evening?
The office manger
At seven p.m. with NIOP chairman, Mr. Douglas. That's all
Hank
Delay such meeting with him.
-The office manger gets out.
- Dan enters.
- Shaking hands.
- Dan sits
Hank
Welcome Dan
DAN
Did you read the newspapers of the last five days?
Hank
Just dirty things and have been removed forever.
This is the normal punition of those people who trying to dare me. I could revenge for myself in the suitable time
Dan
Your reaction was danger and unexpected!
I surprised for what had happened!
Hank
They caused me much pain and troubles.
Did you forget? They tried to kill me!
Dan
It couldn't assure that
Hank
No, I assured
I haven't enemies except them
-Hank stands looks at the window
Dan
The comprehensive investigation is still running till now.
I hope that you will be above suspicion.
-Hank turns to Dan
Hank
I'm out of any suspicion. I did it to conserve my life and reputation. It was my life's fault that I dealt with those people. But it will not happen again
Dan
I don't support aggressive and killing as a way of solving the problems and disputes.
Hank
It is the only way that those know and understand it
Without God's blessing I would die now.
-Hank sits again
Because one of them I lost 19 million dollars in a month!.. The villain Arthur!
You think I shall be patient more than that?
Dan
Be calm.. Relax
If you had asked my advice, I would not have given you the permission to do it.
It's no use crying over spilt milk.
Hank
You utter this because they never hurt you.
As for me, the situation is completely different.
The criminal who is killed doesn't live here
Dan
I know this before....
Hank
I was in a badly need first , for a professional killer .Second , in a short time . Third , A killer from outside
Dan
You attached yourself in a circle! Never can penetrate it easily
Hank
I was ready to pay any amount whatever
There is a mediator between me and the criminal
This mediator is a Ragamuffin!
He doesn't know anything about me
He had never seen me before ,and I 'm too
If we meet together anywhere, no one will know the other
I feel comfortable now!
After killing this scoundrels
Dan
Who believes that Hank manilow can be involved in such crimes?
Hank
It's the first time and it will be the last.
Dan
Although Robin & Arthur are surrounded by a large group of guards , they are killed! I astonish how they could live normally among theses guards!
Didn't they feel restricted?
Hank
They are surrounded by guards of a dirty business in addition to their original work, drugs, money laundering. Etc I'm sure of that
Dan
You also have two guards!
Hank
They are guards. Not criminals !
-Moment of silence
Dan
What do you think about?!
INT. - taxi - Night
-Ray is making a mobile call.
-Intercut with Anne in her apartment (bathroom)- Night
-The mobile is ringing
Anne
Ray !!
I miss you
Ray
Me too honey
I missed you so much
Anne
All matters are ok?
Ray
No problems
I performed the two missions successfully.....
Anne
What about your injury ?!
Ray
It was little injury
Anne
I can't absolutely bear that
Ray
Where are you now? What are you doing?
Anne
In the bathroom
While the mobile was ringing, I was taking shower
I was feeling that you are going to call me.
So I put the mobile on a stand
Ray
Then you are naked?!
- They are laughing
Anne
We will meet soon!
Ray
I'm in my way to see Anthony
Anne
Is he recover from his injury?
Ray
Yes he can walk normally now.
You will see his photo when I come back. I got a photo from him
Anne
You make me ardent to see his photo
Ray
I liked him so much
Anne
I'm going to surprise you
Ray
You are my charming princess and fair lady
What is the surprise?
Anne
No, I will not tell you
Ray
Kiss you
Anne
Kiss you
-Turns mobile off
-Ray looks from the window seeing a store for toys and gifts
Ray (to the driver )
please stop front of this store, Wait me
-The taxi stops
-Ray gets out
-Enters to the store
INT. - The store - Day
Ray
I want to buy an airplane but warplane
The seller
Is this important?
Ray
Yes,. yes very important
The seller
Sorry
You can find your request after two days if you visited
us
Ray
Unfortunately!.. Thanks
-Ray gets out getting in the taxi. Its move
INT. - Anthony's apartment - Night
- Anthony is looking through the window.
- Seeing Ray
- Anthony is walking toward the door.
The grandmother
Anthony !
Anthony
My Friend …Ray!
- Ray enters
Ray
How are you my little friend, Anthony?
Anthony
Fine
Ray
Good evening
The grandmother
Good evening, you are welcome
Next Sunday Anthony's Parents shall come
Ray
Really?!
The grandmother
They called me yesterday morning
Ray
Pleasant news for you Anthony !
Anthony
I missed them so much
Ray
I notice that you walk naturally now
Anthony
Pain has decreased completely
Ray
I came today to say goodbye
Anthony
Why?
Ray
There is no reason to stay here any more Anthony
Anthony
Why don't you stay here with me?
Ray
It doesn't mean we shall not meet again
Surely I'll back to visit you.
Believe me, I wish if time was longer. But sorry
Anthony
I am so sad to hear this
Ray
I don't want to see you unhappy
The grandmother
You will come to visit us?
Ray
Of course.
INT. -Night club -Night
- A nightclub in downtown.
- Tony with Martina
- Drinking
Martina
This is the last cup please Tony
Tony
No. we will go on drinking, then spend a hot night
We shall spend one of an enjoyable night in our life
Martina
I'm agree
- He kissing her.
- Touches her cheek.
Martina
You excite me
Tony
This is exactly what I meant
Martina
Stop it
- One of Hank's guards.
The guard
Mr. Hank wants you at once
Tony
Now?!
The guard
He sent me to bring you to him
Tony
Why did not he contact me through the mobile?
The guard
I do not know I have no information
Tony
I shall drink the last cup …,then go with you
Shall I bring you a cup
The guard
No
You drink too much
Tony
Where is he now?
The guard
In the garden of the villa
Tony
So it is not far
Tony (to Martina)
If I am late, go to the apartment
I will return back to you
They go towards the exit door
Tony
This is the first time he sends you to arrest me in this way!
Ext. Nightclub-Night
Tony
My car is not here
The guard
I came in a car
-They getting in
INT. Bentley Car
Tony
Wonderful Bentley!
The guard
He owns a collection of the most excellent recent cars.
Tony
Do you remember the black MAYBACH car that he bought last month?
The guard
It is fantastic masterpiece!
It made especially for him!
EXT. - Garden –Hank 's villa -Night
- A villa like a castle
- Lights glimmering around the swimming pool that is located in a middle of a garden
- Hank is sitting on a chair
- A guard is a few meters away
- Hank is reading some documents
- Tony with the guard entering
Tony
Is there anything that necessitates coming in this way?
- Hank puts the documents on the table.
Hank
Have a seat
Tony
Scarcely, I see you in such case
Hank
Which case you mean?
Tony
Relaxed. . Not nervous. . not stressed
Hank ( to the guard )
You can go
- The other guard is still here.
Tony
Why did you ask to see me?
Hank
Don't be hurry
Tony
This is the first time happened so
Hank
I wanted to talk with you
Tony
In which thing?
Hank
You were in the bar?
Tony
Yes
Hank
Undoubtedly, you won a lot of money since I helped you.
Profits from deals from everywhere
Commissions, rewards and so on
Tony
You opened for me many closed doors
Hank
I think you were and still very loyal
Isn't it?!
Tony
Of course
Hank
All right
Tony
I don't understand what you mean?
Hank
I just wanted to remember you
Your friend is so professional
He could achieve the two missions successfully.
Tony
I was sure that. Did I tell you no one as my friend Ray
The two missions were done as agreed!
Hank
Yes . . . Yes
Where is he?
Tony
Why? I think he will leave Florida tomorrow
Don't worry .As I told you many times he doesn't know anything about you!
He took the money then did the mission
Hank
Why did you leave New York ?
Tony
I came to Florida to establish import and export company
But unfortunately, project was broken down!
I couldn't make any achievement
Hank
Maybe this is the last meeting between us......
Tony
Are you traveling abroad?
Hank
Not me who shall travel
Tony
I don't understand
Hank
Never mind
- A moment of silence.
- Hank with a gestured from his head to the guard
- Comes from behind Tony cautiously carrying a gun
- The guard shoot Tony
- Tony falls on the ground bleeding
Hank
Sorry Tony
You are just an insect that has performed its role . . . a climber!
Now your mission is complete
(to the guard) As I promised you a big reward is waiting for you …You wouldn't have dreamed of it all your life
The guard
I am at your service Mr. Hank
- The guard puts the corpse in a bursa, ties with iron chains - Carrying it to the car.
EXT. –Streets -Night -
- The car that carries Tony's corpse crossing down town streets.
- A sound of music.
EXT. Bridge -Night -
- He reaches
- Carrying the corpse
- The guard watches all directions.
- No one
- He throws the corpse from the bridge
- It sinks in the river
The guard
Good bye Tony!
Money important than anything else
I think you know that very well.
Dissolve
EXT –Tony 's house - Night
- Ray is looking at the window of the apartment
- No lights
- Making a mobile call
- But useless
INT. Florida police- Day
- Neil is reading some documents
- Albert enters
Neil
We couldn't reach anything important up till now!
Albert
We couldn't reach Ray or the instigator who paid him the money
Neil
We need more patience and time
Albert
Danger criminals don't easily arrest them
Most know nothing about the enemies
Neil
They are trying to hide some facts and data because they don't want to involve in any problems
Albert
This makes our mission more difficult
Neil
This is the daily reports for the intelligencers , private detectives and investigators
Nothing new !
Albert
The investigation reports are familiar
Neil
Did you order to continue watching?
Albert
Yes
Watching will not stop on all persons who probably have relation with the two crimes
In the first crime, there're 6 persons under control, and in the second crime there're about 11 persons
Neil
Look! There's news !
-They're reading from the computer's monitor
Albert
Good Anne!
- The mobile is ringing.
Albert
Yes
When?
This is great news
Flight number 542
- He looks at his watch
Ok
We will be waiting
Neil
Anne!
Albert
The lover couldn't bear her lover's absence any more.
After two hours, she will be at the airport
To the airport immediately
Come on
Neil
Unasked, she will lead us to Ray
Albert
Watching continued for more than two months
- They getting out.
INT. - Corridor - Florida police - Day
Albert & Neil
Neil
You will fall in the trap today Ray
Albert
The car is ready?
Neil
Of course
EXT. – Florida police
- They getting in a car
- Not a police car
INT. –The car -Day
- Albert drives.
Neil
Finally Ray!
Albert
Ray shall be arrest by us within hours
Ext.–Airport -Day
- An plane lands
- The passengers to the arrival hall
INT. AirPort –Arrival hall
- Albert and Neil are waiting
- They watch all the passengers.
- Anne appears
- Albert sees her
Albert
Welcome Anne
Neil
She looks very happy
Albert
She will see her lover after long time.
Neil
We leave her till she passes from the arrival hall
We will go out from the other door
Come on
- Anne gets out
Ext. –AirPort -Day -
Anne (to a taxi driver)
Please to the downtown
- Albert and Neil are getting into the car.
INT. Taxi -Day -
- Air touches Anne's hair.
- She smiles
Anne
Weather is wonder!
Florida doesn't get crowd like New York
The driver
I drives slowly, Is this annoying you?
Anne
Are you a new driver?
Int. -The car –Day
Albert
Come on Anne quickly
Neil
This taxi driver is very slow
Albert
I don't know why he drives slowly?!
Neil
She didn't find except this driver..!
Int. –The taxi - Day
- The driver looks at the mirror
The driver
This car is following us
Anne
What?!
The driver
Since we moved from the Airport ,this car is following us
I 'm sure
Anne
That Car?
The driver
Yes
-Anne is thinking for minutes
Anne
Stop please
- The taxi stops
INT. –The car -Day
-The car stops
Neil
What happened?
Albert
Oh! My God!
A stupid driver!
Neil
I fear if she observed our following up to her?
Int. Taxi - Day
The driver
Is there any problem between you and the driver of this car?
- Anne is thinking
- An idea comes to her mind
- She looks at the car
Anne
Is there a hotel nearby?
The driver
There a small hotel
Anne
It doesn't important, to that hotel please
Where is this hotel?
The driver
Not far
Could you know him? And why following you?
Anne
No
The driver
What about if we stop and ask him why he follows us?
Anne
No …. No don't stop
To the hotel quickly
The driver
This is your first visit to Florida ?
Anne
The first time
INT. Ray's apartment -Day
- Checks his gun
- The photos are still on the wall. A red sign x on Arthur's photo.
- Taking the photos off.
- He lights a fire in them
- Whops Anne's photo
- Kisses it
- Puts it inside the bag
- A mobile is ringing.
Ray
Yes
Anne!!
Intercut with Anne in the taxi – Day
Anne
Listen to me
I am here in Florida in a taxi
There is a car follows me now
Ray
Why did you do that? Why?
Do not come to the apartment
Take care Anne
Anne
Sorry my dear
Now, I am on my way to one of the hotels
Ray
Stay in this hotel
Anne
I never expected that I'd be under surveillance
Ray
I will leave the apartment
Anne
To where?
Ray
I'll leave Florida today despite everything
Thanks for your calling.. Anne
Sure, the airports are being watched, the high way , The railway
If they aren't from the policemen, who are they then?
You should stay in the hotel today .Act naturally till you go once again to New York
Anne
I don't know if there will be an air flight tomorrow or not.
Ray
You can stay here for some days.
Anne
I am sorry. I am stupid, foolish
Ray
No time now
Do exactly as I say
Anne
I will do
Ext. –Hotel - Day
- The taxi stops.
- Anne gets out
- Towards the hotel door
- She sees the car
INT. –The car -Day Neil
In that hotel you stay Ray!
- The taxi moves
- Albert (to the driver)
Go to hill
INT.– Hotel -Day
Anne
Please, I want a room
The receptionist
Do you want certain requirements for the room?
Anne
Please, quickly
The receptionist
How many days will you stay here?
I asked you before if you want certain requirements for the room.
Anne
No. No, any room.. Any room
The receptionist
Please, your I.D. or your passport
Anne
- Giving him her I.D.
The receptionist
Room No. 186
- Albert & Neil is entering
- Only 3 ladies in the reception.
- Anne looking to Neil & Albert.
The receptionist (to the bellman)
Carry the bag to room No.186
- The bellman is carrying it to the upper floor
- Anne is following him
- Albert & Neil to the receptionist
Albert
We are from FBI and Florida police
- Neil is getting out Ray's photo.
Neil
Is the man of this photo is resider in the hotel now?
And in which room?
- The receptionist is looking at the photo.
The receptionist
I had never seen him before
Albert
Are you sure?
The receptionist
Yes
Neil
Verifying from the photo again
The receptionist
I 'm sure , I didn't see the man of this photo before
Albert
Guest list please
The receptionist
Here you're
Neil
Is there another receptionist here who changes the shifts?
The receptionist
Amelia starts her shift at six pm.
Albert
It is possible that Ray has a false I.D or passport
Also, probably, he may be disguised.
How many guests now in the hotel?
The receptionist
Only this 3 ladies, with their children and two men, but in out now!
- Albert, Neil looking to the 3 ladies
- Close up on their faces one after one
Neil
Oh! My God! I think we need to policewoman for actualization those ladies!
Albert
We'll wait the two men
Neil
Don't tell anyone that we're police
The receptionist
Ok ,sir
Neil
When these two men come back?
The receptionist
I don't know
Int. Anne's room – Hotel- Day-
- Anne is weeping
- Making a call
Anne
Please, Is there is a flight to New York now?
At 3 pm.
Very Good
I want to a ticket please
Yes..first class
No..no thanks
My name is Anne Tieowhel
Thank you
- Drying her tears
EXT. - Cafeteria - Railway station- Day
- Ray disguised in a priest dress with beard
- Reading a newspaper.
- Having two bags.
Int. –Hotel – Day
- Anne appears going down the stairs
- Still Neil, Albert in the reception
Anne
I have to go now.
Sorry
The receptionist
What has happened?
The room unappealing ?
Anne
The room is fine.
This isn't the reason.
The receptionist
It's a bad luck
Anne
Thank you
The receptionist
I wish to see you again in our hotel
Anne
Thanks again
- Anne is looking to Neil & Albert
- She is going to the exit door.
- Neil & Albert following her
Ext. – Hotel- Day
- Anne is waving to a taxi.
- Getting into.
- Alberto & Neil are getting in the car.
Int. The car - Day
Albert
To where Anne?
Neil
Sure to her lover
INT. The taxi
-Anne is drying her tears
The driver
What had happened?!
Anne
Nothing. Nothing
The driver
I 'm sorry
INT. The car – Day
Neil
Oh! My God!
Albert
Impossible!
She is returning to the Airport!
Neil
Caused by the damned driver!
What a bad luck!
Albert
She called Ray to warm him
Neil
If wasn't that foolish driver!
Albert
All threads that would lead to Ray have cut.
Neil
Maybe ,Ray is back with here on the same plane
Of course disguising
Albert
Anyone with her shall be arrested . if he is Ray or not
Neil
We must arrest her
She is accused of helping a criminal to escape.
Neil
The stupid taxi driver!
He could see us in despite of the long distance between the two cars.
INT.- Cafeteria - Railway station -Day
- Ray is sitting.
- Watching the place.
- He stands
- The porter approaches him..
The porter
Can I help you?
Ray
Carry this bag, please.
- Ray is carrying only the bag of money and his guns
- Going to the platform
INT. –The AirPort - Day
- Anne is waiting the plane..
- Watching the place surrounded.
Albert
We must verify from all of those.
- Passengers on the plane in different ages, old, young, women and men
Neil
Is he so professional in disguising to this way!
- Albert & Neil are approaching her.
Albert
Let me introduce myself to you
I'm Albert, from FBI.
- Anne is trying to be calm..
Neil
Neil from Florida police
- Each one of them is showing his I.D. card
Anne
What do you want?
Albert
You have come to Florida one hour ago.
You didn't stay in the hotel
Then you have decided to come back again.
Anne
Is it outlawed?!
Neil
But, Helping the criminals to escape are outlawed
Anne
I don't understand
What do you mean?
Albert
Where is Ray?
Anne
Who's Ray? I don't know this Ray!
What is my crime to arrest me?
Albert
Help a criminal to escape.
Anne
I don't know criminals
Neil
You're Ray's lover, we know that
Albert
You were watched from the police
- Taking her out, Get in the car with them.
Int. Florida police - Day
Neil
Please your handbag
Anne
It isn't allow to you that
Commissioner
No, it is allowing....
- Neil opens it.
- Gets a notebook
- Gets mobile out.
Albert
Where's Ray? Is he still in Florida ? Or back to New York ?
Anne
I told you I don't know that Ray.
- Singer sings this song
(the lyric of the song, written by Alaa Soliman)
Title:- Can You Sing With Me?!
Can you sing with me?!
Now.. Sing.. Sing..... Sing.. with me
Believe me.. we have a lot to live together and starting again
Believe me.. we shall coloring our next life with loud color
We are as two birds.. two birds
I can take off my heart.. take off my heart
Then offering it to you
There's no thing shall change our modes.
INT. Train - Sunset - Dissolve
- The train moves speedy.
- Ray is looking at the sights through the window.
- The song continues -
Sun rises on your face
I'll fly from the earth to the sky
I'll fly with two wings.
Colors dancing front of me
All barriers and forests shall be broken.
Can you sing with me
Sing . sing. sing with me ( END )