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| Written By : Alaa Soliman
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| E-mail : alaa.din10@yahoo.com
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| March 2008 , Florida
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| Fade in :
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| INT. - Train - Day
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| - Ray about 30 years old
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| - Wears a Captain uniform & has a mustache
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| - Have sunglasses
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| - Reads a magazine, while an old woman sleeps beside him on a seat .. EXT. - Railway station – Day
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| - Train stops
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| - Ray gets out from the train curries a bag
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| - His eyes move in everywhere
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| - Walks out among the crowd
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| - Two women behind him
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| - Whispering, while he can hear them .
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| Woman ( l )
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| How handsome that man !
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| He is very handsome especially in such wonder wear.
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| Woman ( 2 )
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| Captain !
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| His life in the sea, oceans, ships and harbors
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| INT. - Ray's car - Night
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| - Black Ford Car 4x4
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| - A street corner
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| - Street is calm has little moving .
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| - Ray inside the car without mustache
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| - Smoking a cigarette .
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| - Wears black T. shirt & jeans
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| - Hears footsteps nearing behind the car .....
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| - Tony appears
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| - Tony is about 32 years old.
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| - Opening the door and sits beside him
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| - Lighting a cigarette
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| Tony
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| Everything is ok ?
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| Ray
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| Florida …. a wonder state !
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| Everything is ok
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| Tony
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| When did you decide to execute the first mission?
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| Ray
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| Saturday at night
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| Tony
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| After 3 days !!
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| Ray
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| This rascal shall return to his home around 7 p.m. with his guards every Saturday, then getting his office room in the first floor for an hour Next Saturday around 7.30 he shall bleed by shooting his head by Ray
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| Tony
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| I thought you shall kill him in his office
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| Ray
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| I found this is a very difficult
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| Getting away from the place after finishing the mission shall take time .
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| I planned for everything accurately
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| Tony
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| You're skillful in planning !
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| Ray
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| This Robin is living with his wife and one of his daughters in the house ....
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| Tony
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| I hope the mission won't be exceeded !
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| Ray
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| Won't exceed
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| Since I saw their photos … ..looked at their faces,
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| I become more ardent to kill them .
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| Especially the bold one
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| Tony
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| That bold shall leave the life next Saturday
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| Dissolve
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| Ext. – Robin's house - Night
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| - It consists of 4 floors
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| - House is very luxury
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| - A green area and plenty of trees
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| - Ray's car is far in the backside .
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| INT. - Robin's car - Night
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| - Mercedes car
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| - Robin is about 50 years old
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| - Bold, very Rich....
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| - Seating in the back seat
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| - His private guards in another car back him
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| - Driver drives the car
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| INT. Robin's house -an office room -Night
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| - Office room is rather dark
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| - Few light coming from out.
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| - Ray inside the office room
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| - Carrying a guns
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| - Looks from the window
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| - Getting out from the room careful
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| INT. –Robin 's house-Reception-Night
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| - Ray is hiding behind a column
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| - Suddenly, a light is turning on in the second floor.
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| - Gets attention …….. (Steady position to shoot. )
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| Ext. - Robin's house - Night
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| - Robin arrives
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| - Getting out from the car
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| - He walks to the house entrance
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| - Four guards around him
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| - Robin orders two guards, they stop, then enters with other two guards
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| Int. - Robin's house - Reception - Night
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| - Light turns on
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| - Robin enters to the office room with two guards
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| - Ray nears from the window
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| - Looks
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| - Seeing two guards outside
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| - Nears from the office room
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| - Pushing the door by his foot
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| - Ray shots a guard in his stomach.
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| - Rushing into the office room
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| INT. - Robin's house - an office room
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| - Ray shoots Robin's head
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| - With the other gun shooting the guard, but he didn't injury
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| - The guard shoots Ray
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| - Protecting himself through the door against shots
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| - Woman's voice screaming from the upper floor
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| - The guard is still alive beside the door
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| - Tries to get his gun
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| - Ray shots him while running, injuring his head
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| - Quickly shoots a guard who was coming from out, killing him at once
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| - Ray runs towards the house door
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| - A guard behind him but shoots the other guard who was coming from outside
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| - Ray runs to out
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| Ext. - Robin's House - Night
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| - A guard shoots
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| - Ray hides behind a tree but a bullet injuring him
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| - Steady to shoot
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| - Shooting from a far distance on that guard then injuring him in his hand
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| - Runs
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| - Putting his hand on his bleeding shoulder
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| - Drives his car with high speed
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| INT. - Ray's car - Night
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| - Ray bleeding from his right shoulder's injury
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| - He tries to overcome the pain
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| Ext. - Private hospital - Night
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| - Ray's car arrives to the hospital's entrance
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| Int. - Hospital – corridor
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| - A group of nurses
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| Ray
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| Where the Emergency room?
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| A nurse
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| The third room in the corridor end at right
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| A nurse
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| What happened to you?
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| Ray
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| Nothing serious
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| Int. - Emergency Room
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| - Ray enters
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| - Doctor refers to him to be lay down in a bed
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| - A nurse enters
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| The nurse
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| There's a child injured in his foot
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| Calls Doctor Steve?
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| The doctor
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| Quickly
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| - She gets out
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| - Doctor checks Ray's shoulder, making the necessary aid
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| The doctor
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| Your wound isn't easy
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| Is this shoot! Isn't it?
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| Ray
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| Yes
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| The doctor
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| How you could bear such hard pain?
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| Little people can bear pain such as you .
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| Last month, a man came to the hospital accompanied by his friend he was injured in his finger.
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| The screaming of this man was so loud, he couldn't bear such little injury it could hear his screaming from the end of the street!!
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| The bullet didn't penetrate your shoulder directly, but it made a large wound
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| Are you policeman?
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| Or someone shoot you?
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| Ray
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| - From Florida police
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| - The injured child enters with his grandmother and a nurse
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| - A child has about nine years, crying
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| The nurse
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| Bring the child here in the bed
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| - The bed beside Ray separated with a curtain
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| - Doctor Steve enters with two nurses
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| - Begin to make the necessary aid for the child
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| - Grandmother cries
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| The nurse
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| Be quite.. quite
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| He shall be fine
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| Doctor Steve
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| Check the child's pressure and quickly fetch oxygen
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| - the nurse drag the curtain that separating between Ray and the child
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| - But Ray can see the child's face
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| The doctor
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| Did you follow a criminal?
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| Ray
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| An murderer criminal
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| The doctor
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| This is too much cost paid by policemen
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| Ray
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| That is right
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| The doctor
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| You offer several sacrifices for us
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| (To the nurse) what about the child.. ?
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| The nurse
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| The child's grandmother says that he was playing in the garage, which is full of scrap and heavy objects that a piece of iron falls on his foot .
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| Ray
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| This is a very painful for a child in such age
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| The doctor
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| Do you feel better now?
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| Ray
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| Rather
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| The doctor
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| Check his pressure
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| Currently we don't need more that this
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| Some analgesic for pain after surgery.
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| Ray
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| Thank you
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| The doctor
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| Surely your pressure is lower
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| You bleed too much
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| The nurse
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| His blood pressure is really lower
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| The doctor
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| Remember that pain shall hurts you after 6 hours
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| But the wound has been cleaned
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| - Ray looks to the child through the separated curtain
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| The doctor
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| You should be in a rest today
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| - Ray tries to get up
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| - Feels pain
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| The doctor
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| To where?
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| Ray
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| I can't stay in the hospital
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| Thanks, anyway
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| The doctor
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| Why?
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| Your wound needs some care
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| Why you insist to go now?
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| Ray
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| I must go now
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| Believe me, I feel better, Thanks again
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| - Ray drags the separated curtain between him and the child
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| Ray ( to doctor Steve )
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| What about his wound ?
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| Doctor Steve
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| He shall improve at anyway
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| Ray
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| Are you his grandmother?
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| The grandmother
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| Yes
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| Ray
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| What's his name?
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| The grandmother
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| Anthony
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| Ray
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| A handsome and charm boy
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| Doctor Steve
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| Don't worry
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| He shall be recovered
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| This shall take times.....
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| The grandmother
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| How long?
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| Doctor Steve
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| About 10 days, maybe rather more
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| The grandmother
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| Should we come to hospital for another time?
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| Doctor Steve
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| No, nurse shall follow – up his wound in the house if you want so.....
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| The grandmother
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| Thank you
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| - Anthony crying but little
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| - Both Ray & Anthony looking to each other
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| Ray
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| Can I visit you in your house to see Anthony?
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| The grandmother
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| Of course, You are welcome. Our address is vatrim street 5087,Hilkhreew No,532
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| The doctor
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| I didn't know your name yet.
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| Ray
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| I'm Ray
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| The doctor
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| I'm doctor Alan, and this is my comrade doctor Steve.
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| - Ray looks to Anthony
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| Ray
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| Thank you.
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| - Getting out. Wound bandage on his shoulder.
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| Int. - Ray's apartment - Night
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| A luxury apartment
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| Ray is setting, drinks
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| - Before him a big photo on the wall for a beautiful blond woman, his lover Anne .
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| - A photo for Robin marked with red x, beside it, a photo for another man without x on the wall
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| - Beside Ray briefcase, bag full of money
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| - Looks to the other man's photo
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| - Puts the cup of Brandy
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| - Picks the gun up
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| - Aiming the gun towards the man's photo
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| Ray
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| Now is your turn
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| Did you prepare your coffin?
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| Ray's shot shall penetrate your head
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| Your life becomes just little days.
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| Your face is ugly!
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| Makes me furious like your dead friend!
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| Ext. - Anthony's house - Day
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| - Ray arrives in his car
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| - Without wound bandage
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| Int. - Anthony's Apartment - Day
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| - Knocking the door
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| - The grandmother opens
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| The grandmother
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| Welcome Mr. . Ray
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| Ray
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| Good morning
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| The grandmother
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| Please come in
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| - He enters
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| Ray
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| How is my friend Anthony now?
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| The grandmother
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| He's sleeping since two hours
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| Took analgesic then slept at once.
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| Ray
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| A boy full of vital and joy!
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| The grandmother
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| Would you like seeing him?
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| Ray
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| I come exactly for this purpose
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| The grandmother
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| With pleasure
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| - To Anthony's room, at right side of kitchen
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| - Opening the door
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| - Ray enters
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| Int. - Anthony's bedroom - Day
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| - Looks to the innocent child's face
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| - Gets out then gently closing the door
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| Int. - Hall
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| Ray
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| What about the pain?
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| The grandmother
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| Every day improves than before .
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| It was unforgettable day!
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| I didn't feel him when gone out then sneak into garage.
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| When I saw him screaming.. screaming and his foot full of blood
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| I wept also, Maybe I would faint
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| Ray
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| Anthony looks like me when I was his age
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| The grandmother
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| Really?!!
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| Are you recovered from your injury?
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| Ray
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| Rather
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| Are you live with Anthony alone?
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| The grandmother
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| His parent in a work in Swiss ….. they left him with me
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| I don't know what I can say to them when ask me!
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| Ray
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| Don't tell them anything.
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| Don't make them worry.
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| The grandmother
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| There's no doubt when they come back, I shall tell them
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| My temper doesn’t bear anymore!
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| I'm an old woman exceeded 75 years.
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| - Anthony's voice from his bedroom
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| Anthony
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| Grandma.. grandma
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| - Ray with the grandmother to the room
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| Int. - Anthony's bedroom
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| Anthony
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| Ray!... My friend..
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| Ray
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| My friend Anthony
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| Anthony
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| I'm very glad to see you
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| Ray
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| Do you feel any pain right now?
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| Anthony
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| Pain hurts me from time to another
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| But it isn't hard
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| Anthony
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| And you?
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| Is your shoulder hurts you?
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| Ray
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| Sometime
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| Such injury shall not make you play again in the garage
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| Anthony
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| I will not do it again
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| But you didn't tell me?
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| Ray
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| Tell you what?
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| Anthony
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| How your shoulder injured?
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| Ray
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| Is this important?
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| Anthony
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| I'd like to know
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| Ray
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| One of the murderer criminal shoot me
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| Anthony
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| Why?
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| Ray
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| I…
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| -The grandmother interrupt Ray
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| The grandmother
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| Do feel hungry Anthony?
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| Anthony
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| No, no
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| I don't feel hungry now
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| I want to drink water
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| - Ray pouring him a glass of water
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| - Grandmother looks to her watch
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| The grandmother
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| After half an hour you shall get a capsule of your medication
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| Its time after half an hour
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| Ray
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| Anthony, you look like me when I was in your age
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| Anthony
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| Am I ?
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| I'm glad to hear that my friend
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| Have a photo for you when you were a child to compare myself?
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| Int. - Florida police - corridor -Day
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| Neil from Florida police to the commissioner's office
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| Int. - Florida police -the commissioner's office
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| Neil gets in
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| Commissioner
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| Robin is the Ray's first victim
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| Neil
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| Maybe there's other victim or victims!
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| Commissioner
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| Everything was expected as there's who paying for that..!
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| Where's Albert?
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| Neil
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| I saw him parking his car
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| We shall do our best to arrest him
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| We have got several notifications from New York police confirming that he is in Florida
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| Time is very important
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| Commissioner
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| We're facing professional criminal and very intelligent
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| This made him in the list of the most wanted
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| - Searching some documents on the desk
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| All investigations, evidence and information from New York , it was assured that Ray has come to Florida for a murder as maybe crimes .
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| Neil
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| Exit intersection.. Airport.. Railway stations.. High ways under control!
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| - Albert from FBI enters
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| Commissioner
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| Is there new news?
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