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Talk:Definition
WANTED
Written By : Alaa Soliman
E-mail : alaa.din10@yahoo.com
March 2008 , Florida
Fade in :
INT. - Train - Day
- Ray about 30 years old
- Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache
- Have sunglasses
- Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside him on a seat .. EXT. - Railway station – Day
- Train stops
- Ray gets out from the train curries a bag
- His eyes move in everywhere
- Walks out among the crowd
- Two women behind him
- Whispering, while he can hear them .
Woman ( l )
How handsome that man !
He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.
Woman ( 2 )
Captain !
His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors
INT. - Ray's car - Night
- Black Ford Car 4x4
- A street corner
- Street is calm has little moving .
- Ray inside the car without mustache
- Smoking a cigarette .
- Wears black T. shirt & jeans
- Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....
- Tony appears
- Tony is about 32 years old.
- Opening the door and sits beside him
- Lighting a cigarette
Tony
Everything is ok ?
Ray
Florida …. a wonder state !
Everything is ok
Tony
When did you decide to execute the first mission?
Ray
Saturday at night
Tony
After 3 days !!
Ray
This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray
Tony
I thought you shall kill him in his office
Ray
I found this is a very difficult
Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .
I planned for everything accurately
Tony
You're skillful in planning !
Ray
This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....
Tony
I hope the mission won't be exceeded !
Ray
Won't exceed
Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,
I become more ardent to kill them .
Especially the bold one
Tony
That bold shall leave the life next Saturday
Dissolve
Ext. – Robin's house - Night
- It consists of 4 floors
- House is very luxury
- A green area and plenty of trees
- Ray's car is far in the backside .
INT. - Robin's car - Night
- Mercedes car
- Robin is about 50 years old
- Bold, very Rich....
- Seating in the back seat
- His private guards in another car back him
- Driver drives the car
INT. Robin's house -an office room -Night
- Office room is rather dark
- Few light coming from out.
- Ray inside the office room
- Carrying a guns
- Looks from the window
- Getting out from the room careful
INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night
- Ray is hiding behind a column
- Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.
- Gets attention …….. (Steady position to shoot. )
Ext. - Robin's house - Night
- Robin arrives
- Getting out from the car
- He walks to the house entrance
- Four guards around him
- Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards
Int. - Robin's house - Reception - Night
- Light turns on
- Robin enters to the office room with two guards
- Ray nears from the window
- Looks
- Seeing two guards outside
- Nears from the office room
- Pushing the door by his foot
- Ray shots a guard in his stomach.
- Rushing into the office room
INT. - Robin's house - an office room
- Ray shoots Robin's head
- With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury
- The guard shoots Ray
- Protecting himself through the door against shots
- Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor
- The guard is still alive beside the door
- Tries to get his gun
- Ray shots him while running, injuring his head
- Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once
- Ray runs towards the house door
- A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside
- Ray runs to out
Ext. - Robin's House - Night
- A guard shoots
- Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him
- Steady to shoot
- Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand
- Runs
- Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder
- Drives his car with high speed
INT. - Ray's car - Night
- Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury
- He tries to overcome the pain
Ext. - Private hospital - Night
- Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance
Int. - Hospital – corridor
- A group of nurses
Ray
Where the Emergency room?
A nurse
The third room in the corridor end at right
A nurse
What happened to you?
Ray
Nothing serious
Int. - Emergency Room
- Ray enters
- Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed
- A nurse enters
The nurse
There's a child injured in his foot
Calls Doctor Steve?
The doctor
Quickly
- She gets out
- Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid
The doctor
Your wound isn't easy
Is this shoot! Isn't it?
Ray
Yes
The doctor
How you could bear such hard pain?
Little people can bear pain such as you .
Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger.
The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!!
The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound
Are you policeman?
Or someone shoot you?
Ray
- From Florida police
- The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse
- A child has about nine years, crying
The nurse
Bring the child here in the bed
- The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain
- Doctor Steve enters with two nurses
- Begin to make the necessary aid for the child
- Grandmother cries
The nurse
Be quite.. quite
He shall be fine
Doctor Steve
Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen
- the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child
- But Ray can see the child's face
The doctor
Did you follow a criminal?
Ray
An murderer criminal
The doctor
This is too much cost paid by policemen
Ray
That is right
The doctor
You offer several sacrifices for us
(To the nurse) what about the child.. ?
The nurse
The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot .
Ray
This is a very painful for a child in such age
The doctor
Do you feel better now?
Ray
Rather
The doctor
Check his pressure
Currently we don't need more that this
Some analgesic for pain after surgery.
Ray
Thank you
The doctor
Surely your pressure is lower
You bleed too much
The nurse
His blood pressure is really lower
The doctor
Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours
But the wound has been cleaned
- Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain
The doctor
You should be in a rest today
- Ray tries to get up
- Feels pain
The doctor
To where?
Ray
I can't stay in the hospital
Thanks, anyway
The doctor
Why?
Your wound needs some care
Why you insist to go now?
Ray
I must go now
Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again
- Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child
Ray ( to doctor Steve )
What about his wound ?
Doctor Steve
He shall improve at anyway
Ray
Are you his grandmother?
The grandmother
Yes
Ray
What's his name?
The grandmother
Anthony
Ray
A handsome and charm boy
Doctor Steve
Don't worry
He shall be recovered
This shall take times.....
The grandmother
How long?
Doctor Steve
About 10 days, maybe rather more
The grandmother
Should we come to hospital for another time?
Doctor Steve
No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so.....
The grandmother
Thank you
- Anthony crying but little
- Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other
Ray
Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony?
The grandmother
Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532
The doctor
I didn't know your name yet.
Ray
I'm Ray
The doctor
I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve.
- Ray looks to Anthony
Ray
Thank you.
- Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.
Int. - Ray's apartment - Night
A luxury apartment
Ray is setting, drinks
- Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne .
- A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall
- Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money
- Looks to the other man's photo
- Puts the cup of Brandy
- Picks the gun up
- Aiming the gun towards the man's photo
Ray
Now is your turn
Did you prepare your coffin?
Ray's shot shall penetrate your head
Your life becomes just little days.
Your face is ugly!
Makes me furious like your dead friend!
Ext. - Anthony's house - Day
- Ray arrives in his car
- Without wound bandage
Int. - Anthony's Apartment - Day
- Knocking the door
- The grandmother opens
The grandmother
Welcome Mr. . Ray
Ray
Good morning
The grandmother
Please come in
- He enters
Ray
How is my friend Anthony now?
The grandmother
He's sleeping since two hours
Took analgesic then slept at once.
Ray
A boy full of vital and joy!
The grandmother
Would you like seeing him?
Ray
I come exactly for this purpose
The grandmother
With pleasure
- To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen
- Opening the door
- Ray enters
Int. - Anthony's bedroom - Day
- Looks to the innocent child's face
- Gets out then gently closing the door
Int. - Hall
Ray
What about the pain?
The grandmother
Every day improves than before .
It was unforgettable day!
I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.
When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood
I wept also, Maybe I would faint
Ray
Anthony looks like me when I was his age
The grandmother
Really?!!
Are you recovered from your injury?
Ray
Rather
Are you live with Anthony alone?
The grandmother
His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me
I don't know what I can say to them when ask me!
Ray
Don't tell them anything.
Don't make them worry.
The grandmother
There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them
My temper doesn’t bear anymore!
I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years.
- Anthony's voice from his bedroom
Anthony
Grandma.. grandma
- Ray with the grandmother to the room
Int. - Anthony's bedroom
Anthony
Ray!... My friend..
Ray
My friend Anthony
Anthony
I'm very glad to see you
Ray
Do you feel any pain right now?
Anthony
Pain hurts me from time to another
But it isn't hard
Anthony
And you?
Is your shoulder hurts you?
Ray
Sometime
Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage
Anthony
I will not do it again
But you didn't tell me?
Ray
Tell you what?
Anthony
How your shoulder injured?
Ray
Is this important?
Anthony
I'd like to know
Ray
One of the murderer criminal shoot me
Anthony
Why?
Ray
I…
-The grandmother interrupt Ray
The grandmother
Do feel hungry Anthony?
Anthony
No, no
I don't feel hungry now
I want to drink water
- Ray pouring him a glass of water
- Grandmother looks to her watch
The grandmother
After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication
Its time after half an hour
Ray
Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age
Anthony
Am I ?
I'm glad to hear that my friend
Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself?
Int. - Florida police - corridor -Day
Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office
Int. - Florida police -the commissioner's office
Neil gets in
Commissioner
Robin is the Ray's first victim
Neil
Maybe there's other victim or victims!
Commissioner
Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..!
Where's Albert?
Neil
I saw him parking his car
We shall do our best to arrest him
We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida
Time is very important
Commissioner
We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent
This made him in the list of the most wanted
- Searching some documents on the desk
All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .
Neil
Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control!
- Albert from FBI enters
Commissioner
Is there new news?